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Remixed Illusion VS B L
10-15 lines
max u spit first since u siad u will ill drop after ill start keying it now u gotta check in u got 30 minutes |
CLOSED IF HE DONT CHECK IN
I HAEV TOO MaNY OPEn CLOSE I GOT @ BATTLE OPEN ALREADy AN Im tryna battle gametime next anywayz |
i have one question, do u know wut it feels like ta b killed by water//
well i will let u know ur destin to die on a cresent, and now ta put put ur death on tha charter// water fill ur lungs glogging your esopgogus, bloating ur body, size of a hipopotomaus// leaving ur heart ta stop thumping, and ur blood ta stop pumping, and ta leave ya and ur mom ta die in tha humping postion// i jus turned tha ignition to ur death ride, ta die, and ride into tha oceans tide// i will jus say that u were another victom of carrdiac arrest, stand u up, abd put u in a dress, jus like when eminem was down and feelin depressed// feel my bide nigga, fuck this i gots a quiker way, feel tha metal to my pistol, and my finger to tha trigger// ur resistance to live is about to give, put ur life to tha end of it existance// u have no connection to my rhyming profection,thats y i will be in tha lyrical compition// i will b tha top selection, and u will lay on tha table ready for a bloody disection, ur jus a meire image to my reflection// even if ya stood next ta me, u'd still b in tah far distance, its a coincidence that u had this much resistance, now i will finish, u drowned and ur body is a liquid substance// |
nice shit my turn next
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hey brotha...im next up right???
i tried settin that shit up last night but it came out wrong so if u down ...set it up and shit......with rules i posted |
Your confused just hate me, get angry, in a rematch I bleed cats//
ya obviously ain’t on one unlike a crack fiend that’s relapsed// Brothas raps, offend evil, I end sequels when I skin people// un-equaled, heat-filled, rated triple-X like Vin Diesel// been lethal since pre-school… so this is no surprise// sick as head colds… Remix better get ghost like poltergeists// on RB you’ll get “Lynched” tryin to ‘hang’ wit me// I use language as weaponry- it’s plain-to-see I’m aimin heat// afraid to speak? this situation’s “grave” like where the dead roam// “Face the consequences”- get ya visage inscription on a headstone// fuck lead n chrome… all I need is a notepad// and it’s so sad…. this loss will be “hard to swallow” with ya throat slashed// no chance of killin Lynch, you’ll have a clean guillotine// cause remixe gets killed in dreams, no matter how real-it-seems// killin fiens… my focus is dealin dope// after this verse your out of touch if your feelin hope// revealin quotes show folks you cant touch my writing// the only chance for Illusio votes…is if they die typing// Octobers here, it’s clear Ya number one on my hit list// and my gift-is, to rid-kids of the “Nyghtmare before Christmas”// dismiss this bitch quick, flip sick-scripts to avenge a loss// beatin you is cheap too… 1 “buck”-shot is all that vengeance costs// what ya penned is soft, keep my name out ya mouthpiece// cause this boards my home and I got shit “locked” like some house keys// |
yo brotha lynch lay ur verse, then game time i will battle u( if that was posted towards me ) but u gotta wait till tomarrow k state tha rules when u set up tha battle thread.
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it was for brotha lynch...but i'll battle u too....and i'll vote when brotha lynch shortens his verse cuz rules were 10-15...peace out
GameTime... |
Your confused just hate me, get angry, in a rematch I bleed cats//
ya obviously ain’t on one unlike a crack fiend that’s relapsed//1 Brothas raps, offend evil, I end sequels when I skin people// un-equaled, heat-filled, rated triple-X like Vin Diesel//2 been lethal since pre-school… so this is no surprise// sick as head colds… Remix better get ghost like poltergeists//3 on RB you’ll get “Lynched” tryin to ‘hang’ wit me// I use language as weaponry- it’s plain-to-see I’m aimin heat//4 afraid to speak? this situation’s “grave” like where the dead roam// “Face the consequences”- get ya visage inscription on a headstone//5 fuck lead n chrome… all I need is a notepad// and it’s so sad…. this loss will be “hard to swallow” with ya throat slashed//6 no chance of killin Lynch, you’ll have a clean guillotine// cause remixe gets killed in dreams, no matter how real-it-seems//7 killin fiens… my focus is dealin dope// after this verse your out of touch if your feelin hope//8 revealin quotes show folks you cant touch my writing// the only chance for Illusio votes…is if they die typing//9 Octobers here, it’s clear Ya number one on my hit list// and my gift-is, to rid-kids of the “Nyghtmare before Christmas”//10 dismiss this bitch quick, flip sick-scripts to avenge a loss// beatin you is cheap too… 1 “buck”-shot is all that vengeance 11costs//11 what ya penned is soft, keep my name out ya mouthpiece// cause this boards my home and I got shit “locked” like some house keys//12 I write my shit diferently an this si how i do it in everyabttle thats only 12 bars kid so can yall give sum honest votes there even verses __________________ |
Game time vote an ill set ti up after player
same rules ill do 10 bars tho make it shorter u down uppin for votessssssssssssssssssssssssssss |
Brotha Lynch shorten ur verse by 10 bars/lines then votes can get in................................................ ..........................................
holla |
yo u stated 10-15 LINES
and thats 15 lines ask n eone thats 15 lines b fair in yo verse's follow rules or b DQed |
wait..im fuckin confused....rules said 10-15 LINES not BARS.....and brotha lynch...rules are 10 lines for our battle not bars....im fuckin confused a bit so clear shit up and i'll vote
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i mean u put 25 nopt 15
sorry for freeposting dunno how to do tha edit deali it wont let me do that option awell |
take off the liens then igotta go fool take lik e 8 lines off the last eight i guess pc;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
i gotta go emergency so wuteva man jsut tkae off da last wuteva//////// upoppn ifor votessssssssssssssssssssss I mekred ua nywazy fool |
aight well i took off the extra lines....good battle...remixed u kinda strectched ur lines a bit so i give flow and stucture to brotha lynch..brotha also gets punches and he came harder on this one......
vote-Brotha |
aite
uppin for a few more votes........................... where da voters at.............................. who wants to battle fuk 100 characters |
Yeah i agree with Game..BL took this one...it was a good battle...but BL had better punches..and better flow...Remixed lines were a little bit too long but it was still a good verse but BL took it with harder punches..so my vote goes to BL...props to both though.
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Good battle again i thought u both came weak
But B L came harder hands down his shit was harder hittin it had better mulites an it had better flow fosho i got my vote TO Brotha LYnch Both u newbs need elevation magerly pc |
easy win by lynch.. i think remix's verse was weak as helll... vocab was aiiiiight, but he came mad weak.. lynch won with stronger punches and better flow.
vote=lynch hit this up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86754 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85796 |
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Just uppin for this kid been mad slepted on an tryna get a few post in U both need work...both no doubt u cats cud be Ill soon |
sum cats didn poll da battle
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brotha lynch got this in every way..punches..multis...flow basically everything..the other cat had strecthed lines and haf way through i got bored and it flowed bad....
so my vote goes to brotha lynch |
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One more voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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sumopne wanna end this for me all i need is one more honest vote
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yo brotha lynch got this wit better punches multis and flow
vote brotha lynch yo hit up this battle please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88302 |
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