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AusRotten VS PAK N. Heat
10-15 lines max
'30 mintes to drop pc checkininiininin ity in let me go smoke ill be back 1 checki in bitch an spit |
ight w/e.... heres ma check in... i will have me shyt up and ready to ur ass........ BITCH........................................
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"Aus" here be "pak n heat" under his belt for a win//
i bomb "da illest ville"*, and make way wit ur corpse again//* he says he from da illest ville. pre-written ur shyt just to "pak" a quick victory// i "whip" this kid, and he nickname me "hickory"*//**they whip people with hickory sticks. link ur "fist" to ur "mouth", so u can get a "punch spitten"// ur shyt is wack so "edit" ur post, think bout it, then "written"// Dont fuckin think ur badass, or that u hard as "nails"// if so then call me "MC HAMMER" cause i ram ur shyt till it de rails// to end this, i conseal "heats" life in "flames" like a weapon// douse his faggit ass, then send him 6 feet deep he be reppin.... blah...... aus...... outie |
aite...
YA newb.i no the truth i merk herbs,l creatin danger// ill switch my nine wit rhymes an put ten in da chamber// AUs you can call me the "fire-starter" how i defeat this dead-beat// Leave ya red-meat, cuz im spittin-harder,flames wit my lyrikal-heat// I left ya corpse in a hacthet near ya casket, Buried Beneath the floor// Im blastin verbal vinicular man slaughters,try an a say a punch i havent said be4// YA net cee record is FAlse homie, i no your a phony cuz your weak an wak// PLus it hasnt occured to u that ill beat u before the weekend pasts// My stragegery is savagry as im shottin holow tips at ya team// YA games rotten.leavin ya brains poppin, wit da infar red beam// my spits come viscious cuz ill a menace at this rap game// Ill tear u apart at da stiches winning at the end of this sentence cuz u cant rap mayne// fuk off bitch wutvea i came weak |
lol...... u try to start beef and i dont even fuckin know u homie....... plus... nvm..... i aint sawin shyt.... let the votes come in......
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^^LOL
ok let da votes begin let em speak for em selfssssssssssssssssss nugga ......................... |
lololololol ya i like what pak said/.....let the votes speak............................................. ..................................
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ok this was a good battle for 2 newbs..
Punches= PAK Flow= Pak Stucture= Pak Creativity= Pak Personals= None Overall= PAK N. Heat keep the good shit up mayne..Pz |
i didnt have to read pak's whole verse to kno he got this...
nice verse.. "YA newb.i no the truth i merk herbs,l creatin danger// ill switch my nine wit rhymes an put ten in da chamber//" ^^ill altho pak u kinda fell off towards the end.. no hate good verse aus it was a iight verse.. keep elevating .. hit this w/ a honest vote plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88602 |
opener-good shit Pak N Heat
closer-tie punches-Pak best line status-Pak...chamber enjoyment-Pak originality-Pak personals-think i saw Pak hit one just cuz dude took all the categories doesnt mean this was a blowout....good shit by both vote-Pak |
ight its kewl...... nice verse pak n heat...... no hate or anything ma man....... nice job... peace out...
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fosho uppin for my first win
thanks man good battle it was tite.............................................. .....................holla |
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Begginin:pak
Finish:aus Punchs:pak Volcab:pak Structur:pak Wordplay:pak Over All:pak this was a tight battle on paks behalf, but aus has some goos shit, just pak's better Yo check this battle and u post who u think one and shit. Yaz vs Mc-UsKi |
ight thx for da opinion.... ma man....... and nice job heat..........,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.............. ................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,...............................
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this my first vote yall, n my vote goes 2...........PAK N HEAT
his opener and his puches were better..........good battle...... peace |
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uppin 4 my last vote
.................................................. ............................ HOLla at it................................................ .... |
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YA newb.i no the truth i merk herbs,l creatin danger//
ill switch my nine wit rhymes an put ten in da chamber// hot line pak |
Pak N Heat took this shit by far
Punches=PAK Wordplay=PAK Personal=PAK Multi's=PAK Meta's=PAK Creativity=PAK Overall=PAK |
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