Johnny C. vs. The Wang
 

aight, rules are as followes:
15 mins.
6-8 lines

That is all.
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ok down.....


Lately these bitches have been acumalating/
Im thinkin, how many bong loads ill be takin/
The crime scene, is where you will be, with bullet wounds from the head to the spleen/
a weed fiend at the age of 16 is likely to be at the head of his team/
so genlty as i creep/
picturing all these slain noobies that ill beat/
dont got time to sleep and all i think about is how/
im gonna make the scrill to buy my next pound/

here ya are:

in about 16 mins., this fuckin new-bie
will soon see that he should not have duled me!
he'll soon know this MC, in other words, me
is tha dopest thing since coke- I'm Johnny C.!
Here's a question for ya, wang, "is yer girl at yer house?"
(answer:) naw, she's HERE, wit mah dick in her mouth!
Psst... listen up to me- mah rhymes are so sick,
that they'll force u tah choke worse than yo' girl suckin mah dick!

hmmmmmmm so we just wait till some people vote.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............

boo-ya! nice rhyme, wang, nice rhyme. i really liked yer 3rd and 4th lines the most (great rhyme scheme). here's my opinion: lay offa tha drugs, an lay some mo' insults(but i aint hatin).

ANYWAYZ---- YALL MFRS OUT THERE @ HOME-----
COME ON AN VOTE FO' ONE OF US- IT'LL BE GREATLY APPRECIATED!!!!! THANX, CATS

da's right, homeboi. jus' gotta wait it out.

nice battle, dawg.
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hmmm can some one vote or some shit.............................................. .................................................. ....................................

this is my first battle can someone at least tell me i suck or sumthing.......................................... ...........

Lately these bitches have been acumalating/
Im thinkin, how many bong loads ill be takin/
The crime scene, is where you will be, with bullet wounds from the head to the spleen/
a weed fiend at the age of 16 is likely to be at the head of his team/

Psst... listen up to me- mah rhymes are so sick,
that they'll force u tah choke worse than yo' girl suckin mah

^^ best lines of da battle

Stil i thought u both lacked punches
no meta4pors
good shit for newbs
v-The wang
jonny elevate u guys are pretty even
1
hit me up aim The wang

^^ the best shit from DA WANg

IF I CUD VOTE MY VOTE WUD GO TO JHONNY V, I LIKED HIS PUNCH LINES BETTER, ANT THE WANG U WANTED OPINIONS UR STYLE IS NEWBIEISH BUT U DONT SUCK......OK.............LATER

aight, thanx 4 tha votes, yall.

Uppin for votes (1)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))))))))
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this was a whack battle.....................elevation is needed

flow=johnny
creativity=wang
structure=wang
punches=johnny
punches=johhny

my vote=johnny

holla

Wackness supreme..............look at some vet battles and elevate.................

Vote
jonhny

cuz he at least had some sort of punches

yo

jonny you took this battle

Here's a question for ya, wang, "is yer girl at yer house?"
(answer naw, she's HERE, wit mah dick in her mouth!
Psst... listen up to me- mah rhymes are so sick,
that they'll force u tah choke worse than yo' girl suckin mah dick!

thats hot yo

i would vote for you but i cant

sorry yo

1

uppin............................................. .................................................. ......................................

ok ok wang had good flow and volcab, but jonny c took it cuz he was actualy throwin punchs(weak ones but punchs non the less)
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my vote goes to Jonny c

uppinnn........................................... .................................................. ....................................

Need to elevate

flow=johnny
creativity=wang
structure=wang
punches=johnny
punches=johhny

my vote=johnny

flow..............johnny
creativity......wang
structure.........wang
punches..........johnny
punches.........johhny

my vote=johnny

ok not a great battle both were very basic but i think although they were basic they sounded aight....i liked johny c's a lil more that line about ur girl freind sucking my dick was ill,,,,,i bet it sound tight face to face....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93558
aight pz........

can you check>>>>