|
Dominator -vs- Split-Eyez
10 Bars Max...
20 minute timit limit..... Checkin and the time starts |
checkin in
be spittin in 20 mins <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
You need to take note of your own sig because this is YOUR warning /
After I finish bustin out this verse your whole family will be mourning // I will not only slit your eyes, you fucking herb I will slit your throat // Runnin blood is the only flow youll have, thats pathetic what you wrote // And ive only just begun, your losses are eleven and your only one win/ Do the game a favor and retire your mic and take up the damn violin // Dawg you couldn't murder me if you traded the mic in for a machine gun // And dawg youve battled 4X as much as me and I have 4 times as many won / Shit man if I gave you some brass knucks you still couldn't throw a punch // Its ok though you just saved me $5 in food, cuz I just ate you for LUNCH // |
I spray the soul of ya text and piss on whatever that’s hovering cuz Split’s leaving ya lines out of order like blind men coloring/
So why ya grinin? If ya wonna smile then smile but the votes will shift ya face….Time fo all the kats to know that youz only droppin lines cuz ya too weak to lift the weights/ You couldn’t beat me if I layed my dick in ur hand and said grab this cuz Your words are fukin weak like Ja Rule’s ‘I’m real’ remix/ ill have you lookin like that fag rappin for pennys, the only way you could ever raise steaks is liftin T-bone platters at denny's/ Youz a groupie bitch whose condoms fit loosely… how you expect to show some muscle and push....if ya can hardly move me / you could'nt "imitate" my text if i gave you my log-on-password, just one question…."..how many times do you want to get ya ass served?/ You might as well give in to ya feelings an adore-me..in battles you perform-poorly…,it's like your "corky" trying to play-porn star-in-a-orgy.../ Fukin herb, … youz being slaughtered! Even if this was a broken silence, I’d still be the loudest This sissy’s Been-Grounded,… beaten and pounded,… have U Peeps 'Eva Found The Recipe For Wackness'?Cause This Weak-Slut's-Found-It! |
UPPIN FO VOTES
no hate, but yo shit was weak <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
Damn!
Really good battle here. I'm very pleasantly surprised. Kudos to both. Seriously. But someone's gotta lose and eventually everyone loses... That's the case for Dominator, sorry, my man. You took the personals and format, and flow. But this cat got his second win (despite the stretched lines, stop that shit!!!) with harder punches, better wordplay, and nicer metas. A couple of lines actually had me go, "Oh!" Sneakily impressive, Split Eyez Seriously, though... Shorten ya lines, fast. Peace |
^^yo thanks fo honest uppin
appreciated ill do sumthin bout the lines dawg still uppin fo votesss <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
yes this was a good battle...that fuckin strecthed line shit pissed me off..haha........
but anyway personal-dominator opener-Split-didnt really like it that much..but was more creative closer-split-haha...sounded like an angry mahfucka punches-dominator consistency-tie creativity-Split structure-dominator best line-dominator--4x line enjoyment-tie fuck man close battle............................................ . everything was close but i give it to dominator for having best line........good shit by both |
thanks.... uppin for more.... and split dont be hatin..... look @ your own shit b4 you judge...
"cuz Your words are fukin weak like Ja Rule’s ‘I’m real’ remix" HAHAHHAHA.... lame... whatever.... uppin tho |
Uppin X 2222222222222222222222222222
.................................................. ................................................. |
Dom your doin well.........bring this home for Revolution.............................
Peace!!! |
yo i think this battle was a tie
good raps by both of u check out my battle: rhythm vs ill-fresh thx 1 |
nice battle
flow=split creativitiy=dominator structure=dominator punches=tie........... wordplay=dominator my vote=dominator holla |
werd....
UPPIN X 3 .................................................. .............................. |
i like dominators flows n punches better...
no hate split but i liked doms better i would vote but i cant |
yall check out my last battle plzzz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1555#post871555 thanks peace out |
ait here it goes
punches-tie opener-spit closer-tie personals-tie wordplay-dom overal-split yo good ass battle realy realy really close http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5413#post875413 honest vote please |
Begginin:dom
Finish:dom Punchs:dom Volcab:split Structur:dom Wordplay:split Over All:dom Yo check this battle and u post who u think one and shit. Yaz vs Mc-UsKi |
thanks fo honest comments
appreciate it yo dom, no hate intented with that comment that ya shit was weak but I've seen ya doin betta <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
Split no problem, I wrote it at college and my friends were tryna get me to hurry up so we could go out to lunch haha..... thats where I thought of the "I just ate you for lunch" line.... anyways yah I didn't need to come out at full force to win I didnt think.... btw one of yourr better verses....
|
^^ aight dawg, thanks fo ya honesty man
neva intended any hate so it's all good thanks fo ya comments on mah verse, very much appreciated resp |
Honesty? Well I wasnt saying I think you won lol.... I was just sayin it was one of your better verses but uhh yah
UPPIN |
my vote goes to dominator , over all his shyt was better, split eyes was good but i think dominator had better punches
|
|
wordplay=dom
vocab=split punches=dom metas=non personals=non overall=dom he got this better wordplay split needs to work on setup and make setences small it was wack hollaz |
Uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............
|
Born had a pretty good point with split and his punches...however the verse was annoying as fuck to read with the stretched lines...also flow was extremely choppy....and overall a very inconsistent verse.
dominator came ok....decent punches....flow was aight...wordplay blah...came pretty average just enough to win this battle. Vote=dom |
| All times are GMT -4. The time now is 11:24 AM. |