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LYNCHed VERSus GAMETIME
yo
10-15linesmax blindspit drop by tonite or get Dqed im gunna be offline i gotta read my son a bed time story then im droppin my shit aite checkin so i no i dont waist time on a verse to merk u |
check in and shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................
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.....Its Time to switch the Game like i'm an angry Brotha Lynchin Klans.....
.....shove my blueprint down ur throat glands cuz im in the mood to relunquish plans..... .....my people cant resist it man, get merked by me and 5 voters cuz i roll with delinquint fans..... .....i'll have the Brotha Lynch hung, u dead weight while my mass expands..... .....this extra 4 pounds in my pants will clasp in the grasp of these spastic hands..... .....I Dante Hall rap, cuz i leave verse kickers swallowin their might..... .....Lets touch mics, feel ya time trickle down cuz Game gots clutch in rhyme fights..... .....my technique strikes fright, set ya whole Garden Block ablaze..... .....my bullets trim ya waves, and cut up bushes to reveal ya Hedge Maze..... .....runnin circles dazed, cant find the exit cuz my words are too blatant.... .....aint nobody hatin, its just that u lost and cant be found like a fuckin FREE AGENT..... .....dont keep me waitin, go ahead and read ya kid the story about the rabbit in the race..... .....u must learn to never post shit like that cuz i'll punch ya own gloves to ya face..... The last lines are about dude tellin me he gonna read his kid a bedtime story....Garden Block is location....Free agent yall will see |
waitin for dude right here.......dont feed off verses aight.....and dont no show...haha......peace out...
GameTime... |
well ima crash the fuck out.......if u dont post by tonight then i get the win....like u said aight....but post cuz i dont want a fuckin wasted verse and shit...peace out
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mods close this cuz this fag is a no show...........add that W to my record.....fuckin foo no showin............................................ ........................
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^LOL
i alwayz show up... Yo. peep Whos this lite weight tryna fuk wit,I mite take da Win Cuz i Rumble- fools// ITs early kid dont quit-so-soon, my spits are gaining me that-Double U(W)// Only way u gunna win is if i get D-QED, so start thinkin-logical// Its time for u to Create GAme ,Cuz u spittin Heat is lyrikal-impossible// Stop da front ya lines aint-Ill my rhymes are money so u comin up-killed// It aint funny ,u dOne like a dummy,Plus u just aint as Skilled// Im a rap addict i slap faggats,that think they game can be Compaired// But u StillAInt MATTIC,cuz i no u rappin from ya dads computer chair// TImes up,ino your my fanactic,So sad bitch that u tryed to temp me// ITs like spittin a half ass spit to take da Win,Im alwayz ready// Im droppin Lyrikal punches out,so u shud ya mouth cuz u aint gunna blow up// Cuz ya rap suks,i punish the unprepared,so u hope i dont show up// |
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closer-game...both were weak wordplay-lynch punches-lynch personals-tie vocab-game creativity-tie overal-game i wasnt feeling none of these verses i thought both came weak lynch did good wit his multies though...still didnt have the vocabulary...it was too elementary game gets this by the hair on my chiny chin chin peace |
uppin for votesssss
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weak battle---first off---gametime ya had an ok flow, good structure, punches were blahh----lynch ya had an aight flow, aight structure, punches were aight ya had more personals which gets ya my vote=lynch
peep my shit out in the sig and vote thanx |
aight...a little fuckin late but lets get votes........uppin #1 and shit.......votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
good shit brotha lynch |
uppin mothafuckin 2 .................vote now people............................................ .................................................. ................and explain em well unlike cutastraphe's shit
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quit fuckin sleepin man.........uppin #mothfuckin 3.............lets get some honest votes up in this piece.......come now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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personals - none
vocab - tie ceativity - tie punches - game overall - game this was kinda weak hard to choose winner both kinda same but game i liked this line .....my technique strikes fright, set ya whole Garden Block ablaze..... .....my bullets trim ya waves, and cut up bushes to reveal ya Hedge Maze..... good match now can u guys hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86810 thanks- |
For A Newb...
Lynch Came Nice... I Thought His Punches Came A Bit Harder... Flow Was Real Close... Everything Else Was Almost A Tie... Just Gotta Go WIt Lynch On Dis... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86480 Honest Vote... Vote-Lynch |
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin
Exactly thanks for da feeb back uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn to get this over wit............................................... ....................... |
This was a ok battle, Both had alright flow but Game had the better flow i thought...Punches were good by both but BL came harder with the punches...multies goes to BL...Wordplay goes to BL as well...both had ok structure...but im gonna give my vote to BL, just came harder i thought...props to both though..but my vote goes to BL.
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lynch got this.. his verse was more to the point m had stronger punches and it made more sense to me..
gametimes verse was good, but i dont think it flowed as well... good drop by both. vote=lynch hit this up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86754 |
damn....weak battle?????????????????????????????????????????
i thought we both came correct.......fuck it.....good shit.....u win but i fuckin hate those gay ass votes........^^^^like that one.......but u win peace Condom King Didn't Poll Vote... So I Deleted His Post -Axe |
A YO I GOT GAMETIME ON THIS ONE....HIS WORD PLAY WAS PRETTY SICK......NOT SO BAD FROM A NEWBIE.....IT WAS GETTING A BIT WEAK AFTER A WHILE BUT IT WAS AIGHT......GAMETIME GOT MY VOTE THIS ONE
VOTE=> GAMETIME |
uppin #4 ....battle is 4-3...abomination needs to poll vote.............................................. ..............................
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final uppin............quit sleepin u bunch of fooooooooooooooooooooos........................... .............................................
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this was an aight battle overall=
punches=game personals.....dint impress metas=game flow=bro vocab=game wordplay=..... creativity=bro sustainment=game overall=game make sure ya hit this up or i'll jus post again.lol.pz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87044 |
well i think game time had better wordplay, brotha lynch had harder punches but nothin really personal, and he dissed gm's light weight ness, when he a fly weight.... so that kinda killed it... overall it was pretty even, good battle, could have been better but my vote has to go to GAMETIME for just being a lil lil lil bit better, good battle tho
VOTE - GameTime |
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