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HiT'PaNiK vs. Kost
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Post By Tonite no crew - dr- bla bla bla just no bullshit some explinations please on votin word |
Verse Gettin Posted Soon up
~Checkin In~ |
Look, Man your shit is bogus||1
I can't believe you thought it was hot when you wrote it||2 Your flow is weaker than an infant with osteoporosis||3 So without further notice~I'm a leave you properly toasted on a Mic cause you aint worthy to hold it||4 Understand dog you just can't rap here||5 You're gay.... and I done tested more pussy than a papsmear||5 Even over the internet the whores in your fam gonna let a brother score||6 I UPLOAD my dick and give HARD DRIVES to your MOTHER's BOARD||7 Thats why Im the guy your little sister looks like||8 I know you had to be wondering why she doesn't look white||9 Well that answers your questions~I'll eat you in one session, then so for seconds before indigestion gets time to set in||10 ~1 |
one suggestion - neva fuck with this kid who can spit quick
and spit lines that turn timbaland into a toothpick i got this greed for whack mc's - some would call it a glutton so to succeed my needs i just HiT the 'PaNik button now thats the punch ---- so start takin notes cuz i got more lines then an 8 ball of coke your a clown - your a joke - a newbie with no hope your verses get rejected - like that shit you just wrote battling me? -- -- -- damn bitch you must be jokin cuz im the lord of voting rings just like J.R Tolken |
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Kost
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^ Good Line LMAO!!!!! Quote:
^ BURN! aight Hipnatik Quote:
^ Oh no! Quote:
I dont like ur barz and hypens and numbering.. but if u fix that then it would be mch better well my vote goes to Hipnatik.... Kost u came hard but next time use more metaz and wordplay.. |
woops well I meant Hit Panki My Bad
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opener:tie
closer:kost wordplay:hit panik punches:tie structure:kost overall:kost nice battle y'all, but that was my breakdown of things |
aight--hitpanik ya had a good flow, good structure, couple aight punches kinda creative---kost ya had a ok flow, couple aight disses, ok structure, overall not hard enuff punches or flow to beat histpanik here--vote=hitpanik
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I'll vote on this after ya's vote on this:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86304 A favour for a favour. Drop an honest vote |
HiT'PaNiK
god punches and wordplay + fun ta read best line----v Thats why Im the guy your little sister looks like||8 I know you had to be wondering why she doesn't look white||9 kost good flow and wordplay + ok mult and metts but weaker punches best line----v one suggestion - neva fuck with this kid who can spit quick and spit lines that turn timbaland into a toothpick overall vote = HiT'PaNiK |
uppin fo votes
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Got Dammit Vote Please Peeps
Uppin this shit NOW~~~~~ |
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breakdown:
Flow and structure:kost Punches and personals and wordplay;hit Overall:hit panic could ya hit this up cos it's bein slept on like a mattress http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86677 thanx....honest vote a breakdown appreciated |
sorry, forgot to poll vote........................
could ya hit this up cos it's bein slept on like a mattress http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86677 thanx....honest vote a breakdown appreciated |
i think hit panik got this one.......
with much better wordplay....better flow...... and more wittier punches also....... kost most of ur shit was played.....and...... u didnt stay consistent throughout ur verse....... so my vote goes to Hit Panik.....for a overall better verse...... yep.. pz.... ->Je@!<- |
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