melodramah vs. The Wang
 

8-12 lines..
blind spit..
must drop an hour after check in..
no crew..
no d/r..
all regular rules..

1 hour timer starts after u check in................................................ .................................................. .....................dramah gonna wiiiiin

ok then i guess i got 1 hr startin now............................................... ...............

hey can you tell me why dramah will win/
cause after this bottle of hen my flow will just begin/
can you comprehend, that your bitch made ass will not last/
I hit the gas, your scared so you say im moving to fast/
and i say glass, is the best quality do you follow me/
I roll 3 deep, my pockets reek, of the club's best weed/
your dad gave you a wink, and before i could blink/
you were on top of him and i think it lasted a week/
hey i never said it was the truth, but if you choose to lose/
then come attack me with my duce duce/

THink about it hard dawg ill tell u that much
this lil slute god sum skillz i heard
use puncches like eta4ors an shit...look at other battels wit cats that are good
ull get da hang up it
ill be back to vote on yall when u all drop
hit my shit up wit arrogan fag
pc

who the fucc are you.......your not dvg.......your douch nozzle.....plz...and when i say plz i mean plz take it off your sig...or you can leave it there and be really gay this time

and by the fuckin way you dumbass fagg...you cant vote because you dont got over 100 posts.....stupid ass slut bag

IM DA DEFINITON OF DVG Kid
dont try da front da ville nugga
u livei n a poll house kido
stop frontin
ill vote when other nigga drops

woot
woot

if your dvg then tell me what it means and never say im frontin again fag............................................... .......................

....................you still dont understand........................................ .................................................. ..

.........................opps bro my bad......i just reas your other posts and i figured out who you are.......wow i fell like a dumbass

im blowin u to pieces with my textage, leaving u breathless, killin u in 60 minutes like flex did/
just rest kid, this rap is 4 experts, after reading my lines u got pains in ur head n ya neck hurts/
just go to sleep like deaths cousin, i read ya profile, sad to hear ya occupation is dick suckin/
i take this shyt serious, i got more flow then a bitch do on her period, leavin all wannabe rappers delirious/
u kno ur minds playin tricks, ur like a rookie, ballin, straight throwin up bricks/
too bad the Wang cant hang, you'll never claim ur fame, they can stand u like missy & the rain/
ur verse is rehearsed, its effective like a brand new whip that only drives in reverse/
no one ever heard of DVG, some kinda underground club w/ no entrance fee? only acceptin males for orgy?/
your first battle n its a loss served to you on a platter, testing ya pride, u got beaten by a chick for that matter/
my shyt is solid w/ no cracks to slip through, battlin me is like fightin a asian knowin they master kung fu/
this battles been done.. ill help u since ur RB journey's just begun, them 5 votes up there.. that means I won/

^^u talkin bout me??

i only got 1 thing to say.......swear my occupation is dick sucking??????..................................... ...........

huh?? in ya profile it says... occupation.. n u got a picture of a dick.... yea thats right.. lol.. its a battle kid.. chill...no beef..........................................lets get sum votes

lmao.... u took it out of ur profile.................................juyst so every1 knows....he HAD a pic of a dick next to occupation.. k , thanks

its chill just that verse was funny............................................. .................................................. ......................................

here ill put it back for you cuase i know you missed the pic of that dicc.............................................. ...................................

too much freeposting in this battle............................................ ..................n what u mean by funny, huh? lol

look at it now........and for people who dont know wut that means its a wang jucing on melo......................................ohh and dont worrry i know you like penis

lmao......................................anyways. .. quit freeposting........lol, lets get votes............................................. .................................................. ..

ya thats what i thought you said in the frist place......ya quit freeposting,,,,,,,lets get votes..............................

flow..melo
punches..melo
vocab..melo
originality..both verses had played lines
metaphors..melo but there wasnt many
personals...melo

overall...Melodramah....



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88569

i'm not breakin this down-----wang didn't throw any hard punches at all---melo got this with flow, punches, metas, wordplay, personals--wang ya need spit harder dawg use more punchlines.
vote=melo

peep my battle wit gametime yo

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melo, watch it dawg, your lines are waaay too long, shorten your lines duke

but even so, melo got this, the other man was truly outclassed....an obvious merking, harder punches, better quality, every aspect

vote = melo

and Wang, careful w/ ur freepost

freepost like those are considered as uppin's, mods will DQ, when u freepost like that and too many times, they count it as uppins and 5 uppins = DQ

jes a warnin

I think its pretty clear that melo merked this cat....the wang (lol) displayed no skills at all, punches were lacking, etc...and lengthen out your lines a bit.

melo had fucked up structure....don't do that..lines stretched as fuck....but he had some nice punches in there...so vote=melo

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88551

melo came harder with a better flo better punches each had some played lines but melo took this pretty easily the missy in the rain line and ur closer pretty much gave u the win