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Tökën Vs ~D~Abyss~ (with poll)
Rules:
No D/R Votes No Hate Votes No Crew Votes You Spit First... Deadline 7:00 Tonight Eastern Time 10 Lines Max Good Luck... You Called Me Out So Bring The Heat Homie |
Like broken matresses im quick to spring pain to ya ass
Step up practice cus my speed laced joints passin ya fast Newbie carpenter lost his saw..blind..can't navigate the boards I laugh at ya cus ya dropped so much shit ya verse written in ya draws Ya styles so ugly its causes the elephant mans mother to shudder Im Endin ya life like ya older brother neva putta slit in the rubber Im leavin ya blind like tha kids who messin with doggs shit Ya body bits l b harder to find than sadamn in his bomb pits Ya lines just straight horror When Newbies Bite Back left you chockin I done expired this wack Token like his moms falopean tubes neva opened blah..keystyle g/l |
Good Drop Man I'll Spit As Soon As Possible... You Got Potential For A Newbie... Like Whoa................
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Sayin My Style Looks Like Shit... Yet Look At The Sig That He Reps
Learn From Doctors For Animals And Still Couldnt Elevate To A Vet You Must Be More Than One Step Beyond Us...To Spit That Kinda Shit (Profile "From") Kinda Like A Dehydrated Camel The Way You Lack Flow When You Spit Check His Posts Per Day... 37.85... Didn't Know That Was Possible Couldnt Win If You Voted For Yourself Like Aliases Of Bionicle Optical Obstacles...Like A Rollerblading Ref I'll Keep You In-Line You Couldnt Cum Back If You Literally Fucked RB.Com's Spine I'm Going To Cause You A Wordwide Electrical Fusion Black-Out (Under His Sig It Says Worldwide Fusion) After This You Can Call Me Warren Sapp The Way You Got Sacked-Out Blah *Rollerblading Inline Skating Refs* And Let The Voting Begin... Damned Writers Block |
Oh Yeah...
Bionicle Was Brooklyn And He Had A Few Usernames Which He Would Vote For Himself With... |
yo this was close....
token you got skillz, I know you can come better than that, I hate writers blcok too G I know how that shit happens.... yo d~abyss, you might be a new screen name but you definitely ain't no newbie, you got skills of a vet no doubt.... punches: d ^^"I laugh at ya cus ya dropped so much shit ya verse written in ya draws Ya styles so ugly its causes the elephant mans mother to shudder Im Endin ya life like ya older brother neva putta slit in the rubber" OUCH flow: token ^^"Couldnt Win If You Voted For Yourself Like Aliases Of Bionicle Optical Obstacles..." Good Sound to it personals: tie originality: tie (not really anything ground breaking) enjoyability: d overall: d vote = d but this was hella close yall return tha favor and hit this up with an honest vote: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=87114 peace |
thanks homie
id vote if i had me 100 posts 1-0 D hot verse Token ............................... ....................... |
Yeah Thanks.... Should've Came Harder Though...
I Still Think I Gotchu By A Hair But We'll See... :D uppin1 |
2.Uppin
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ight this was a ratha good battle...both came bout equal in flow an ish
there are def some quotablez here.... token-Check His Posts Per Day... 37.85... Didn't Know That Was Possible Couldnt Win If You Voted For Yourself Like Aliases Of Bionicle I'm Going To Cause You A Wordwide Electrical Fusion Black-Out (Under His Sig It Says Worldwide Fusion) After This You Can Call Me Warren Sapp The Way You Got Sacked-Out ^yay sapp is tha MAN D- I laugh at ya cus ya dropped so much shit ya verse written in ya draws Ya styles so ugly its causes the elephant mans mother to shudder Im Endin ya life like ya older brother neva putta slit in the rubber well neither got real personal....so neither was real creative in that aspect....flow on both was hot but i thiknk that token came with better punches |
100 to vote
sorry homie 1-0 still ....................... ........................ ....................... |
um i have 100 and i did vote *shrugs*
i for got about that rule so i posted a few times....but itz a fair an official vote so 1-1 |
HAHA!... lol
uppin 2................................................. ................................................. |
token got him with vocab ,punches but d got him with flow still token gets my vote now ur turn
Wow... Could You Make Your D/R Any More Obvious? Vote Gone -Axe Damn... Beat me to it Axe. -Chrit |
Good job mods..
Last Up........ ...................... ................. 1-1 still my good friend :D |
I know ma vote doesn't count but I would've voted for Abyss jus cos he's a new b. Don't get me wrong Token verse was dope. What Do I know I havn't reached 100 posts.
Peace |
Damn...ahwell...all ya gotta do is wat tht otha dude did n post 20more times...n if ya do ya gotta explain ya vote better..:whacky:
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Nah I aint down for postin jus to up ma total posts if u know what I mean, anyways it looks like u got dat battle in the bag, u didn't slay him but u won fo sure.
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Stop Fuckin Freeposting.... The Dude ^ Said It Right Out Loud He Would Vote You Cuz Your A Newbie... D/R...
uppin 3.......... |
wow, this was a good battle, D may be new to Rb but is far from a newbie, he had some good shit
here's a breakdown flow = both structure = both creativity = D wordplay = D metas = Token punches = token personal = token (tho it was like 1 line lol but it was good) token got this....barely tho Token got wordplay but D did better in that field I like the "elevate to a vet" line from u token, that was nice and i also liked the navigate boards shit good battle here vote = Token hit this battle up, its being slept on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86988 |
good vote... well explained... its about time we got one of those in here...
i had a lot of personals read the explanations he changed his sig though so yeah.... his sig looked literally like poop.... lol uppin 4 |
token got this 4real............................................. ..nice drop by the other kat......................nice drop by both... token got this by an obvious higher level of skill.. flow, structure, wordplay rhymes... all were better.
vote=token |
flow = both
structure = both creativity = D wordplay = D metas = Token punches = token yeah token got this 1 i liked the other drop to tho vote token hit this up with an honest vote please i only need 1 more vote for the battle to be closed and im outa ups so please give a vote here flow = both structure = both creativity = D wordplay = D metas = Token punches = token |
Thanks Man But You Didnt Poll... Mods Add That Vote Please...
Props Abyss We Homeboys... So No Hate/Beef Uppin 5......... Last Uppin |
Token. drop an honest vote on this then I'll vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86967 |
Battle Was nice Abyss You Could Of Tooken This Battle If You Had Tried Checkin Your Verse Before Postin Cause Some Lines In That Verse Didn't Really Get My Attention And Didn't Make Sense I Thought You Was Goin To Win When I Read The Opener But Nice Verse For A Beginner
Token I Seen You Do Better Guess You Didn'T Think Abyss Was That Capable But He Was AighT I Liked Your Vocabulary Better And You Had Some Hot Metas Overall You Came Better Just That Vet Line Is Kinda Played Out But Hot Verse Vote=Token(.............................that's a explained vote) |
sorry man, i poll voted now, hit this up with an honest vote please i feel ashamed putting this up cuz it was a horrible battle both ways in my battle but please hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86475
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Like broken matresses im quick to spring pain to ya ass
Step up practice cus my speed laced joints passin ya fast * I like this opener , funny shit , nice rythme and flow 8.5/10 Newbie carpenter lost his saw..blind..can't navigate the boards I laugh at ya cus ya dropped so much shit ya verse written in ya draws * Another good one , lol , nice flow , good ripp 8.5/10 Ya styles so ugly its causes the elephant mans mother to shudder Im Endin ya life like ya older brother neva putta slit in the rubber * LOL , nice one , Elephant mans Mother !!! , Damn Funny shit 9/10 Im leavin ya blind like tha kids who messin with doggs shit Ya body bits l b harder to find than sadamn in his bomb pits * Slowed down a little but still rocking 8/10 Ya lines just straight horror When Newbies Bite Back left you chockin I done expired this wack Token like his moms falopean tubes neva opened *had to end it wid the mom joke , Played , but good punch nonetheless 8/10 42/50 84 % TOKENS VERSE .............. Sayin My Style Looks Like Shit... Yet Look At The Sig That He Reps Learn From Doctors For Animals And Still Couldnt Elevate To A Vet * Nice opener , personal , and a nice follow up punch 9/10 You Must Be More Than One Step Beyond Us...To Spit That Kinda Shit (Profile "From") Kinda Like A Dehydrated Camel The Way You Lack Flow When You Spit * Once again , getting personal (which is good) , Bit of a played line ,but funny 7.5/10 Check His Posts Per Day... 37.85... Didn't Know That Was Possible Couldnt Win If You Voted For Yourself Like Aliases Of Bionicle * LOL , nice rip , funny ass shit 9.5/10 Optical Obstacles...Like A Rollerblading Ref I'll Keep You In-Line You Couldnt Cum Back If You Literally Fucked RB.Com's Spine *Nice rythme work some good flipping , works for me 8.5/10 I'm Going To Cause You A Wordwide Electrical Fusion Black-Out (Under His Sig It Says Worldwide Fusion) After This You Can Call Me Warren Sapp The Way You Got Sacked-Out * Nice Finisher , dug it allround , Good Battle 9/10 43.5/50 87 % Great Battle ............. Token edged it out ......... But I smell a rematch fo sho Peace , Crazy E http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86214 |
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