Jus-10 vs. Onslaught-X
 

Rules:
No biting
No pre-written
No crew votes
10-20 lines
time is 1 hour
you spit 1st

aight i had mine on the other ill just paste it here

ayo im a freestyling daredevil
let me lower my skills to take it down to your level
its like scareface time to meet my little friend
man your name descibes you your jus 10
well im a 20 and ima put your career to an end
and cant wait thats right u a light weight
well im new and ill shock u like fraklins key on the kite
u in front of your comp a-waiting the result
well ill come through the screen and pop u with my colt
oh shit being near you i take it as an insult
sorry i gotta do this ill kill u and your friends with ten thosands volts
i didnt have to but u just meet onslaught
u fucking with xavior i cant be fought

shit i was on my friends account well thats mine your turn .................................................. ...............................................

yo it your turn jus 10................................................ .................................................. ............

man i guess i won u gonna fucking write something come on already check in my thing been up here for soo long man

Sorry dogg I just got back. This is my check in...
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Look at this guy's skills and tell me he will last
I'll have him under more pressure than pertoleum gas
He signs up to RB and uses the name Onslought-X
You'll soon be extinct dogg so rename yourself T-Rex
This bitch comes on here and thinks he calls the shots
If Alldig was lookin' for herbs he'd fill all the slots
Just like under your name it says you're "new to RB"
If u get enough posts u should change it to "a whack mc"
I looked at your profile and saw that you're only 14
Meanin' u live wit' ur mom and have a supervisory routine
I'll keep my vocab basic so even you can understand
You need to expand, take notice I have the upper hand
Okay man it's over u can wipe the sweat off ur brow
I never knew what it was like to eat an mc, until now

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decent battle...Jus 10 had better vocabulary, punches, and personals.....u both were decent with flow....and Jus 10 got this with complexity and creativity....sorry Onslaught....nice try man...no hate...just a vote....

1 More Vote Need:
Smoka vs. Anthro

peace
4:20

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Why the hell do I need 100+ posts to vote............ its so unfair I NEEEEED to vote on some of these battles

jus 10 took this wit better flow punches and creativity. onslaught try and elevate a lil bit and u will be sweet.

my vote=jus10

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it was a weak battle not good at all
10 took this though cuz he showed more skills
more personals punches and more creative
peace

oh yea hit up my battle wit honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86226

peace

I agree that this battle was weak but I didn't have too much time dogg. Anyways, still uppin (3)............................................... ...........

yo i give this to JUS 10 with better punches and creativity. onslaught started off strong but by the end is verse died and was weak.

onslautghts best punch
its like scareface time to meet my little friend
man your name descibes you your jus 10

jus10's best punch
He signs up to RB and uses the name Onslought-X
You'll soon be extinct dogg so rename yourself T-Rex

nice battle....if this shit is still goin i'll come back when i have like 11 or mo posts...

my vote: JUS-10

yo hit these up people when ya get a chance, im tryin to get these over with so i can get some new shit goin. aiight thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85646

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84560

hmm--onslaught ya had an ok flow, ok structure, not real hard punches though---jus-10 ya had an aight flow, ok structure, just a little harder on the punch-tip--vot=jus-10

jus go peep my battle with onsalught too it's in my sig 2nd one and vote--vote on the one with necrid rd 2 if ya want thanx-----oneee

vote ill probably lose but i dont want a battle floating around so vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111

yeah jus waz betta all round no hate

plz vote on da battlez in ma sig plz

[QUOTE]Originally posted by jego
[B]yo i give this to JUS 10 with better punches and creativity. onslaught started off strong but by the end is verse died and was weak.

onslautghts best punch
its like scareface time to meet my little friend
man your name descibes you your jus 10

jus10's best punch
He signs up to RB and uses the name Onslought-X
You'll soon be extinct dogg so rename yourself T-Rex

my vote: JUS-10