m.B.p. vs Vindictive (real battle, my bad)
 

10-20 lines
first to 5 votes
no crew votes and no dr's
i'll spit first

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aight here it is....

Yo fuck you, you fuckin' wanksta//
Just cause you wear a little blue don't make you a gangsta// those ugly bitches riden wit you don't make you a playa//
I'm like cow on a meat hanger//
Straight up RAW//
and my slugs are powerfull enough to rip off your fuckin' Jaw//
Just cause you a newbie~don't expect any sympathy//
I'm gonna leave you and your crew dead, and boke after this robberie//
Cause i'm gettin' hasty~to leave this clip and barrel completely fuckin' empty//
What the fuck were you thinkin', volentierin' to go against m.B.p.//
ya'll can't reach my skill even in a dream//
you pussy's are like scream~ all fuckin hollywood//
Ya bitches ain't ever been to tha real hood//
I dare ya to come see me~in LBC//
you best believe~you're gettin lead staight though your stomach, liver and your spleen~fuck it though sence you're pussy, i'll just leave you dead on line 15//

10 Lines and then you go away crying herb.

No flow, what were doing?, eating creamy jelly rolls and ho-ho's/
On loan, ya borrowed the rhymes but still you only spit slo-mo/
0-3 an stil don't undestand, ya verses are like Cricet, low demand/
Give a hand, the lines almost equal, rap like country band stand/
Cripple you with hard words, wrech ya spin with venemous verbs/
This ain Revenge Of The Nerds, Ya suck dude, havent you heard?/
Stop the shots, ya glock aint cocked, ya got the saftey on cock/
Watch while you get mocked, freeze up with stage fright and lock/
Ya blood dranin and ya skin white, ya dead dude, died of fright/
Murderd at 14, that aint to young, ya from the hood, but I won/

Don't underestimate the noobs.

Uppin for some votes, people, lets get some fuckin votes in here, just cuz we noobs don't mean we can't get votes.

[1] Uppin...

Wow, you people really have no clue how to vote or anything like that? I mean just cuz we new don't maen that we can't get vtoes, so lets get some votse in here.

[2] Uppin...

[3] Uppin for some stupid votes, come on people it really isant that ard to vote, so lets get some votes in here please.

Alright, now this is just getting really FUCKIN ANNOYING, FUCKIN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE GOD DAMNIT, I AWNT TO BATTLE OTHER PEOPLE AND I ALREADY HAVE 2 OPEN SO FUCKEN VOTE ON THIS DAMNIT!!!!!!!

[4] UPPIN FOR SOME GODDAMN VOTES.

Least uppin and you all are pissing me the fuck off, just vote on this damn, you guys were new once, so lets get some votes in here please.

[5] Uppin for some mother fuckin votes.

hmm......merking?

structure - vin
flow - vin
punches - vin
vocab/complex - tie
metas - tie i guess......

overall vin easily i think

Pace.......

punches-vindictive
flow-vindictive
personals-vindictive
needs to elivate-mbp

vindictive got this easy,mbp you seriously need to elivate, your never gonna win a battle with verses like that,

anyway my vote- vindictive

hit this up wit a honest vote, gettin mad slept on

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85996

lol mocked...... son..take it easy lil man youll get votes be patient
there werent really any mets and punches or anyting
so... vin for better flo...............................

punches-vindictive
flow-vindictive
personals-vindictive


vote = vindictive

this battle was 1 sided..........................

you vind got this shit mbp you need to work on your flow it would've been alot closer if your flow had of been nice and consistant

vind that was a nice verse the inlines you had were ficking nice

vind got it on punches and flow

Vote Vin...


Obvious Reasons......


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Vin got this coz he dominated every area expect ending. I likes m.B.p's closer but it wasnt enough to win it. I cant poll so get a mod to add my vote.

Vote Vin

love vindicitives flow....

the other kat was choppy angry unintelligent and all over the place...no composure at all....get it together MBP....

definitly not a newbie.....str8 up punches...funny meti's...and an overall nice verse.....to bad u battled garbage....

vote-vindicitive

Vin's verse wasn't that great. Had decent flow and perfect strucutre. THe punches and shit weren't too much to speak of. Overall Vin took it easily. Both of you need to elevate...so just keep battlin and good luck..

Vote ~ Vin