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iceman vs cold souljah
aight nigga 5-6 bars. check in and spit
no crew vote no hate vote no d/r no swaying for votes explain votes. holla.................................... |
oh shit my bad i havent been on in a while. ill spit tomorrow aight?............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ...........................................
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yeah thats cool my nigga.
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how the fuck u uppin for me to spit nigga your spittin first cuz. in the bitch slapped thread i made i had that shit in bold print it said u spit first. nigga if u aint gonna spit first just forget this shit. dont agree to a battle and then not follow the rules.
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my bad here goes
ay vanilla get the fuck outta that gay ass trance- you're no man, you dont got a shirt on let alone pants- ya got 2 wins cuz ya battle faggots- playa?krucial? lyrics, they severely lag it- just cuz you beat them your spirit uplifted?- well its christmas time when you're truly gifted- with this verse ima make yo record even- 2 wins are the only wins ya achievein- and i know you got rejected to a another rap site- you're too wack, dont even know how to dap right- ima finish you off with some advice- ya too nice, go back to the fridge and refrigerate ya ice- dont feed drop in the next 20 mins |
yo here goes my verse nigga
im sorry nigga someone should have told ya... ice froze dis nigga now he known as the cold souljah... his punches wouldnt be sick if they was injected wit antrax... this nigga is a homo he rides dick and hairy nut sacks... this nigga has no home his real family is the ku klux klan... faggot i'll make u "rollover" more times than a verizon phone plan... youre like evander holyfield your played all your punches miss... they named a thread after u....its called emergancy whackness... you were 2-0 but you've just suffered yo first defeat... cuz u prostitute on a corner now u think u run the streetz... you suck your rhymes wouldnt be wet if u spit in the rain... this battle is over so go back to beatin off to pics of mary~jane... |
Wordplay- Iceman was more clever
Punches- Iceman's punches hit harder (lol @ verizon line) Multies- Neither Metas- Iceman Personals- Iceman had better disses That was a close battle but Iceman took this one. Coldsouljah didn't make sense with "lag it" and "dap right" But keep posting and you'll definitely elevate Vote- Iceman |
Disses- Ice Man
WordPlay- Ice Man Effort- cold soulja Flow- Ice Man Overall- Ice Man Nice try Cold Soulja. I thought you would make it close. Guess not. And to Ice Man. Keep up da good work dogg. I mite battle you sometime. |
punchlines...........Ice
wordplay............Ice multies..............niether metaphors.........Ice similes................Ice vote..................Ice Ice juss had a better verse, over all. Ice I cant poll, but please hit this up honest in return for the Feedback, good luck both of you. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86394 |
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short battle......soljah could have come betta but----
punches=ice......jus harder and clearer flow=ice.....not bad at all metas=soljah..more effort originality=ice personals=ice...not a lot tho overall=ice make sure ya hit this up........cheers http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86383 |
decent battle between u two....although Ice had this in every category besides flow....lol.....it was a pretty good read.....here's a breakdown for u two...
Multis - Cold Metas - Ice Vocab - Ice Flow - Cold Punches - Ice Personals - Ice Violence - Tie Wordplay - Ice Creativity - Ice Complexity - Ice RhymeScheme - Ice Ice - 8 out of 11 Cold - 2 out of 11 Tie - 1 out of 11 Overall - Ice....pretty one-sided.... peace 4:20 |
oh my bad i forgot to post what you need to know
ya got 2 wins cuz ya battle faggots- playa?krucial? lyrics, they severely lag it- ^^^^^^ check his sig, he battled playa and kru-cial they really sucked-- Lyrics they severely lag it and i know you got rejected to a another rap site- ^^^^^ check his post history, he wanted to see a crew battle but the guys didnt want to give him the link. you're too wack, dont even know how to dap right- ^^^^^ dap means to respect or thanx its slang, he didnt respect the guys so they didnt give him the link |
Wordplay - Iceman
Punches - Iceman Personals - Iceman Flow - Neither were really to on point with the flow Multis - None Metas - Iceman Creativity - Neither Enjoyment - Iceman Cold, you need to learn how to integrate multi's and wordplay into your verse. You'll never get votes if all your punches are basic with no wordplay. Multi's help the flow and enjoyability of the read a lot too. Iceman, you also need to integrate multi's....your structure was nice, but the flow was extremely choppy. I like that you're using wordplay, but almost all your punches were played. Try and be a little more creative next time. Vote ~ Iceman |
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HIT dis and ill return the favor iight
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2 |
short battle......soljah could have come betta but----
punches=ice......jus harder and clearer flow=ice.....not bad at all metas=soljah..more effort originality=ice personals=ice...not a lot tho overall=ice |
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