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Deva VS. RavenousButcher
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i'm checkin in, but wont need two hours
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My record was 3-3, half an hour before, to the minute//
Should have battled ‘Rav’ for all, would be 6-0 with 1 imm-inent// Like shadows in the night you distort and try to fright// Then I turn on the bulbs, flood ya space with me-ta-pho-ric light// Like an Indian medicine man, I’ma bout to free your mind// Send ya to the other side, with ya own kind, deaf, dumb and blind// This aint your vocation, dun jumped the line before ya makin// Get back over the fence from WORTH IT to STOP TRYING YA FAKIN// No good tryin to ban me, cos I don’t cheat in this RB// Leavin ‘Ravenous’ hungry, cos aint never gonna stomach this MC// Pretend you’re the ‘butcher’ and I’m the razor sharp knife// Without me your useless, no more carving ya blunt for life// No my name isn’t a woman’s, so don’t make that mistake// Still gonna murk RavenousButcher leave him pissing in his quake// This crazy kid thinks he can really give some decent spit// The only way he does that, is cos he’s got a fuckin lithsspp!……… |
To all you little battlers, i'm hoping that you learn from this,
And witness how i turn this bitch,to buckets full of sperm and piss, I noticed that you studied, I cot you copying my literature, You stroke and rub my style, steady jacking off my signature, (check below) Deva? or DEEVA? actually your neither, I'm hotter than the fever, turn your doc into a believer, You tossed me what you could,and then i gave it to the stands, Then the second that you loose,like the CUBS"you blame the fans, Your a like child at a punk show ,lost in the Mosh, And when I crush your bones, there used for stock in a Broth, So quite re-using what i said because makes you look so pitifull, I knew i smelt a "HERB" and i don't need no anti-Hismanol You typed your verse, it wasnt dope, i wonder what the fuck your strutting for? Listen i'm "the Butcher"your the turkey on the cutting board, And when i'm finished my career you'll catch my name up in the "hall of fame" I put this punk to shame ,and dragged his carcuss like a ball and chain, |
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Close Battle.Both Were Equal With The Punches And Metas But Im Goin To Go With Ravenous.His Verse Was A Bit More Comeplex.
Vote-RavenousButcher |
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ok very close battle but if i had to choose:
punches- same flow- same structer- ravenous overall- ravenous |
have to say now deva spat some good lines
"Like shadows in the night you distort and try to fright// Then I turn on the bulbs, flood ya space with me-ta-pho-ric light//" clearly put a lot of effort into his verse "No good tryin to ban me, cos I don’t cheat in this RB// Leavin ‘Ravenous’ hungry, cos aint never gonna stomach this MC// " was real impressed by the way he predicted what butcher was gonna use gainst him "No my name isn’t a woman’s, so don’t make that mistake// " ending was ok Ravenous i think lost track of his flow a few times that n the lines i qouted from deva makes me give him the vote vote=deva http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85024 |
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pretty good battle boucher came damn good for a newbie and shit yo it was pretty close in my eyes
ill have to say deva won this though barely closer-deva opener-boucher vocab-deva punches-tie personals-tie wordaplay-tie overal-deva... yo boucher keep spittin elevate and u will be tight peace,............ oh yeah please hit up my battle with honest vote its hard gettin good honest votes on this shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86226 peace |
Ravenous Butcher took this one for sure
all of his punches hit, whereas Deva's were lacking for the most part, although some were alright....Ravenous also had nice mutleis and an easy to follow flow. Vote Ravenous(i can't poll yet though) Also i need votes on the battles in my sig so if anyone could help out on getting those finished that would be dope. |
yo this was a good battle really even in most all categories punches were even flow was even but i felt deva was bit more complex with his vocab so deva gets the vote
yo hit this up w/ a vote deva i think you forgot to poll vote on this shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86737 |
how bout alll u niggas go vote on my shit
n then wont somebody come n battle me so i can lite they ass up cuz yall niggas need to read my shit hard legendary mc vs quise_baby vote on dat shit __________________ MATTIC |
Deva came strong but Ravenous Butcher came even harder.
Raven- Props to you on that Cubs line lol that was funny shit |
hmmm...breakdown:
personalz: Tie punchez: Rav Butcher flow: Tie vocab: Deva opener: Rav closer: Deva creativity: Deva Overall: Deva damn close battle though... |
Just uppin this. Could you blame me? Can' let this go down the tube. And by the way. Cool rhymes Devy. ^.~ Teach me sometime later.
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yo deva took this with betterpunches, flow and originality - punches just hit way harder, but good battle though
vote - deva |
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