Toner vs ferrarihov50
 

15 linez min
Who eva spit first spits first
no d/r
NO BITING
NO BITING
NO BITING
NO BITING
NO BITING
NO BITING

I'm not accusing you of anything but you know how that shit goes.

Checkin IN................................................ .................................................. ..

im here, you ready to do this, you go first if you are really the shit aight............................................. .................................

Nah dude you spit first, otherwise you'll make me paranoid..........................................

Or we'll both go NOW............................................... .................................................. ............

Okay.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .............................

Up against mine your flows are futile/
Angered by your vulgar and vile call out, don’t you dare smile/
I’m 150 percent positive, I’ll /
Get all the votes from the RB admin and representatives,
And make you trade your loss with your bile/

Man I can’t believe you’d want to go against me/
This aint kinder-garden,
This shit aint as easy as ABC or 123/
Im like a large cock you just a PP /


Go back to your old job you claim is hectic/
Of making a living off being a cosmetic/(toner)
Didn’t you read my profile? I’m a fucking heretic/

And I know where you live/
Better believe me, all I did was ask Jeeves/
Now there’s a big dude around your corner and he wont leave/
I’m lying? Go ahead ask him his name’s Steve/
Then again don’t, he has an Arsenal up his right sleeve/

And a bottle o’ arsenic /
And he will make you drink that shit/
And please, try real hard to spit it out/
Or at least do better than you did,
When you get cum in your mouth from your partner’s dick and gave you clout/

But do vice-versa and try not ingest/
If you do, hope your stomach knows not to digest/
But it will coz you still have your bile,
You should’a, sent it in with your battle request, now, who’s the one with the smile? /
Fuck it time to put your battle skills to the test/
Against the boss, and pray you never ever come across,
Another, who’s up there with the best/
With all this poison, make you to lose your head,
Surely you’ve no time to detest /
When you’re through reading this you’ll probably be dead.

WAITING........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...

no feeding........................................... .................................................. .................................................. ...............

CHOKE CHOKE CHOKE CHOKE CHOKE CHOKE CHOKE CHOKE CHOKE , HE'S CHOKING!!!........................................ ...........

Come on man, this a song writing competition....................................... .................hurry your ass up biatch.......................................

Sorry dude I had to have a meeting wiv a tutor, now I'm free, good verse, apart that cosmetic line, Toner's nothin to do with cosmetics- It's slang for Stoner FOOL. regonise.

Thanks 4 bein patient I'm gonna spit now.

aight cool.............................................. .................................................. .........

c'mon............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

It's a shame, about the name that I had to elaborate//
I'm gettin used to fact that I have to educate//
I'm a heavy stuck in the body of a fly-weight//
No frontins ma style, I'll give it to ya straight//
When ya replied to da post you meet your fate//
Seen you run like an enemy of the state//
You fing spittin hard on y'all brain an get irate//
Cos ya'll momma gave life to y'all five weeks late.

I'm a cat wiv a laid back style//
You may notice that I been a while//
Cos the fact that I'm high n all//
Got somethin to do with my huge smile//
Unlike you, you jus fucked up//
U gonna end up like the others an get roughed up//
Cos your roots are rotten an your buds closeed up//
When I blow up the force is gonna suck you up.

I've got cha swaying now you gonna take the fall//
When you walk by, people put their ass to the wall//
I'm gonna wreck through ya like a wreckin ball//
When you face up to me, you stand two feet tall.
Your an empty head like Tony Blair//
You act the man, wars declared//
But I tell that infact you shit scared//
Cos this is a man's game and you can't even grow pubic hair.

Peace

Hope your still there?????!!!!!!!

I'm gonna get somethin to munch. When I get back I'd appreciate some feedback. AAIght dude.

not bad............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....

i see this battle just finished up so im a vote on this shit. I think both of you lacked punches. You both got ok flow. Ferrari, ya verse seemed to just swing out and not actually hit anything. Think you should stop wit da story telling and just hit wit personals. You have the nack but not da punch. Toner, you came weak aswell, i felt you had just a lil better structure and some lines close to end there are what you should be putting through all ya lines. You should battle 10lines next time. Cause both stray off and come weak. Keep it short and hit hard, its better that way, until you get better skill. No hate just advice....

Im gonna go on toner..My vote that is....

Toner, your a loner on that one. No motherfucker wu can read will vote for your shit.Player, no i mean wanna b, here is some advice,this ain't no chat room,its called rapbattles for reason..telling the next nigga dat u going to get munchies, wu the fuck wants to know dat shit..
Nigga ferrari kept it real from the start, he kept calling u,u laid lo,so i waited expecting some good rymz,but read your lyns,i was falling asleep....
nigga please,just take your own life now coz u a waste of space..

battle of UK cool.............................

BREAKDOWN:

Flow and structure: TONER
PUNCHES AND PERSONALS: no personals but TONER

OVERALL:TONER

could ya hit this up cos no one's votin on my battle with WORD~PERFECT and I need to get it finished so I can have a battle with a crew member to join H.I.V........so need to get it finished...............

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86677

Thanx alot....an honest vote will be appreciated

look, i dont like freeposting. But the herb above should shut his mouth. I aint sticking up for anyone here, i'm on this site killing by myself. But this JW herb above seems like a waste of space, should be banned already and look you posted once. Least there having a go. People gotta elevate somehow. So shut it, or battle bitch...

Fuck You JW...What does that mean Juvenile Wanker. How can you comment on me..wiv your ONe post..Have some fuckin Respect, You Ugly mutha fucka...You know rap can be intelligent, not jus mindless thugs...De La Soul???? Eva heard-you need to be educated fool.

Bottom line-

I WANNA SEE JW BATTLE LILLEM!

I appriciate the critics and try to do better............................................ .................................................. .............................big up to lillem and proficient styles.

I dunno bout you but..those long linez you set really tested me. We should hook for another battle sometime in the future.

Peace

aight cool wit me guess i strayed a bit, i was trying to tell in a story kind a way like the way Eminem does nah mean? but it was great though your flow was okay.............................................. ..
ONE

Look at u motherfuckers,i don't waste my time posting shit, i have a life,look at lillem 414 posts,u a wana b,get a life nigga,o the outside world dun kicked u out dun it.u computer geeks make me sick,where the fuck is this shit gonna get ya?
Lillem im a battle u later, i got shit to take care of, u the least of my worries.......

What a Cock???!!!!....................................... ...........................................

flow..tie
punches..Toner
originality..Toner
personals..tie

Overall..Toner took this cause his verse had better punches but it was pretty close



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Uppin 4 votez............................................. .................................................. ........................................

Uppin 4 votez............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......

is noone voting no more?............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....

Doesn't look like it, R u down for round 2????????????????????????????????????............. ........................................

crap crap crap.............................................. .................................................. ................................

guess you win huh?.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..

So are you down for Round 2 or what? Let's make it shorter an more hits on both sidez aaight.....what do you say.....

when?
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I'll PM you nxt week AAAAIGHT- I'm out

Peace............................................. ..................................................

okay sure ill get ya back.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........................................

How can I close this and get my win???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. .................................................

This battle was whack..I'm still waiting for round 2, thats if you chumps got the bollox............................................ .............................................