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Born To Kill 10-16-03 12:11 PM

To the young bucks who think they can fuck...
 
It's alright, it's alright...
They just too young ta know.
Cuz all the heat that you receive...
Come from kids still livin at home.


So I'll show patience with them...
Cuz to not would be like a crime.
Can't go round squashing children...
Cuz they come up with better rhymes.

So I'll let them have their victories...
After all, they've earned them well.
I won't melt what they call freeze...
With the reality of life called hell.

They got their bills paid for...
Their life's served on silver platters.
No amount of talking will get through.
Cuz they think they can't get no phatter


But do they not know? Are they that dumb?
Can't they see that I'm where they fuckin came from?
I wasn't born 34, dumbasses, I used ta be young.
But time passes for all, no sands in air get hung.

Don't respect me or my rhymes, I don't need that props...
Try respecting where I'm at, the fact that I'm a pops.
Try and understand that I am your future reflection...
Ya'll all bound to be me cuz time don't hold perfection.

Maybe if I'd started young, maybe if the web was around...
I'd have raised internet hell with battle rhymes so sound.
But that wasn't my time, I'm now just borrowing yours...
And daily you lose your grip on this as ya grow less immature.

Tell me, young herbs...would you really be as good...
If ya mind was filled with baby and family...
And ya took care of em like ya should?


A bit of venting...

youngblood 10-16-03 12:16 PM

that was dope B2K...werd up.....

i really liked it man....u proving ur point.....

and thats what i like.....

whatever u do man....stay on RB....

fuck what peeps say....dont let no one

run u off homie......i respect u.......

and ur age aint got shit to do with it homie.....

dope peice.....

Don't respect me or my rhymes, I don't need that props...
Try respecting where I'm at, the fact that I'm a pops.

that stood out to me^^^^

props man.....<-------WeRd

hit minez up homie.....its like the 5th one down......

you'll see my name youngblood...lol..

yep..
pz....

Trah Siph 10-16-03 12:30 PM

that shit was good................enjoyed it..........

Not the best piece I've ever read but still, it was ill as fuck...........
good flow, vocab etc.........

VERDICT ON B2Kill-: ILL

Edicius 10-16-03 12:35 PM

I can fuck ....


Nice drop dawg...

concept ..was original...personal...dope...

Props...

WORD~PERFECT 10-16-03 12:39 PM

the point and expression was phenominol pop.
im glad we spoke and then i got to read this it allows me to understand your character and aprecite it as well.

Born To Kill 10-16-03 02:06 PM

Many props in return...

All of ya'll...

This shit right here...

The words each of ya'll just said.

Shows mutual respect and brotherhood.

And it shows more than anything, that we truly love the game and what it can mean more than our own egos.

It's the main fucking reason I come here.

I appreciate each and everyone of you that shares that view with me.

Like Young said, age don't matter when it's about respect.

And ya'll all earn it as I see it.

Thanks much for liking my rhyme.

Peace

HK The Great 10-16-03 02:56 PM

that was nice, i enjoyed it... finally read a new perspective of things, fuck structure for this one, u could feel this one, didnt need great vocab and skill or anything, it was just intense... kinda funny how im 18 ur 35 or whatever, and im tryin to give u Ups and shit... if it means something to u, it means a lot to me....
nice drop B2K

Born To Kill 10-16-03 05:23 PM

Thank you, HardKor3...

I don't care what the age...

I always appreciate peeps liking my shit.

Thank you for your props...

Means alot.

DiverseSyndicate 10-16-03 05:35 PM

this piece was ill, another tight piece comin out of houston, tha imagery was ill, tight vocab, i liked tha story, you had everything in tha right perspective, all in all i thyought this piece couldnt be improved anymore except i thought you couldve had some multis in there, other than that this piece was ill, keep droppin tha hot shit from them boys in H-Town.~1~

Herb Killa 10-16-03 05:35 PM

nice drop

damn u twice da age of me...u old

nah im fuckin wit chu nice drop

Born To Kill 10-16-03 05:39 PM

I know I'm old as sin, Herb Killa...

But, shit...

Everyone ends up my age if they lucky, though.

Yo, Syn...

Where in Houston?

I'm far west, Highway 6 and shit.

And thanks for ya props.

Many back.

Edicius 10-16-03 05:51 PM

I care about .^ hittin other ones shit up who hits urs up ..^^Werd

^^lol^^

Radical Minds hit that up BTK^^preciated

Accelerate 10-16-03 05:52 PM

Hmmm Your Drop Was Pretty Good.
Flow Was On Point, You Had Nice Structure
And Your Personal Shit Was Up There..
But!
You Can't Fuck With Me Still.

DiverseSyndicate 10-16-03 10:54 PM

Galleria area man,go further into houston past tha warehouse district, go to westheimer, get off on Fountain View then turn on Winsom and i live in some apartments on Winsom, check out some of my pieces by tha way, i got more pieces in poetic scriptures but i mainly do open mic.keep droppin that hot shit.~1~

Mr.Christensen 10-16-03 10:58 PM

i owe you this one
well i can see why you have to vent if half of this shit is true
all the aspects (flow, vocab...) were good an on point
i didnt like the parts that were in italics...kinds threw me off, i was expecting a hook of sorts

Born To Kill 10-17-03 09:10 AM

Responses:

Suicide Backwords...I will man, gimme a sec. No doubt.

S.Dot.Kiddz...I appreciate the visit, the peep, and the props. Despite our herbish little beef the other day, you alright. Thank you. If ya ever want that topical battle, you got it, my man. Ya sportsmanship in this thread was cool. Peace.

Diverse Syn: Damn, dog...before I hooked up with my wife and became the family guy, alot of my single life was right there. Outback Pub, fuckin around at D & B, Polyester's, Wild West, Centerfolds...all that shit. I lived on Beverly Hills, in the Beverly Palms and then across the street by the gun range. Small fuckin world, huh? I'll go peep some of ya stuff, man.

Realist: Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated. The italics were kinda like an inner voice, my "mature" side, I guess. Tellin myself ta chill the fuck out. Yeah, that shit's real. I think verses come out better if you've felt the experiences, ya know. Thanks for peeping it even if ya did it only cuz ya owed it. Peace, my man.

DiverseSyndicate 10-17-03 02:16 PM

real life man, i appreciate it.~1~

BOMBATOMIK 10-17-03 02:25 PM

THAT SHIT WAS PRETTY TIGHT. I'M IN MY LATE 20'S AND I FEEL THE SAME WAY ABOUT A LOT OF THE YOUNGER KIDS (NOT ALL) WE DIDN'T HAVE ALL THE OUTLETS AND TECHNOLOGY THAT TODAYS KIDS HAVE AT THEIR FINGERTIPS. ITS A WHOLE DIFFERENT WORLD NOW.

Born To Kill 10-17-03 05:56 PM

Word, Bomba...

I hear ya, my man...

Thanks for checkin my verse.

Appreciated.

Peace


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