aprenticekid15 vs. OnslaughtWarBuX
 

aight its up now im checking in

CHECKCHECKCHECKIN INNNNNNN SPIT /.................................................. .........................................

rules are no friend votes and 10-16 lines............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........

u spit first aight............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....................

WHAT KINDA HERB are you...u called put either u spit first or we spit at the same time now hurry up kid ur wastin ma time

aight faget we spit at same time...

i dont think u ready but hold steady ill chop ur face and make u wear a banda like nelly/
just pass me my machette to chop this bitchs belly/
i have ur ass looking like meatballs spegetti/
and never ever call me a herb cuase ill kill u and leave u in the lower class suburbs/
what are you absurd stay to selling crack on ur curb/
or selling marajunna plz dog ill make u a gonner/
im a man with honor and full body armor/
and ill blow up ur house like a sucide bomber/

Aight peace Onslaught Army

i never should have responded to this thread....i dont even feel like spittin....ima try to get this closed

dont be a wus spit whats wrong?............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............

^^^^AIIGHt man w.e ill fucken freestyle a lil shit betta then that why not...............................................

ok man w.e...im not even gonna try

your 0-0 and lookin 4 me, your still a teethin MCee/
surroundin organismz freeze, when this fresh breeze to mcees breathes/

Ap spit thuganometry, merkin squared herbs like herbology/
worst spit ever, fuck it im not slowin down 4 apologies/

venomus fangs leave this cowards head spinin/
fuck u this the on slaughts beginin, wizardous punches, leavin ya atoms dead splittin/

Ur verse laughed at, looks as if, u made it in haste AINT YA(z)/
mine crafted to rape his tight end, like 83 on playmakaz/

aight peps start voting lets get it goingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg gggggggggggg...................................... .................................................. .................................................. ............

punches...........apprentice
flow............apprentice
structure..........apprentice
everything else..........apprentice

vote............apprencite
apprentice i dont get y u didnt wana do this, its an easey win..........anyway sorry I cant poll, but please hit this slepped batte up, thanks ide appreciate an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86410

i dont wanna be classified as someone who battles peeps who are garbage so he can get his win total up

Ic good point

WEll can u at least hit this up honest for the feedback I gave u

Nice spit dawg

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86410

i am gonna keep it short and sweet, aint no need for a breakdown, all categories go to aprentice, it was an all round better drop.................the other kid needs to elevate sum......peace to both of ya!

^ Other Kids Needs To Elevate?
Both Kats Do..Tho Apprentice Got
Dis...

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UPPIN 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NU MBA !\11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111vote sssssssss

aprentice kid got this wit harder punches and better flow and structure. this was a blowout.

my vote=aprentice

hit this wit a honest vote

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=85999

Aprenticekid got Onslaught in all the categories. Onslaught has alot to learn about wordplay, punches, metas and multies...stay active Onslaught you'll elevate.

Vote- aprenticekid

Return the favor please vote on this please I just need one more vote-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86384

thx DS

UPPIN NUMBA 222222222222 on this battle shit
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LMGDMFAO!!!! Damn..... Aprentice, u got this by a fuckin longshot. U got him by every category. Goddamn.... lol. Im sorry Onslaught but u need to elevate a lot... but at least u were better than Lil Crane b4 he got banned.... but otha than that... VOTE: aprenticekid15

onslaught took it wit

punches
flow
metas
consistancy
personals
wordplay
and a overall better verse

oopps i meant to say aprentice not onslaught

yo yo i hit u off with somthing weak thanx for the comments..

Yo from the gran manzana to the east bahamas/
ima have more worshipers then the dalelama/
and if u want drama met me manana/
but make sure u wanna cause it might be that marajunna/
that makes you a gonner ill slap u w/ a guaitar as if i was carlos santana

I might be a rookie in these fourms but I knida think onslaughtwarbux won but it doesn't matter what I think until I get 100 posts

^^MAN WTF ARE U DOIN U FUCKIN NEWBIE....AND OMEGA ITS COOL WHEN U GET THOSE POSTS THEN U CAN DO WHAT U WANT TO>....LETS GET SOME REAL!! VOTES NOW

punches-aprentice
flow-aprentice
structure-aprentice
less filler-aprentice
actually battle verse-aprentice


onslaught had imbeds(inner multies) and nothin' else while aprentice had punches but they were whack...

vote-aprentice

Now return the favor aprenticeor warbux
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

aprentice merked this kid...nice try noob, stay at it and keep elevating..PEACE

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86435

well said aprentice........vote to u in every category......no need for breakdown...cuz easy win for aprentice

WELL IM FEELIN the feedback its just that like 3 peeps forgot to poll their vote could u plz UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

Apprentice took this on punches, flow, structure...oh wait he took it on everythin. And why did ya's say 10-16 lines coz neither of ya's even did 10. That dont matter tho.

Vote Apprentice