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melodramah vs. N.D.eva
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no d/r no feeding no crew check in b4 u spit.. ill drop shortly after you |
im checkin..............ill drop within the next 20 minutes, k
good luck dawg...............................Holla! |
From Jellystone national, done hibernating in the dark//
Cos ‘Yogi’s’ battlin ‘Boo Boo’ its a picnic in the park // You couldn’t break a battle, like a constipated fart// Need some Imodium….. to give yourself a decent start// Yes now im blockin ya flow, like a beaver dams the river// Leaving your words beached, unable to deliver// Horses for courses, ill jump over your head// Hoof ya with my content and leave you lyrically dead// ‘Tweety pie’ mentioned your name that’s a fact// Then churped after that… ‘Taw, I taw, a ‘PUSSY’ cat’!……………………. |
com on you said ya was gonna drop after me, its been 20 minutes........hurry up......peace!
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my shits nice leavin u left slain , feelin used up like a crack addicts drained, bruised veins
u thinkin this girls insane, these men must be LETTING her hang, or else shes givin em all brains/ no shadiness goin on, i win by pure skill..this weak as battle, id have more a challenge battlin a rappin dr phil/ my 2nd battle against N.D.eva n im determined to succeed, thinkin hes real clever, usin excuses "i was too busy"... translation-"pussy" to "english" -means he been steady dodgin shit, tryin to stall my victory/ i hope u pray to God, but even his grace cant make you as ill as me/ Pun in yo sig brings the only respect to your name, too bad hes dead but even his presence is too small to elevate yo game/ like a rapist i dont care if ur willing or not, im taking my 7th win, all rules r off, to someoone w/ no conscience theres no such thing as an immortal sin/ |
Being as a girl... I don't know why the hell it happened but I had more of a emotion for N.D. It seems pretty authentic, but in a way.. This is why I'm fricken freaked out, is the fact that it was even cute. Besides that he used the words, in the Propper way. I'd still vote for N.D. As short as it may be. If you read my other posts, you'l know that I find words like "U" "Ur" A major turn off to the mind.
Flow: N.D Authentication: N.D Vocab:Tie Length:Melodrama Favorite use of words: N.D The punch down: N.D (He used less words, but used them well.) |
THis was a even battle
for da fact that one cat used not so many lines or words but had sum punches while the otehr had flow an mulites good battle i thought N deva won it Vote- ndeva http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85808 ^^^ hit this up honestly pc |
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yo i feel this was an ok battle---ndeva ya verse was weird actually, ya had flow but the disses were pretty weak----melo ya flow was ok, stucture was weak, but ya had the betta punches more personals--so vote=melo
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Sry 4 the freepost but melodramah why u duckin our battle man??u seen the links and in ur pms wats wrong wit u...............................
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what the hell u talkin bout... i got no pm's from you.. shyyyyyyyyyt, now quit freepostin in this shyttt |
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Punches: N
Flow: N Stretched: Mel Vocab: Mel Metas/Similes: Both Vote: N Fairly Close, Dont stretch ur lines M ANyway can boty you guys hit this up in return for this vote, thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86058 |
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^^^dont ever speak back to me again....battle me u herb ass fool illl merk u in 10 linez blind spitz, w.e u want
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yo melo took this wit harder punches and better flow. my vote goes to melo.
my vote=melo hit this wit a honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85999 |
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Harder shots from Melo...
They both need to work on directing punches some. But Melo had the harder stuff. Flow went to ND... That was nice, but real short. And... Lines like "Yogi/Boo-Boo" don't belong in battles! Stop that! Wordplay I'll give to Melo as well, but ya needed a touch more sprinkled throughtout, I felt. Still, I think ya got this through punches and direction and more brought to the table. Close, but Melo. Holla...Vote on this! |
This was a really close battle
Flow went to ND even though it was really short ND had punches but they were elementry Melo came harder with punches, multi's and wordplay Close battle but my vote goes to Melo hit this up w/ an honest vote please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86737 |
This was an OK battle. But I think melo got it coz of better punches and personals. Pretty hard to decide this one but I'm votin melo. I cant poll so get a mod to add this vote.
Vote melo |
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N.D.Eva had some filler in there and did not hit wit every line like melo.....ND had very weak punches and structure was just ok.
Melo Clearly Won this and any one who votes otherwise is a D/R He had better structure, flow and punches, I would like to see more multi's though my Vote-Melo |
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