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Cryptic Thoughts vs. Hi my Name is
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due 5:30 no hate, crew, any of that... no feeding... no quoting votes.... explain em all thoroughly... |
His thoughts are Cryp-like, Along wit A.I. your no longer blueprint profection,
He'll show his stage-fright, Your font expresses how your stressin, can so he have his his lyrics way with He bends his words, Cyrptic rocks throw back celtic's jerseys, Anotha reason to flick him the bird, Comin in here, He's typin in bars cuz he's frightened by front lines, You elite? But he'd only be accepted if he injected his name wit mine, Your herb inflected, Look at your reflection befo ya clense the garden, His record perfected, And my lyrics reach the space, Leave ya in stardom, Profile shows nothing, A nobody perhaps outside of net-battling, Discombobulate ya brain...Your thoughts resemble ya friends...Scattering! |
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And keying... Never even had a prime, sure sucks to be you And if I had your skills, I'd start posting on an alias too Always gettin boos to the best of my recolection So now when he writes a verse, just visits his cd collection Your not good with words, change your name, im not a hater But intimidating anyone is hard, when you rhyme like a 3rd grader Like havin no visa,you aint get a-broad..stick to fuckin the guys. Forget seein titties,when ya die,ya life wouldnt even flash infront of ya eyes! A leader? Nah kid.. Nerbie Rec was sorry dude... Shit had to fold when you knew a member could merk you. |
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so if ya don't mind... i'ma just type it normally............ yup.. not changing anything around...but.... line 3 didn't work right... so lemme make it normal His thoughts are Cryp-like, Along wit A.I. your no longer blueprint profection, He'll show his stage-fright, Your font expresses how your stressin, He Bends his lyrics so he can have his way with his words, Cyrptic rocks throw back celtic's jerseys, Anotha reason to flick him the bird, Comin in here, He's typin in bars cuz he's frightened by front lines, You elite? But he'd only be accepted if he injected his name wit mine, Your herb inflected, Look at your reflection befo ya clense the garden, His record perfected, And my lyrics reach the space, Leave ya in stardom, Profile shows nothing, A nobody perhaps outside of net-battling, Discombobulate ya brain...Your thoughts resemble ya friends...Scattering! |
Im givin my vote to Cryptic...
His Punches were more consistent and Even though Hi My Name is were also there, His were just hitting harder.. Good Battle, Return the Favor and like Vote On my battle vs. LM greatly appreciated Vote-Cryptic Thoughts. |
I can't Vote....So If Any Of the Mods Don't Mind, I'll Come On My Alias And Vote For this...So That We can Keep it is Polled.
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Cryptic Thaughts...I dunno. Punches were more consistent. A basic but effective rhymescheme.
HMNI...used a slew of vocab and he had a few good metas. But CT personals killed him. CT got this one if someone could vote for me....I'm almost there dammit! |
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Punches-Cryptic
Flow-Cryptic Multi-Cryptic Wordplay-Hi Strcuture-Both Overal-Cryptic Yep, as usual Cryptic takes this one hands down. Chrit are you trying to set the highest record for wins without a loss or what? Vote on this for me please: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88069 |
cyrptic took this battle. even though hi had a couple whitty lines, one about the slanted writing..nothing really hit too hard. and flow was way off like way out of beat to read at least, i dont know how ya meant it. cyptic kept it short simple and hard. consistent punches through out
my fav line was Always gettin boos to the best of my recolection So now when he writes a verse, just visits his cd collection my vote: cryptic yall hit this up if ya get a chance, and post whatever other battles u got goin and i'll hit it up honestly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88132 |
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Not Chrit. I've heard the comparison. But its not there man. |
ight uppin this.... good battle....
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opener:cryptic
closer:my name is wordplay:cryptic structure:tie punches:cryptic overall:cryptic nice battle of both cats, cryptic jus came aharder than the other dude |
flow=cryptic
punches=hi structure=cryptic creativity=cryptic wordplay=hi overall=cryptic got this cuz hi my name is had more punches but they weren't hard enuff cryp had harder punches--- |
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