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Aprentice² 10-19-03 12:38 PM

APRENTICE vs Brixton
 
iight doggs here the rules
10-12 lines
no d/r
no freepostin
no hate votes!!
no swayinn votes
Blind spits
no newbish votes!!!

Aprentice² 10-19-03 02:14 PM

Come on man finish up 1 of ur battles and step in here so i can spit sum shit 4 reall !.................................................

Aprentice² 10-20-03 07:34 PM

WHENEVA U READY WIT UR OTHA BATTLES STEP IN HERE IIGHT WE GOT SHIT TO DO HOMIE............................................. ............

-ElocuShun- 10-20-03 07:36 PM

aight this is ma chek in but post an honest vote on this and then i'll spit ma ten lines pz................................................ .................


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4656#post854656

Aprentice² 10-20-03 07:42 PM

IIGT DAWGS GET TO KEYIN AND SHIT IMA GO DO MY ENGLISH THEN HIT THIS UP WIT SUM SHITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

-ElocuShun- 10-20-03 08:00 PM

This is a ten line keystyle....................no prewrittens.........listen


This Kid Can't Battle Alone,Be Needing Help From An Apprentice,
Be Wak To The Dried Bone,So Ima Drill N Fill Him Like A Dentst.
Mohegan Ganstah...More Like Middle-Aged Pranster,Thanx-Ta,
The Fact That I'm Rollin This Bitch Away Like A Wheel To A Hampster.
17 Fukin Wins And The Best Worth Mentionin Is The Wakest Of C-Drama?,
Shit!!!....Your Punches Dont Damage They Embrace Peeps Like Kalma.
So Wot R Ya A Muslim Now?...Prayin For Peace On A Martyres Vow,
Coz Ya Only Blowing Yaself Out...So Fuck Allah And Scream Holy Cow!!!
"Only Gettin Better",Please Bitch...The Only Thing Improved Is Ya Nervous Twitch,
This Bitch Spaz's Out When I Spit...Jus Glad This Merkin Went Without A Hitch.

THINGS TO KNOW

*Mohegan gangstah=location
*C-Drama is on meked list in his sig
*Kalma=Nice way of living/friendly
*Martyres=blow themselves up for allah
"only gettin better"=avater

Aprentice² 10-20-03 08:22 PM

I seriously dont like u: MERKED

START IT OFF:
Brixton's structure wit no punches, is played and worthlessS/
fuck This HIV fag, stop this Herb from Infectin Versus/(HIV)

The brave 99.9, got blessed... wit hystemines, merkin quite dirtbags...like i had a list serene/
Burstin thru the greedy and green like LISTERENE/(listerene kills 99.9 percent germs)

META TIME:

My radar merks the exclusive, if u inside my punches, i hurt the intrusive/
Blowin up your mental safehouse, effect leavin ur brix polyglusive/
(Polyglusive:having no form, splattered)

FUCK HIV , fuck Brix and fuck ur life/
this Soft bitch dont wanna battle, more scared of Blood then Majix wife/(MAJIC JOHNSON)

Damn BRixton.....your really hard to respect, battlin me and vets,.. has really charred your rec/
Now like Nikes BITCH ILL HAVE U CHARGED 4 the check/

ViciousThoughts 10-20-03 08:27 PM

Ok I won't poll vote since I'm not alloud but apprentice tht was the whackest shit I have ever fuckin read in my entire life...

Structure was whack as hell
Flow was fucked up because of your structure
Punches were weak I mean come on... :\

"FUCK HIV , fuck Brix and fuck ur life/
this Soft bitch dont wanna battle, more scared of Blood then Majix wife/(MAJIC JOHNSON)"

That wasn't funny nor was it a good punch Brixton took this in fucken every way

Aprentice² 10-20-03 08:29 PM

YO D/r dont ever freepost in ma thread again.............ur in his crew what am i expectin u to vote 4 me???no u faggot bgone and dont post in ma shit again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UPPIN 4 real votes

ViciousThoughts 10-20-03 08:40 PM

well all the votes you'll get will probably be like mine and yea he's in my crew but I don't even know him and record's dont mean shit so I could care less if he won or lost

Young P 10-20-03 08:52 PM

I Thought Apprentice Took Dis...
I Personally Liked His Punches And Style Betta...
Some Lines Were Wack...
But He Stayed Pretty Consistent...
Vote-Apprentice2
Holla...
Peep My Battle Vs Carson jet...

Aprentice² 10-21-03 06:51 AM

IIGHT YALL Lets get some votes here .................................................. ...UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN 4 Votes

ålphå bë† 10-21-03 09:34 AM

Close Battle But Id Say Brixton Took This.They Both Had They're Equal Share Of Weak Lines But Some Of Brixtons Punches Were Stronger.Aprentice's Flow Was Off Also.

Vote-Brixton

Yu Bin SunD 10-21-03 10:55 AM

Nice Battle Both had Good Verses But Brix's Structure and Overall Verse was Better Because Punches Were Easier to Understand
Vote=Brixton

Please Vote for My Battle

Dev 10-21-03 01:38 PM

thought this was a good battle , heres the breakdown

multis=brix
vocab=apprentice
structure=brix
vocab=tie
creativity=brix
punches=definately brix
vote=brix.........i'll poll soon as possible
im most respects, brix had an all round stronger harder hittin verse....peace to both of ya!......
could you both hit these up plz......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86229
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86349

Token 10-21-03 02:29 PM

Cant Vote But I'll Drop Feedback Since Aprentice Might Join Crew
I think he took it wit better flow and harder hitting punches

just my opinion

Feeble Minded 10-21-03 02:30 PM

aprentice - thats 4 ups. u get one more, if u post after that you lose . whyd u report urself in i.r.? thats not smart . @@@@@ and no, there arent any freeposts but urs to clean.

-ElocuShun- 10-21-03 03:37 PM

uppin............................................
1st...............................................
uppin............................................

LM 10-21-03 05:15 PM

Yo I cant poll so you'll have to get chrit or someone to add this vote.
I'm votin Brix coz of the punches. The rest of the battle I thought was pretty even so the punches won it in the end.
Sorry I cant poll (stupid fuckin AOL)

Vote Brix

Not Polled... Explain Your Vote Better
-Axe

Born To Kill 10-21-03 05:24 PM

Sorry, but Brix did take this with the punches and the much more readable format...

Complexity and Vocab are really the only two catagories I can give to Aprentice...

Punches, Wordplay, Flow, Opener and Closer all go to Brix...

There ya go...

Holla back...

Born vs. Youngblood

Cryptic Thoughts 10-21-03 05:25 PM

[i]Brix takes this.
Not great from either emcee but Brix takes is with slightly better punches in this one.

Pee my battles against
Acidic
Cryptic Assasin

X Ecution 10-21-03 05:26 PM

Close Battle But Id Say Brixton Took This.They Both Had They're Equal Share Of Weak Lines But Some Of Brixtons Punches Were Stronger.Aprentice's Flow Was Off Also. not a great battle.......1

Vote-Brixton


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