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Deva \vs/ D~Abyss~
10 Lines Max
No Bullshit...d/r etc No Crew Votes 12hrs Max To Drop Checkin Before Drop |
aight, ima checkin in, take it its a blind drop............dunno why you want 12 hours, but its coo......i'll post up later then.....
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Check...Cus i got shit to do
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Found ‘Abyss’ in the dictionary, it sums this up blissfully/
It Means void, which means ‘annulled’, like you…. History!/ It also means ‘deep hole’, which is kinda significant/ Gonna toss ya into one, RB to RIP im just so fucking militant / You named yourself after a film, bout water sort’a living/ Kinda like you, see through, wet, bland, not very filling/ Speakin of fillings, like the ones in your teeth your fake/ Like the ‘void’ they fill, a leave ya with metaphoric toothache/ by ya standards so far, another defeat without doubt of MANY/ It’s a good job ya a ‘bottomless gulf’ - well … to drop a bad penny/ ~D~, dont take all day to post yours, i wanna get it goin.k....... |
This Tom Hanks wannab outa this world..runnin for the forest
I got Ya Corupted visions so merked Masta C'l become a florist Fuckin retard..ya gotta look my name up in the dictionary This fools writin into the abyss like hes playin pictionary My drops religous...ya so wack all ya rhymes outa my book This niggaz lines like his gurl..aint gettin a second look I spit flames...when i drop peeps be sayin "fire in the hole" This herbs meetin the King Pin..n gettin straight bowled My illness gives ya night fever so ya can be like Travolta Usin my lyrical tools likka drill sergeant im quick to fault ya Explinations: -Tom hanks was in forest gump runnin alot...aliens run 2 d forest -His crew is called Corupted visons n d leader is Masta C -His verse is straight out d dictionary -Ya smoke weed/ herbs in a bowl -Hes's called Deva...like disco deva..John Travolta was in night fever lol drunken keystyle |
Flow- D~Abyss [not by much tho your last 2 lines fell off]
Punches- Deva Vocab- Deva [By far... annulled, blissfully, metaphorically] Creativity- Deva [I liked that tooth shit] Overall: Deva D~Abyss.... no hate man but you came outta kinda weak, your last battle -vs- me, even tho it was 5-0, was still a lot stronger. Your first six lines wernt bad man but just look at your rhymes in the last 4 lines.... they were weak.... and haha NEVER EVER rap about John Travolta.... anyways I thought id try to help a lil cuz ive faced ya twice, seen yo shit and think your a cool cat so yah... Please hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...light=dominator |
i'll hit your but it'll have to be tomorrow, im fucked and goin to bed....aight........................peace!
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i disagree with the first voter.
punches - abyss flow - tied as usual multies - none overall : yall came extremely well for a front lines battle. nice job.. but abyss won this with more creativity and a few good punches... both nice job keep it up . |
abyss won with punches thats it that was a striaght verse
vote=abyss http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87194 |
thanks fo votin
gimmi a min to hit up them battles some 1 aint polled... 3-0 me uppin 1 ............................. .............................. ........................... ............................. ............................. ........................ |
NICE BATTLE BOTH HAD NICE FLOW AND SUM AIGHT LINES
punches=abyss personals=abyss metas=deva flow=tie sustainment=abyss vocab=tie overall=abyss MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THE BATTLE IN MA SIG OR I'LL KEEP BUGGIN YA |
~D~ you said some one hasn't voted, 3-0 to you, but if you look you'll see the one who hasn't poll'd voted for me................2-1, aight.......
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sorry man i didn't see Brix's vote....
so it should be 3-1 to you,.......peace! ............................................. |
decent battle
both came out strong with good punches but I think I'll have to go for abyss becuz he came hard with every line he dropped good flows and creativity as well vote - abyss cud you return da favur? thx http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=88993 |
i voted on this so make sure youz hit the battle in ma sig............................................... .................................................. ...........................................pz
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yeh yeh i voted
uppin 2 shit yeh its 4-1 not 5-0...lol :whacky: ......................... ............................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ............................ |
Flow- Deva
Punches - Abyss Personals - Deva Multis - Deva Meta4s - Abyss Rhyme Scheme - Originality - Deva... coz it was so personal Structure - Both Vote = Deva I felt Deva edged the more important catergories... Abyss brought madd heat an props dawg... its jus Deva aimed every punch direct coz it was all personal... thas the way i try to do it... nicee wordplay from Abyss tho... jus try an get more specific to ur opponent. Peep this both of u: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88456 I voted honestly... now its ur turn. |
lol youz always votin against me...ahwell
thanks fo votin 4-2 Me Up 3 ...................... ................... ......................... ..................... ...................... ................ |
I gotta gives props to Deva for creativity but heres my breakdown:
punches - abyss personals - deva (lookin up the name) flow - abyss creativity - deva opener - deva closer - abyss It was a close one in my opinion but Abyss got it on punches. Vote Abyss |
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