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Brotha Lynch 10-20-03 12:59 AM

Remixed Illusion VS B L
 
10-15 lines
max
u spit first since u siad u will
ill drop after
ill start keying it now
u gotta check in

u got 30 minutes

Brotha Lynch 10-20-03 01:01 AM

CLOSED IF HE DONT CHECK IN
I HAEV TOO MaNY OPEn

CLOSE I GOT @ BATTLE OPEN ALREADy
AN Im tryna battle gametime next anywayz

Remixed Illusion 10-20-03 01:12 AM

i have one question, do u know wut it feels like ta b killed by water//
well i will let u know ur destin to die on a cresent, and now ta put put ur death on tha charter//
water fill ur lungs glogging your esopgogus, bloating ur body, size of a hipopotomaus//
leaving ur heart ta stop thumping, and ur blood ta stop pumping, and ta leave ya and ur mom ta die in tha humping postion//
i jus turned tha ignition to ur death ride, ta die, and ride into tha oceans tide//
i will jus say that u were another victom of carrdiac arrest, stand u up, abd put u in a dress, jus like when eminem was down and feelin depressed//
feel my bide nigga, fuck this i gots a quiker way, feel tha metal to my pistol, and my finger to tha trigger//
ur resistance to live is about to give, put ur life to tha end of it existance//
u have no connection to my rhyming profection,thats y i will be in tha lyrical compition//
i will b tha top selection, and u will lay on tha table ready for a bloody disection, ur jus a meire image to my reflection//
even if ya stood next ta me, u'd still b in tah far distance, its a coincidence that u had this much resistance, now i will finish, u drowned and ur body is a liquid substance//

Brotha Lynch 10-21-03 01:26 AM

nice shit my turn next
Im almost done
wait a sec............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ......................

GameTime 10-21-03 01:32 AM

hey brotha...im next up right???
i tried settin that shit up last night but it came out wrong so if u down ...set it up and shit......with rules i posted

Brotha Lynch 10-21-03 01:39 AM

Your confused just hate me, get angry, in a rematch I bleed cats//
ya obviously ain’t on one unlike a crack fiend that’s relapsed//
Brothas raps, offend evil, I end sequels when I skin people//
un-equaled, heat-filled, rated triple-X like Vin Diesel//
been lethal since pre-school… so this is no surprise//
sick as head colds… Remix better get ghost like poltergeists//
on RB you’ll get “Lynched” tryin to ‘hang’ wit me//
I use language as weaponry- it’s plain-to-see I’m aimin heat//
afraid to speak? this situation’s “grave” like where the dead roam//
“Face the consequences”- get ya visage inscription on a headstone//
fuck lead n chrome… all I need is a notepad//
and it’s so sad…. this loss will be “hard to swallow” with ya throat slashed//
no chance of killin Lynch, you’ll have a clean guillotine//
cause remixe gets killed in dreams, no matter how real-it-seems//
killin fiens… my focus is dealin dope//
after this verse your out of touch if your feelin hope//
revealin quotes show folks you cant touch my writing//
the only chance for Illusio votes…is if they die typing//
Octobers here, it’s clear Ya number one on my hit list//
and my gift-is, to rid-kids of the “Nyghtmare before Christmas”//
dismiss this bitch quick, flip sick-scripts to avenge a loss//
beatin you is cheap too… 1 “buck”-shot is all that vengeance costs//
what ya penned is soft, keep my name out ya mouthpiece//
cause this boards my home and I got shit “locked” like some house keys//

Remixed Illusion 10-21-03 01:39 AM

yo brotha lynch lay ur verse, then game time i will battle u( if that was posted towards me ) but u gotta wait till tomarrow k state tha rules when u set up tha battle thread.

GameTime 10-21-03 01:42 AM

it was for brotha lynch...but i'll battle u too....and i'll vote when brotha lynch shortens his verse cuz rules were 10-15...peace out


GameTime...

Brotha Lynch 10-21-03 01:44 AM

Your confused just hate me, get angry, in a rematch I bleed cats//
ya obviously ain’t on one unlike a crack fiend that’s relapsed//1
Brothas raps, offend evil, I end sequels when I skin people//
un-equaled, heat-filled, rated triple-X like Vin Diesel//2
been lethal since pre-school… so this is no surprise//
sick as head colds… Remix better get ghost like poltergeists//3
on RB you’ll get “Lynched” tryin to ‘hang’ wit me//
I use language as weaponry- it’s plain-to-see I’m aimin heat//4
afraid to speak? this situation’s “grave” like where the dead roam//
“Face the consequences”- get ya visage inscription on a headstone//5
fuck lead n chrome… all I need is a notepad//
and it’s so sad…. this loss will be “hard to swallow” with ya throat slashed//6
no chance of killin Lynch, you’ll have a clean guillotine//
cause remixe gets killed in dreams, no matter how real-it-seems//7
killin fiens… my focus is dealin dope//
after this verse your out of touch if your feelin hope//8
revealin quotes show folks you cant touch my writing//
the only chance for Illusio votes…is if they die typing//9
Octobers here, it’s clear Ya number one on my hit list//
and my gift-is, to rid-kids of the “Nyghtmare before Christmas”//10
dismiss this bitch quick, flip sick-scripts to avenge a loss//
beatin you is cheap too… 1 “buck”-shot is all that vengeance 11costs//11
what ya penned is soft, keep my name out ya mouthpiece//
cause this boards my home and I got shit “locked” like some house keys//12



I write my shit diferently an this si how i do it in everyabttle
thats only 12 bars kid
so can yall give sum honest votes
there even verses


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Brotha Lynch 10-21-03 01:46 AM

Game time vote an ill set ti up after player
same rules ill do 10 bars tho
make it shorter
u down
uppin for votessssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Remixed Illusion 10-21-03 01:47 AM

Brotha Lynch shorten ur verse by 10 bars/lines then votes can get in................................................ ..........................................
holla

Remixed Illusion 10-21-03 01:50 AM

yo u stated 10-15 LINES
and thats 15 lines
ask n eone thats 15 lines
b fair in yo verse's
follow rules or b DQed

GameTime 10-21-03 01:50 AM

wait..im fuckin confused....rules said 10-15 LINES not BARS.....and brotha lynch...rules are 10 lines for our battle not bars....im fuckin confused a bit so clear shit up and i'll vote

Remixed Illusion 10-21-03 01:51 AM

i mean u put 25 nopt 15
sorry for freeposting dunno how to do tha edit deali
it wont let me do that option awell

Brotha Lynch 10-21-03 01:56 AM

take off the liens then igotta go fool take lik e 8 lines off the last eight i guess pc;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
i gotta go emergency
so wuteva man jsut tkae off da last wuteva////////
upoppn ifor votessssssssssssssssssssss

I mekred ua nywazy fool

GameTime 10-21-03 01:59 AM

aight well i took off the extra lines....good battle...remixed u kinda strectched ur lines a bit so i give flow and stucture to brotha lynch..brotha also gets punches and he came harder on this one......

vote-Brotha

Brotha Lynch 10-21-03 11:41 PM

aite
uppin for a few more votes...........................
where da voters at..............................
who wants to battle
fuk 100 characters

Menik 10-21-03 11:53 PM

Yeah i agree with Game..BL took this one...it was a good battle...but BL had better punches..and better flow...Remixed lines were a little bit too long but it was still a good verse but BL took it with harder punches..so my vote goes to BL...props to both though.

Brotha Lynch 10-22-03 12:28 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Brotha Lynch
aite
uppin for a few more votes...........................
where da voters at..............................
who wants to battle
fuk 100 characters

Brotha Lynch 10-22-03 10:46 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Brotha Lynch
DAmn i merked this kid,,,,so hit it up dawg he has sum skill

Mic~Chemist 10-22-03 11:48 PM

Good battle again i thought u both came weak
But B L came harder hands down his shit was harder hittin it had better mulites an it had better flow
fosho i got my vote TO Brotha LYnch
Both u newbs need elevation magerly
pc

melodramah 10-23-03 12:18 AM

easy win by lynch.. i think remix's verse was weak as helll... vocab was aiiiiight, but he came mad weak.. lynch won with stronger punches and better flow.
vote=lynch
hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86754

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85796

Brotha Lynch 10-24-03 01:05 AM

uppin on su m more votessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssss

Brotha Lynch 10-24-03 01:31 AM

u................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................ppionnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Mic~Chemist 10-26-03 12:56 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Mic~Chemist
Good battle again i thought u both came weak
But B L came harder hands down his shit was harder hittin it had better mulites an it had better flow
fosho i got my vote TO Brotha LYnch
Both u newbs need elevation magerly
pc


Just uppin for this kid been mad slepted on an tryna get a few post in
U both need work...both no doubt u cats cud be Ill soon

Brotha Lynch 10-26-03 01:16 AM

sum cats didn poll da battle
but wuteva
uppin for 2 vote to kil llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllll
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MethodZ 10-26-03 01:17 AM

brotha lynch got this in every way..punches..multis...flow basically everything..the other cat had strecthed lines and haf way through i got bored and it flowed bad....

so my vote goes to brotha lynch

Brotha Lynch 10-26-03 04:49 AM

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Brotha Lynch 10-26-03 05:16 AM

One more voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Brotha Lynch 10-27-03 02:00 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Brotha Lynch
One more voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Brotha Lynch 10-28-03 04:12 PM

sumopne wanna end this for me all i need is one more honest vote
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Green Dreamer 10-28-03 04:18 PM

yo brotha lynch got this wit better punches multis and flow

vote brotha lynch

yo hit up this battle please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88302


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