[cutastraphe vs twisted poet]
 

10 line max
no crew, hate or, dr votes
30 min blind spit
no feedin so dun't matta
who posts first i'm doin my verse now
so check in and the clock starts----

yooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!

start to say it's my fault, come to a hault and get immediatly-popped/
didn't see ya were 1st post user, hey ya'll meeet anotha newbie-dropped/
i wasn't plannin on dissapointin, so when it comes down to the annointin/
no time fo avoidn, bio reads silent but deadly-i'll add the fart-noises/pshhhhh)
cuz thats' wut i think of ya, the only thing twisted is ya signature/
bitch rememba i'll dismemba ya to ya can't rememba the last dick- ya-sucked/
aww shucks, no need to get outa hand-like ya pen/
we kno ya fight fo men, if the screen closed in horizontally ya still wuldn't be tight-in-text/
so just stay a student, cuz kid ya need to be rap-related tutored/
played and neutered, and i dun't need the results from the poetry contest to kno ya a blatant-loser/


outzzzzz gl

good spit dog good spit
i will honest vote when that fu drops if u do me a favor and honest vote on my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86226

thanks peace

yeh i think this foo bitched out---cuz he aint check in or nuthin soooooooo--may have to close this---we'll see

I dont why u guys r hear u can 't rap to save a mutha fuckin tear.
popin pills that a druggies attitude stick to yo dope and it'll drive ya through.
My man reef sat nxt to me, fucked as big as a catostrophe but what the hey, when you guys cant rap, later man this aint worth your shat

checkin in..nice spit dog..props to you..my turn..
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Listen, this battle will probably get slepped on because you guys are newbs.........lol so am I, thats just how shit is.........u got my word of voting this honestly If u hit this up honestly..........I'll poll tomorow cuz im going to sleep, thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86796

My legacy begins

Battle one...

pick it up...

This kids already been anatomically dissected with every inch of my complexity embedded into his head//
I was gonna tell everyone that I got myself a win but with a verse like that I think this kat said it instead//
I’m still surprised you bled red, Cuz with all that tension seeping through your veins as you saw me approach//
You must have shit and pissed your pants, knowin this battle can only compare to me simply smashin a roach//
Or something that of a kid slashin his coach, All your doing is lighting my smoke, Now my words are drowning you blind//
Each nerve ending twitching tryin to be one with your mind, step off bitch cuz everything you say causes you to fall behind//

kill it...

I expected to at least be tackled by my very first opponent when instead I wasn’t even shoved//
I finished reading this whack ass kats so called verse over and I think I’m starting to feel loved//
Soon you’ll be at my knees beggin for another shot becuz after this I know you’ll soon want a sequel//
Uust think of this as a new start seein as how I just made your wins and losses once again become equal//


I told you I was twisted..aight..im out~

aight..i made a spelling error..ima edit it..i spelt Uust..wen i meant to say just..haha..sorry bout that..
good luck tho..may the best verse win..

damn..i guess i can't edit it..oh well..so everyone..just know
that on my last line..that was a typo..my bad..so here

Uust=Just

thanx peeps..uppin for votes
out

yo ya answered hella fuckin late dawg----we might as well just battle again cuz these aint on the moment spits---start a new thread---

naw dog..just leave it the way it is..its fine..no matter..this is one
of the only times i can come on..besides..it doesn't make a
difference..my rules didn't state a time limit..therefore there
wasn't one..so yea..thats it..good luck..
peace

i set the thread i made the rules---------ya never even checked in--just posted a verse mannn wut i'm sayin ya had way longer to think of a verse then i did----sooo we have to battle again set tht thread we have equal amount of time to drop a verse---fuck a day shittt----

naw..i think i'll..pass on that..so dont' worry bout it..and who cares if you made the thread..my battle..my rules..its not my fault
you decided to set it up..so calm down..and it won't matter
how long you took..i wouldn't care..and trust me..i didn't take long
so thats that..may the best verse win..uppin..
no more talkin aight..
peace

how do i kno ya didn't take long?---i dropped my verse in half hour like the rules said it was actually liek 32 min's but---wut ya shulda dun last night is check in a drop ya verse--but since ya didn't do that we have to battle again cuz i dun't accept verse day's later then my verse---it's just not right---cuz anythin can be written in that amount of time---i dun't accept it so sorry it's not hard to type shit up by the way----so start a new one and we can do this-----oneeeeeeee

i told you to stop talking about it dog..it dont' matter..we can rematch
later..these verses count..too bad..stop whining alright..i didn't
make a time limit..this battles my rules.not urs..you accepted..
so too bad..and as i told you..just becuz you set it up..it doesn't
mean you can make your own rules..you answered to my thread
so too bad..leave it as it is..uppin for votes..finish this..thanx peeps.and good luck dog
peace

uhhhhhhhhhh yehhhhhhhhhhhhh wutevaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa---------ya dun't just call fo a battle and leave 10 min's later---fuck that--but either way ya shuld wanna battle me again i mean ya shuldn't be scred not to if i gave a time limit and we both spit ya kno ya kno ya get ripped that's why---but we can keep these verses---it dun't matta--let's get votes and i'll rematch ya and set my own rules even though ya never really had any rules cep maybe aline limit and i said i was gonna add rules--in the BS thread but it's so damn old now i dun't rememba or give a fuck--------so vote peoples------111111111

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breakdown:

complexity-twisted
flow-twisted
punches-twisted
style-tie
metas-tie
multis-tie

twisted came tight for a newbie..props..aight..
vote=twisted poet

twisted poet got this, came harder, nice verse for a newb, you both
did good tho, so no hate, propz

vote-twisted poet

done

here it is:

flow-tie
punches-twisted
creativity-twisted
complexity-twisted
multis-twisted
structure-cutastraphe

my vote=twisted

^^ twisted got everythin except for structure cuz his bars were a bit on the stretched side but other then that twisted ripped it up good drop bro.. and cut.. keep elevating

vote = twisted

ahahahah yehhhhhhhh look when i posted my verse and look when he posted his a day later he had a whole day to think of a verse--while mine had to be dun in a half-hour-------so fuck that-----i'm gonna battle him again and rip his ass--ya'll needa vote on the more credible battle's like the ones in my sig----thanxxxx-----pecaeeeeeeeeeeee

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cutastraphe wins by DQ

Twisted Poet and H4iKU both banned for voting with an alias. Thats 6 names I've banned for you. Any more I should know about?

Make that 8... Rap Slayer and MC Liquid both are banned also even though they didn't have enough posts to poll.