melodramah vs Onslaguht-X
 

aight u fisrt 1 hour verse due after checkin

uppin, r u guys gonna battle???????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????????????????????????????

NO DUMB ASS ITS JUST IN FRONTLINESS POSTED AS A BATTLE THREAD>>>>and why would u say uppin????????????omega u posted in ma thread vs onslaught 2???do i smell a d/r

^^u got a good point.. i dont think omega should be able to vote... o wait... he cant anyway.. teehee

o yea... checkin in................................

iight, first off.......... hit this shyyyyt up !!! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85796
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onslaught? what the fuck this dude thinkin, battlin this chick is like doubtin a mothers intuition.. too risky to commit/
this rap game is filled w/ conditions.. no used, dead ass rhymes, u swimming in em like yous a mortition.. u still wit me in this?/
my job is plain as day, i kill rappers who wanna play, all these fake "kay-slays".. plz believe that aint no "hear-say"/
i kno u feelin what im writing, u wanna bump the words im reciting, too bad for you its in typing/
get a job at the wal-mart, u spelt it wrong.. you spossed to be gift (w)rappin.. not on RB tryin to make miracles happen/
tthose words aint worth the keystrokes that delivered em, they make no sence its an offense like im in "Equilibrium"/
your battles r so weak, all these herbs in these "mean streets" n u cant pull off 1 defeat?/
im not taking this battle seriously, ooo the new up n coming label the 'onlslaught army' guess they finally accepted gays in the military/
my shit speaks for itself, so sicc ur worried for ur health/ dont worry bout droppin your verse, use that shit next time, mine can cover us both, next battle-youll be well rehearsed/

yo ill go give an honest vote on ur other one and i will give this an honest vote as soon as he spits but if u could hit this up w/ a good honest vote that would be tight too.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86737

yo ill get my verse when i get back from school around 5................................................. .................................................. .................................................

yo fuck you apretnice onslaught-x is my brother and I want to see him battle asshole..............................

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whats your name melodramah a word nobody can pronounce man u gay when u went to a strip club they told u to bounce
yous a nerd faking youu ghetto thats my theroy
man i seen better raps in the steve ercal series
you a pop star making rap like justin timberlake
call some friend of yours to vote for your own sake
u gonna break eventally like a freshly sharpend pecil
ill melt u away like a plastic eating utencil
your an overlooked event like a mexican festival
i know what u want but u cant lick my testical

punches - melo
flow - neither
originality - melo

"get a job at the wal-mart, u spelt it wrong.. you spossed to be gift (w)rappin.. not on RB tryin to make miracles happen/"

Best line


vote = melo

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flow..tie
punches.. melodramah
vocab..tie
personals..melodramah

Overall..melodramah

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86845

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84570

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Yo Melodramah murked this kid
Flow-Melo
Personals-Melo
the 'onlslaught army' guess they finally accepted gays in the military/ Good line
Wordplay-ehh...On.X
Punchlines-Melo

Givin it to Melodramah but Onslaughts verse looked a lil cleaner.

nitemarre said : Yo Melodramah murked this kid

murked?????????????????????????????

yeah I'm a vocab rookie

i see i got 3 votes.. but only 1 on the poll..................................wassup wassup.... vote on the poll my fellow lyrical artists.

well most people just write who they vote for even if they dont have 100 posts (im guessing some form of upping there post amounts so they can vote for real) but anyway nice match man

vote=melo
punches=melo
flow=melo
origanality=mel
personals....huh?
structure=none
metas=melo
vocab=tie
laugh factor=melo


make sure ya hit this up or i'll jus bug ya and post again...pz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86999

uppin vote everybody!!! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>(4)

uppin number 1................................................. .............................................vote peoples

vote on this too while ur at it :
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85796

Aite Battle Not That Hot But Was Straight
Melo~Verse More Neater and Nicer Better Punches No Metas You Need That In Battles If You Goin To Battle Better People
OnSlaught~Verse Messier Didn't Enjoy That Much But Was Straight For His Level Just Keep Battling Kid
Vote=Melo

breakdown peepz:

punches-melo
flow-melo
everything was basically melloz with except
structure..onslaught gets that..onslaught you came too
basic dog..but it was decent..
props to both..keep it up

vote=melo(even tho it don't count cuz im a newb wit less than 100 post)

peace

^nuff said

thanks for the votes............................................. ...........................uppin number 2..... yo hit this shyt up too.. thanks :)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85796
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pretty cheap way of explaing 2nd system whats up with that coping someones exact thing when they say explain i think they mean u gotta on your own

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O YEA....... HIT THIS UP TOOOOOOOOOOO...................................... ...............................................http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85796
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SLEPT ON SHYYYYT

punches..............M
flow...................both

M takes it with better punches.......he was better in every categorie also


M I see ya online, please hit this up cuz I aint allowed to Up it no more

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=1