Alchemy [VS] WiL Getcha
 

IIght..

10 Lines
Due: 40 Mins
House Rules
Spit Weneva

Chekk
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Chekk, my rules said you spitten first man, you agreed, or do you wann blind spit this?.............................

Blind Spit..
40 Mins..

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the suspense Is killing me .................................................. .................................................. .......................

I amr eady dude, jsut drop yours and I will drop mine.
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Drop Now If Ur Ready..I'm Just About Done

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I Won't Peep Ya Verse
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I'm Sonning You To My Instrumental, Feel Me? Rock To Tha Beat
If Raps Your Gift, God Hustled U...Hope U Got Ur Receipt
Not Cut For DM, Shit Got U Heated, Now U Hot?
Tha Only Warfare This Kat Heard Of Wus On Tha X-Box *
His Skills? Wrecked Shit, Believe It...Ur Next Kid!!
Alc Got Game Like Tha Bengals...Cus A Loss Is Expected!
Step To Tha Throne? . . . Battle WiLL..Only In Effort To Get Known
HaHa..This "Dude" Couldn't Be Off Tha Hook As A Cordless Phone!
Open Call Out, You Say U Can't Beat Me Nd Stand Tall?
But U Juss Anotha MC...Anotha Brick In Tha Wall! **

* Warfare - XBox Game
** He Has Beef Wit Brix

Spit..!!

Spit Kid..!!

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Stop Stall'n..

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Broad and outdated, ya bend over backword, truly constipated/
This battle is anticipated, you ahve no clue the tensin ya created/
Death wil come, swift wings, Im controlin ya mind, an other things/
Choir boy claps after he got raped and sings, you know I'm King/
This is not all Alchemy teaches, raped again while I preaches/
Blank mind crazy and beseeches,"Can you smell the peaches?"/
Drained to achoma, speaking wit an impediment, like Oklahoma/
Senses so blurred he smells amonia, hope Im not alone-wit-ya/
This is my revolution, ya mind has collapes, ya formin a contusion/
Mind contorted wit confusion, you only wish this an optical illusion/

There, not better the the other one, but still alright, give me some comments on this new style, good, bad, what? I don't care if I lsoe, just comments.

I aint stalling Wil, I just type extremly slow, sorry for takeing so long, no beef, good luck man.......

wordplay.............will
punches.............will
flow...............both
style...............will
vocab..............both
metas............will
similes..............will
creativity...........will
funny.............will
structure............both

vote...............will

Sorry i cant vote but will took it with the phone line lolol, very original bro

anyway please hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86796

with an honest one

^^Noob vote and no other explanation thne that.
Wil will probably agree to, oh well there will be mroe.

[1] Uppin for some votes, good votes.

Lets get some mroe votes in here people, well lest get some votes period. Please tlel me if my style betta or not.

[2] Uppin...

Alright guys this is stupid. Drop your links and I will vote on them, easy enough.

[3] Uppin for some fuckin votes...

Wil took it due to punches. Alchemy was just rhyming didn't have punches. Wil had nice punches also. Wil took this and I gotta say not a good style if theres no punch. ex. (finisher)

This is my revolution, ya mind has collapes, ya formin a contusion/
Mind contorted wit confusion, you only wish this an optical illusion/

^ ^ nothing great about this except vocabulary.

Vote = wil

Dude, you need to learn to get a fuckin mind, that whole tihng was filled with punches, they all really good punches to, man this is dumb, why do peopel think there is no pcunhes?

UPPIN FOR FUCKIN VOTES, ET THIS FUCKIN OVER WITH, PEOPEL OBVIUSOLY DON'T READ VERSES WELLE NOUGH, SO JUST FUCKIN VOTE

[4] lETS GET THIS GOING DAMNIT.

Because there are no punches


It seemed like a fuckin poem, n' dont ever call me a noob again


Fag

will took dis 1.....
better punches
Good vocab on Al but iit takes mo dab dat to win a battle

Vote....Willl

Word..
Still 1-0..
Upp'n..

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wordplay.............will
punches.............will
flow...............both
style...............will
vocab..............both
metas............will
similes..............will
creativity...........will
funny.............will
structure............both

vote...............will hit this up plz id apreciate an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86489

2-0 Me..

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Upp'n
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Upp'n Again..

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2-0 Me..Vote..!!
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aite alchemy u had sum punches but notin to great to pull a win

and wil u had more punches that were a little better but heres tha break down

punches= wil
flow= tie
structure= tie
vocab-= wil
multies= tie

overall wil

3-0..Still UPp'n..

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Upp'n Again..
VOTE..!!

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Step To Tha Throne? . . . Battle WiLL..Only In Effort To Get Known
HaHa..This "Dude" Couldn't Be Off Tha Hook As A Cordless Phone!

This was a good line I thaught. It was simple but it still hurt.
Mr. Getcha had better wordplay per line. Better punchlines (metaphores, etc.)The flow was a tie.

I like yo new style Alchemy, it's straight, but for a battle you gotta come more aggressive.

I would vote Wil getcha but I'm at like 70 posts...

will had punches so he won to me its as easy as that
vote=will
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86297

i thought this was a very close battle, but i prefered wil's structure, cos its more like mine andi felt he came harder with the punches, aminlt cos it made me laugh more, so there you go, ima votin Wil, but decent battle, it wasn't by any means 1 sided, peace

vote=Wil

could you both hit this battle up, plz......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86229

Bitin rhymes is bad. Alchemy wins by DQ

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