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melodramah vs. Dominator
same rules..... my bad homey
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yes, we both spit within 30 min right?? BOTH OF US AT SAME TIME??? No exceptions or it will be automatioc dq ok? When you reply thats when timer starts
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yea............................................... .............checkin in..... time starts now... holla
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My lyrics will make you shiver so hard theyll snap your fucking spinal cord /
Sendin ya to the same hospital your moms at, cept shes at the psych ward // Ill leave you with improper digestion, and the 6th loss of your profession/ Cuz since your gay confession we all know the 9 is outta the question // * A win against dom? Thats about as greek as the Lions gettin a victory / Your on the same level as a pregnant gal cuz your nothin but a bitch-to-me // Stand guard cuz imma murder you with no regard, ya lil incest child, nothin but a re-tard / I could find a more formidable opponent if I tried to battle in the grave-yard // Cuz like a 1-nut man you can't hang with me so drop the mic dont even speak/ Your spits are weak cuz you spit with no technique, and I just broke your streak/ * haha 6 in first line, 9 in second, hell never get it because hes a fag... |
hmmmmm I didnt even need 20 minutes to merk you..... you gats till 11:28 lil bitch you you get the automatic DQ
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errrr in the 9
Ill leave you with improper digestion, and the 6th loss of your profession/ Cuz since your gay confession we all know the 9 is outta the question // * This will be his 6th loss..... hes 8-5..... the 9 outta the question as in no 9th victory... I didnt asterisk the 2nd part but w/e I will now it is still under 30 min |
TIME IS UP............. UPPING FOR DQ VOTES..... YOUR RULES.... YOUR SPIT DOES NOT COUNT................... DQ VOTES PLZ
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im that fly chick whos flows is so sick
i got u eatin my words, swallow em down i just gave u a dose of 'toxic'/ runnin thru hoods thinkin ur a menace w/ no incentive me next to u is like the grand canyon next to a tiny crevice/ i love battlin herbs, their rhymes r so obsurd.. rhymin words w/ the same word/ this dominator fuck actin hard, u just ran outta luck, i dominate yo ass like ur a pile o dirt n im a big dump truck/ readin these rhymes i got u on the boarder of 'transing' ur wack, the only thing hip hop bout u.. is that avatar breakdancing/ 30 minutes is all i need to send fake rap critics to the clinics the wheel says u lose, go head dogg, re-spin it/ u battlin me is a gamble, this is somethin u werent prepared to handle/ its sad when text has the power to leave a man in shambles/ theres no room for fakers, ill rip u in half like ticket takers/ lets get the votes, cuz forsure im gonna have as many as the first number in your posts, 1 dawg.. im ghost/ |
lol... my shyt froze like a bitch,,,, y u herbin like that???? :sniff: :sniff: ................................................ pussy??..........................?
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30 minutes is all i need to send fake rap critics to the clinics
the wheel says u lose, go head dogg, re-spin it/ You took 35 haha so that tells how wack this line is.... ill let ya slide since I won anyways.... voters cuz need to take in account you didnt spit within deadline |
Dude you really need to follow rules though you have 16 lines in a 10-12 line battle.... you have broken 2 rules haha..... shit that deserves automatic votes for me anyways nevermind the fact my verse owned u
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wow,..... talk about swaying votes huh?? quit bitchin u herb......................................... ...... just let ppl vote... my pc froze wtf u want.......
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"my pc froze".... haha what a herbish excuse..... a pc doesnt freeze when you are typing a rap kid..... maybe when you are looking at gay porn...... but id hope you had that shit minimized you were typin haha.... im not trying to stay but your two LAPSES IN THE RULES need to be taking in account of during votes.... rules are rules and if are cat on here started breaking them the site would go to hell
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yo.. say what u say.... my shit froze when i tried to submit it..... wtf u want.. i dont need no excuses lets just get votes...... holla
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lol whateva punk... yah we need votes...... since I merked you anyways ill just let the timer slide.... but what do you have to say about sliding in 4 extra lines?
Vote please ppl |
yo.. sometimes that shyt just happens iight... my bad........i wasnt counting lines.. just writing..................yea.. lets quit the bullshyt n get some votes
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aight what of bunch of cluttered bs---here's my vote---anyways
flow=melo punches=dom structure=melo creativity=dom wordplay=dom overall=dom i think this was actually a good battle both spit sum heat but i think dom came with just a bit harder punches--- |
dom, you need to stop bitchin so much "let's get some dq votes", dont run that shit man, stop being such a herb, fo real
flow = both punches = melo structure = both creatibity = both metas = melo vote = melo hit this battle up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87324 |
dude its not being a herb...... rules are rules..... If it was a 16 bar battle i could have had more shit on him...... people shouldnt be able to sneak in 4 extra bars and take 5 extra min when they make the rules...... breaking them and expenting it not to be taken account for during voting is herbish but whateva
UPPIN |
melo won on flow and punches all i look for
vote=melo http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87194 |
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first of all..... im a female... 2nd.. my pc froze and yea i dropped more lines thten i should have.. i said my bad.. wtf else do u want...n u said it was cool.... so why tthe fuck u still bitchin... yea.. uppin :) 1-1 |
this was a close battle
creativity=melo punches=melo personals=dominator flow=tie finisher=dominator wordplay=melo structure=tie very very close battle but melo takes this 3-2............no hate dominator good verse by both of u |
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totaly agreed |
HOW THE HELL IS STRUCTURE A TIE????? SHE WENT 4 BARS OVER THAT IS BS..... CAN I GET A MOD IN HERE TO TAKE AWAY YAZ's VOTE? HE DIDNT EXPLAIN JUST PASTED SOMEONE ELSES SHIT......
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as all i got to say is that it was prity evan but chill Dominator u dont have to be sutch a quear and try to sway the votes if i could vote just fo that shit i would vote aganst u!
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Im not trying to sway the votes... people need to take in consideration that she went 4 bars over and I am making sure they do that..... Therefore I won structure...... Yaz and Mr Iceman are idiots
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dominator had this with punches and flow......i liked both verses but melo's punches didnt land hard enough, and like dom said, he didnt follow the rules very well... maybe if u hadnt spent that 5 minutes extra, you wouldn't have written 4 extra lines
flow = dom punches = dom structure = melo vote = dominator |
lol.. dominater is the biggest bitch ive seen on this site so far... put all ur bitching n u got a full page.. wtf is wrong with u... i went over the lines n i didnt drop exactly on time we all kno this... quit fucking bitching u herb n accept the votes... good lord!..... "tell a mod to come here n take away their votes" <---lmao.... wow...
once again ... I AM A FEMALE... thanks everyone for the votes.. uppin numba 2 :) |
creativity-melo
punches-melo personals-dominator flow-dom finisher-dominator wordplay-melo structure-dom. was feelin melo more. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...rt&pagenumber=2 hit this up please. |
yo close battle i say. ima give it to dominator cuz
1. he stayed consistently hard through the verse 2. he followed the rules 3. better flow and rhythm in the verse melo i really felt ya verse at the end it go hard but the whole 1st half was just kinda draggin and laggin. good punches at the end though. and u broke rules...i understand the froze computer, but also went over the limit, thas just unnneeesssecary yooo my vote: DOM yall hit these up pleease...also post ya link for other battles when ya vote and i'll hit em all up honest http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88198 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88132 |
dom took this shit, in every aspect
he had better structure punches multis opener an closer VOTE:DOMINATOR |
melodramah, you say im tryna sway people lol sayin "of your the biggest whiner on this site"..... lol if you thought that youd say it in PM... not in here where you are influencing others.... whatever.... its 4-3 me now, 1 more vote until justice is served
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i aint tryin to sway nothing,,, ur the one arguing that the votes arent fair... i didnt say shyt bout none of the votes.. yup its 4-3... thanks every1 for voting... can we get some more :)
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ima not sure on this battle coz altho dominator had the right idea,structure and slight flow he bored me.....
breakdown= punches=tie...nuttin special sustainment=none flow=dominator metas=dominator multis=...... vocab=melo enjoyability=melo creativeness=melo overall=melo his verse jus dint bore me as much make sure ya hit the battle up in ma sig |
uppin numba 3 i think........ its 4-4.....................................oooooooooooo ooooooooo......................................... ............next vote its ovaaa hovaaaaa....................................haha
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punches=dominatorl
sustainment=none flow=dominator metas=dominator multis=melo vocab=dominator enjoyability=dominator creativeness=dominator overall=dominator overall I vote for: Dominator |
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