SS - Hanging On (True Story)
 

.. Information Told ..

Never Let Go.. The Soul Cant Hold You..
Never Let Go.. The Soil That Molds You..
Never Let Go.. For Theirs Always A Reason..
Never Let Go.. Their There If You Need Them..

Your Mothers Got Cancer.. That’s What They Told Him..
He Cried Oceans, For The Shit He Wished They Never Shown Him..
Scolded, From An Abusive Fatherhood..
Fists That Showered Him, Bothered Him..
Cigarette Burns, N’ Smoke Inhalation..
He’d Cry Happiness To Face Him……….. Rehabilitated..
It’s the Hope Of Not Knowing.. What To Hang On Too..
The Hope Of Not Knowing.. Of Hope That Came Upon You..

.. Never Losing Sight ..

He Never Lost The Dream.. That His Life Was Meant For..
Stay Focused, Despite The Problems He Had Resent For..
His Mother Withering Away, With Her Skin Touching Tone..
His Home.. Fermented Foundation, Slowly Time Has Broke..
Provoked, Father To Never Quit.. But He Still Held Strong..
Hell’s Song, Upon The Platform Their Relationship Would Melt On..
Getting Older, His Youth Taking His Thoughts Attention..
Actions Burning, But Never Lost His Thoughts Intentions..
He Held Tight, For What’s Right, Knew Things Would Look Up..
Father Beating Him (shook up)..……………………….He Stood Up..
He Stood For What He Believed In, The Rights Of His Heart..
The Fight He Didn’t Start.. And The Family Ripped Apart..
For His Love.. His Mom On Drugs, Ivine And Cancer Treatment..
The Beatins, He Endured Upon The Love Of His Secret..
The Confinement Of A Kid, Who Was Shown Nothing But Doubt..
Stood Proud.. Cuz He Never Lost Sight Of What He Talked About..
Precise.. Life Striked Twice For Problems He Never Forgot To Write..
Thought The Price, Was Pointless……..He Never Lost Sight..

.. Hung Up ..

He Called Me.. Middle Of The Night, Phone Shakin The Wire..
“I Killed Him” Murmured Before His Home Awakened A Fire..
He Ran To The Hospital.. To Visit His Mother In Bed..
Nothin He Said.. As The Nurse Told Him His Mother Was Dead..
“Can I See Her” He Asked.. As He Wiped The Ash From His Hands Onto His Pants..
As He Advanced, He Backed On The Facts.. He Loved Her, Just Wish He Had The Chance..
He Never Lost Sight, But Questioned Whether Or Not He Had Ought To..
As The Situation Was Brought To.. He Wondered Where His Life Had Gone To..
The Blood Washed In The Rain, Looking To Find What Was Told..
Sat Down, Face To The Sky And Drifted His Mind From His Soul..

He Never Let Go.. The Soul Couldn’t Hold Him..
He Never Let Go.. The Soil That He Molds In..
He Never Let Go.. For Theirs Always A Reason..
He Never Let Go.. They Disappeared When He Need Them..
Thought He Had The Answer, But In Reality.. Didn’t Yet Know..
Hanging On To Life Is Nothing.. If Life Lets Go..


True Story.. He Commited Sucide In The Park That Night.
I Was Friends With Him.. This Is How I Know What Went On.
Thought I Would Get It out Here.. Writers Block.. Props To Chrit
....................................RIP........... .......................
..............................Cory Miller..............................
................................9/25/02................................

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Wow.. Didn't Know Open Mic
Was This Bad

yo auspicious...i gotta give you mad props on this junk....i was feeln your emotion the whole time....flowed nice....you spit that on mic yet? that would be dope to a slow hard beat....kinda like Eminem's Love Me.....wow I'm feeln that, I just spit it out loud to that beat....nice bro.....good wordplay imagery...but the emotion got me the most...props to you dawg...PEACE

Wow.. Thank You !
Really, Thanks.. Lmao.. Is Their
Any More Ppl Browsin Tha Bored
That Can Do Better That That ^^ ?

:)

I Guess Not.
Dont Sleep Damnit

wow man, mad probs
nice piece,
filled with emotions, it took me aback.
Nice shit... it felt like you were standing there, watching it happen slowly, wanting to help but for some reason you just can't move. I guess that's just what life's about, dealin with shit like that.
Anywayz, I was really feelin it, keep dropping and
I'm ver sorry to hear bout your friend.
peace

Thanks Bro
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Wow man,when you said you were the topical champ you weren't kidding mad props Alex.Yeah when someone commits sucide & they are really close to you it's really hard to get over.Dope piece overall:7/10

7/10..Aww You Bastard..Lol
Any More ?

ahhhh...Dope shit auspicious....It flowed tight and had good Rythem to it....Keep up the good work.....1

Uppin

up

He Cried Oceans< that was very appropriate & tight where it was & also a dope opener. .

His Mother Withering Away, With Her Skin Touching Tone..
His Home.. Fermented Foundation, Slowly Time Has Broke..
Provoked, < nice switch up, maybe a bit too early on in the
piece but it didn't hinder the flow. .So all good

But generally they were all very deep & meaningful lines to keep interest throughout the piece. .I think I can say. .You done the man proud. .I really felt this piece. .Props. .

Werd.. Thanks Bro

n' up we go

I was feelin the home time..bad rhymes but from the heart..peace

dawg i was feeling ya in that


Aiight Peace (v)

Emotion was high man, flow was wonderful (Dayum, I said wonderful). I was feelin this piece throughout. The story told was great, sorry to hear bout ya boy though man, musta been rough for him though. Imagery was good, Multi's were present here and there and when they were, boy were they powerful.

Prime Example:

Precise.. Life Striked Twice For Problems He Never Forgot To Write..
Thought The Price, Was Pointless……..He Never Lost Sight..

^^ Dope.

Overall man, this was real deep and dope, I enjoyed it.

-Formula.

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