In this crazy World,
 

In this crazy World,



A weapon, Used to vent anger,Funnel frustration,
This Nation,Fucked up method of self annilation,
This world cant handle feelings, Hate inner healing,
Thoughtful meaning, Happiness is dead, But like a
dead rose still hasnt lost it's beauty, Just hangs an
inch from ure face like a good booty,A peice of paper
and pens like a vent in a steamy room,Channels out
the gloom,Each words like the first step on the moon,
But yet again this crazy world's never changed, From
Sept 11 to the gladiator Games,To this world a lone
Protestor begins to rise,So why do we stand the hate
we despise? Rise!We should at least fix a compromise,
Deadly lies,We know this world lives for conflict, Its
needs a verdict,, Before its to late, Its fates fucked,
The bulled came but it didnt duck,Too late outta luck,
Some look to the stars hopeful, For a means of escape,
Solar systems weight, On there shoulder, Refusin to
beleave jesus moved the boulder,Belivers look forward
to tellin non beleivers told-ya,Others dont care because
theyve already made heaven, Got rich cause' they paved
Down a rare forest for a seven eleven,

Chorus*3
In this crazy world,
Why do we stand the hate,
In this crazy world,
For it's fate we'd sooner debate,
In this crazy world,

Really just some thoughts perusing my head

aight

this was a tight piece cuz..................i was feelin yo wordplay..........this was a nice topic as well..........

my favorite line

A weapon, Used to vent anger,Funnel frustration,
This Nation,Fucked up method of self annilation

^^^very nice opener cuz

good drop


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thanks uppin,

Sick! One word to explain the whole thing! I liked the topic and you kept it on it to. I gotta agree the wordplay was real tight!!

thanks uppin.........................

come on need some more replies...............

more ereplies please

yes i agree it wus a nice piece good werdplay,nice vocabulay,metas are good

That shit was ill cuz keep doing what you doing

something other than a one liner but thanks anyway

i like the message you sending, the world has gone mad, good topic

thannks......

very well writtin, you had great emotion and thoughts in that, made the reader stick in right until the last line, nice vocab also very unique keep that up peace

thanks.....

emotion showed some great emotion (lol)... whole verse flowed well, and it was a nice topic u chose.... ur flow didnt rhyme at the end of each line, but it rhymed internally, and thats hot stuff in my opinion... vocab needs work, and actual rhyming could be better, but is still top stuff.... the main thing that stood out was your dope wordplay.. some of the best ive read this week.. nice job, keep writing ill be looking for more stuff by you

8.5/10

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fuck off ...............

thanks wog....

uppin.........................