Johnny C. vs. LM
 

Rules all set............................................... .................
.................................................. .......................time for mah verse!

Yo remind everyone of the rules............................................. ....................................

aight............................................. ................................................
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30 min.
14-16 lines
I spit mah shit 1st.

The rules are:
14-16 lines
Usual rules bout d/r and shit
He spits first......................................

Any body who wants to vote. Thank you but explain and hit this up aswell cos It's level at the moment:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86967

You're a stupid-ass, dumb-fuckin kid, wit no flow/
Oh, but ya can't win to me now, cuz ya won't show/
U don't know-- how 2 beat me in this battle/

Son, i got a gun, it's an uzi; it's pointed at you/
U gonna get attacked, too/
Cuz i know yer rhymes are whack, dude/
Kid, ya otta know that yer rap's are talkin bab-ble!/

Do u really wanna hear the shit that
I've heard of YOU?!//
Cat, you've been fucked in the ass so much, you
Kan't play "skip 2 mah loo!"//
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!
I'm gonna rip off yo appendages/
give u severe hemorages/
an then I'll allow u 2 jump off
ANY ledges!/
wut about rap?
yer in love wit dis shit!
but the only reason 4 that is u think tha mic is a dick!

tear it up, dawg.
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OK here we go:

I guess I've gotta murder you for a second time/
Fuck it...if you Pm me I'll give you tips on how to write a dope rhyme/
But if you think your already the shit then OK, whatever, fine/
But realise that your committin serious lyrical crimes/
It's a miracle how you can say shit about me bein wack, you like to cook you faggot/ (profile)
Now out the two of us, dont ever say that your the baddest/
And I know why you spat first/
It's so you dont feed off my verse isnt it Mr Johnny C./
Mr L got lucky, Mr L didnt merk me/ Mr I'm not sure I can ryhme like Lee/
Don't you get it, you wont ever beat me/
All you can do is hope that one day you will be me/
I dont care what you say...I've merked you today AND yesterday/
You callin me out is like disrespectin me/
So I had no choice but to merk your ass again disrespectfully/
If I am wrong in anyway please correct me/
But I predict another 5-0 victory for me/.



Peace!!!

Hit this up too:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86967

Explaination:

Lee/L = Lee is my name but L is shorter thats where my Mr.....line came in


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aight, that wuz tight.....
but did ya see mah subliminal thought... i guess not.

damn dawg that wuz a helluva lot better than the last one u passed un-to me... good job!
i heard that disses get points (from our last battle), so i TRIED 2 get this 1 chock-full o' karate-chop-action!

AIGHT, THUGS, TIME TA VOTE!
LM FOR THE PUNCHES... OR JOHNNY FOR THE PUNCHES,THE FLOW, AND THE NICE SIDE-BANNER!

ok let me be the one pop the cherry...
well this battle was wack, neither of yall said anything worth repeatin... johnny c. ur sturcture is horrible, u got no wordplay cept for that bitin ass 'skip to my loo line', ur lines arent even played, they just suck... LM u didnt do any better, id rather not vote but i might as well and shit...

wordplay - john john, just cuz he mad a feeble attempt at bitin somethin, but he still tried
punches - equal, neither said anything personal or nothin
multis - LM cuz he had some... kinda
Metas - i dont even know if there is any...

overall VOTE - Johnny cuz he did bad but LM won the first time and came weak as fuck on this.... and dont think im hatin or anything... i dont hate on shit except haters

Man we both went ten times better than what we did on our last battle. Good work dawg.....................................

Thanks for votin Hardcore.......................................... .............................


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i just got mah 1st vote.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........

so much 4 yer "...(5-0) victory..." :)
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Yeah I know I stand corrected......................................... ..........................................

Uppin for votes (1)............................................... ..........................



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heres the break down -

Stucture - LM
Flow - LM
Multis - LM
Punches - Jonny
Metas - there was none!

Vote = LM

(yo LM come battle me i put a bitch slap in for u to battle me if ur down hit me back wit a pm or put it in the bitch slap)

payycee!!

yo this was a weak battle.. but i gotta go w/ LM in this.. johnny ya verse was mad weak.. best line:
"yer in love wit dis shit!
but the only reason 4 that is u think tha mic is a dick!"
the structure needs work tho..

LM ya verse was aight.. enough to win..
aiiight battle..
vote=LM

slept on:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85796

Thanks for votin guys. Green Dreamer I'll battle you when my battles close............................................. ..........


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Yo Johnny when you see this make sure you start uppin for votes coz I dont wanna run out of mine too soon and I've already used 4 of them so help me out a bit will ya..


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check it. my battles are getting slept on. I want a piece of LM so vote on my shit and get the thread closed. LM you heard what I said

Aragorn...even if you cant poll you could of dropped a comment..................................!



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OK last uppin...can we get this battle over with now............................................... .............



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Yo Johnny I cant keep this battle afloat on my own. Get your ass in here and help me................................................ ....

Johnny dont run away from the fuckin votes...your only one behind............................................ ..............

wow that shits raw LM i agree wit melo on the verse its tite but yea it sorta does need som work but it was better then the other guys

Wordplay: Noone
Punches: Noone
Multis: LM
Metas: Nonone
Structure: LM

Overall: This battles was pretty wack..no real punchs or metas..LM had better flow n structure..i supose his lines were a lil better ...so.

Vote: LM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87316

Hit that up..or ill come back moanin

opener:LM
closer:LM
structure:LM
punches:tie
wordplay:tie
overall:LM

nice battle peeps, johnny u got better since ur last battle against LM, jus keep elevatin




plz return the favor by votin fairly on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87137