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LM 10-16-03 12:30 PM

LM vs DAAARK
 
No d/r and all that shit
8 lines MAXIMUM
Don't take forever to spit
All votes must be explained
I spit first

Check in and then i'll spit ASAP

LM 10-16-03 12:32 PM

I wanna apologise for puttin his name wrong in the title. Sorry man. Anyways i'll drop my lines in a minute

LM 10-16-03 12:41 PM

Fuck it here's my verse:


This herb i'm battlein suffers from sexual deprivation/
That means both his dick and rhymes need elevatin/
He dont get no action so he has to masturbate/
You wont create some hate but you might cause a mass debate/
It's about whether you planned to hand me this win on a plate/
I use my record as bait, by takin it you've sealed your own fate/
You love every move i make, I can hear you scream "Yo L your great"/
As soon as this started your pride started to desintergrate/.



EXPLAINATIONS:
L=me
'I use my record as bait'=underestermated me coz of my record
'You love every move i make'=he looks up to me



Yes i know it was a bad endin, but shit happens

LM 10-16-03 12:55 PM

Hurry up and check in will ya................................................ .......................

DAARK 10-16-03 01:03 PM

*Chea*....U certainly 'hanged' me did'nt U LMAO!!! muhahahaha!!


Bitch nigga like ur style..allow me ta count backwardz fa U / 321 LM ya fuckin' "cross-dressin" dayz are done / in dis rap shyt.. I conquer "nationz" aight / blast tha left side of ya lyrical "brain" so U can make shytz "right" / LM's weak vocab gat me thinkin' he don't warrant ma full force / spittin' bullshyt like dat imma make dis closet fag feel remorse...peep tha "source" / nigga U acceptin ma challenge brought me pure laughta' / but on tha flip side lemme attached dis 'scope' so I can make it a closed CHAPTER /



Bitch nigga U weak......get ya game up..I did'nt even use no real force on U....MUHAHAHAHAAAAAA!!....trick

DAARK 10-16-03 01:05 PM

aye...I had 8 lines....but tha thread expanded so go figure lol...........hmmmm......** awaits obvious win fa me **

LM 10-16-03 01:06 PM

For starters you accepted my challenge dum ass. Anyway uppin for votes.........................................

DAARK 10-16-03 01:12 PM

ain't U jus' a stupid ass FUCKER from jolly ole England??...don't be stupid.....STUPID!!!.......U made an open invite...and I challenged U...and U accepted STUPID FUCK!!...next time don't be so technical..asswipe!!!...nah shut ya 'grille' homo........

LM 10-16-03 01:25 PM

Can we get some votes on this please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!

LM 10-16-03 01:51 PM

Uppin for the third time.............................................. ...........................C'mon dont sleep on this

DAARK 10-16-03 01:58 PM

'mayne'....why U itchin' fa ur sixth lost lol......homeboi probably paronoid while eatin' his English 'Rich' tea cookies.....hehehehe.....anyhow UPPIN FA VOTEZ......FUCK!!!

Emerge 10-16-03 02:01 PM

ait dogs good battle and i will post and poll after u guys do that shit for my battle

u got to pay ure dues to get them back and shit anyway nice battle not one sided at all but not exatly to the thread neither

hit this up for a honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5245#post845245

peac

LM 10-16-03 02:01 PM

Do you ever shut the fuck up. The fact that i'm english dont mean shit.............................................. ...................................

Emerge 10-16-03 02:10 PM

arlright LM took this even though he is a white englishman lol just kidding anyway he beat this fu not totally easily
but better punches not played
his first bar actually rhymed and that other fus didnt!
better vocab usage
more wordplay
thats about it i reckon

peace

KingOfKings 10-16-03 02:14 PM

1:........ who the fuck laughs like muahhahahah?????/ are u Dr. Evil or something???
2: Daark talk all that shit and lost

structure = lm
punches = lm
flow = lm
wordplay = lm

vote = lm

both of u need serious elevation tho

hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84033

LM 10-16-03 02:16 PM

Thanks for the vote. I really apreciate it.
*index finger goes up to DAARK*

Peace!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!

Yu Bin SunD 10-16-03 02:35 PM

wack battle both need vocabulary and need punches but Lm took this his verse was hotter overalll hollaz

LM 10-16-03 02:38 PM

Thanks for the vote. Maybe when DAARK see's this then he'll shut his mouth. He needs to!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hahahahahaha

LM 10-16-03 02:45 PM

Uppin for votes for the fourth time.............................................. ......................................

LM 10-16-03 03:05 PM

Last uppin. Can we get this battle finished please..........................................C' mon people vote


Peace!!!

DAARK 10-16-03 03:19 PM

FUCK all yawl......it'z obvious certain hoes get preference....maybe cos dis lil LM slut nigga sucked yawl dickz in another post yawl returnin tha favour......I know I won dat....bitch ass niggaz I kilt that 'brit shit' no doubt but hey......FUCK IT!!!

LM 10-16-03 03:23 PM

Face it DAARK. Your losin and dont go round accussin everyone of d/r. Your a fuckin sore loser. It's funny that ya talked so much shit and still lost. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA FUCK YOU DAARK

LM 10-16-03 03:44 PM

I think DAARK has finaly got lost for words. He might stop bitchin now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

HK The Great 10-16-03 03:49 PM

LM got this he didnt do great but he did good enuff to beat Daark, u both could use some elevation, and shit... vote LM

LM 10-16-03 03:54 PM

Thanks for the vote. Even if you cant put it on the poll. I apreciate it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Peace!!!

LM 10-16-03 04:24 PM

Yes I think DAARK has finaly stopped his bitchin........................................... ...............................It's bout time too!

LM 10-16-03 05:11 PM

I cant believe that little bastard accussed everyone of d/r................................................. ...............................

DAARK 10-16-03 05:17 PM

** walkz in thread......pimp slapz tha FUCK outta LM **.....politely walkz back out whistlin'.........>>

cutastraphe 10-16-03 05:26 PM

well both verse sucked ass--either way LM ya flow was ok, ya disses were aight-but not hard at all--good opener though just work on ya style--daark ya flow was aight, seemed like ya tried to have sum multis' but it really didn't work that well, and ya disses were weak as well--i didn't see any good personals in both verses---overall i'm gonna have to go with LM on this i felt he took a betta approach to the battle---vote=LM

LM 10-16-03 05:27 PM

DAARK you cant even reach me, never mind slap me. The verses prove your not on the same level as me......................................

Dimez 10-16-03 07:42 PM

LMThis herb i'm battlein suffers from sexual deprivation/
That means both his dick and rhymes need elevatin/
He dont get no action so he has to masturbate/
^ BEAUTIFLLL LMAO
You wont create some hate but you might cause a mass debate/
It's about whether you planned to hand me this win on a plate/
OH NOOOO!!!!!
I use my record as bait, by takin it you've sealed your own fate/
You love every move i make, I can hear you scream "Yo L your great"/
As soon as this started your pride started to desintergrate/
^ umm I dont like it cuz u did 2 barz then a half bar....
6/0

overall

.................................................. .................................................. .....
DAARK

Bitch nigga like ur style..allow me ta count backwardz fa U / 321 LM ya fuckin' "cross-dressin" dayz are done / in dis rap shyt.. I conquer "nationz" aight / blast tha left side of ya lyrical "brain" so U can make shytz "right" / LM's weak vocab gat me thinkin' he don't warrant ma full force / spittin' bullshyt like dat imma make dis closet fag feel remorse...peep tha "source" / nigga U acceptin ma challenge brought me pure laughta' / but on tha flip side lemme attached dis 'scope' so I can make it a closed CHAPTER /


^ ok u seriously need to work on sturucture and everything else there is to work on, u have some good disses but the style just made me wanna go to another page and read sumthin better u kno... not hatin' jus ststin'

vote=LM


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