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Do or Die \\VS// Tek
10-14 lines
Due 2hrs from when u see this No feedin off the other nucca Come wit heat kid... |
juss a reminder u dropin first and i'm, commin wit fire
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Its Do_Or_Die time... do u do me or die tryin?
leave this fag cryin... at the site of Gods Wrath ur dyin... Murked an hurt... i'll deliver shots to ur mouth... like Kurt return u to the dirt... top blown off to really let ur thoughts splurt... Its like takin hammers to roach's... when Tek approaches leave u so lost wit punches... like 1 way tickets on Greyhound Coaches... Im only half done wit this child... at the moment my disposition is mild but when i flip the script... even the back pages are wild... Here comes the tenth line... to continue poppin from number 9 its a strike kid... 1 line smashed ur 10... wit a flow so fine... Now u can carry on where i left off... this herbs exposed Done_An_Dead... u jus gotta pull the lid closed. |
Thas a dozen of the best... match it... an post quick.
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I see ur on-line... how long does it take to key suttin up?!?!
It took me 29 mins... . ... ..... ....... ......... ....... ..... ... . |
U got tha tek I’m commin wit at shotty to blow off yo neck, leavin looking like the second version of shrek//..1
Ur 5-1 bout to be five and two cause I spittin some sick shit that’s gonna give u lost # 2//..2 Ur still a newbie cause that’s all u battle,u need to stop wit ur bullshit prattle//..3 Ur vocab is worse than retards in English class, I can spot u by 4 votes and u still cant KO my ass///..4 Dogg u a lil guy and I’m a vet,u can be a virgins pussy horny and still couldn’t be wet//..5 Ur 222 posts don’t mean shit,when ur 5 and 1 and cant produce a decent spit//..6 All ur shit was basic wit no personals at all,thats the worse shit rapbattles eva saw//..7 U shit was expected to suck so my expectations came correct,ause u getting charged more than a murder suspect//..8 I can see ur name in my sig right now,cause after this battle I’m tha one taking the bow//..9 This cat cant produce like a retarded cow,cause I’m tha chosen 1 like this battle is kung pow//..10 This is my last line of tha verse that ripped u,this is like tha liston vs ali fight cause u cant continue//..11 Prattle means: idle or foolish and irrelevant talk |
WOW!!! Erry single one of those lines was so original an not in the slightest bit played...
I luvd the 'Shrek' line too...! . ... ..... ....... ......... ....... ..... ... . |
very close battle
flow=tek punches=do or die...........tek u didnt really have any creativity=do or die wordplay=tek personals=do or die............very weak but again tek u really didnt have any my vote=do or die holla |
1-0 me uppin 4 votes
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^^stfu uppin 4 votes
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uppin 4 votes
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Do or Die started offf good but finished bad, if your going to come strong finish strong... I say Tek never could of won i didnt think he had goog hit lines... Winner DO or Die
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ima start this of by sayin' doOrdie wuz to simplistic
vocab-tek punchs-doOrdie flow-tek struc.-tek creativ-tek Do Or Die had easy lines...i meen his 2nd line he rhymed what? and then the spit and shit rhyme (WTF) so tek won this AYYO PLZ DROP A VOTE ON ME AND BORN SOULJAS BTTLE...LINK IS MY SIG...RETURN DA FAVUR |
yo do or die
ur rap was nice yo the whole thing was hot i would vote but i cant....sorry but dont really matter that i cant vote...cuz u fuckin merked tek u took that battle....and u did come wit heat... |
flow-tek
personals-dod vocab-tek metas-dod creativity-tek It was a close battle but it was Tek after these areas. Poll a vote if you can http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89096 |
i had this nigga 2-0 and i'll tha sudden he starts getting votes ya'll some fuckin ryders read are spits befo u pay attenion to records fuck dickryder i should have a mod check ya'll out
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i liked do or die's flow alote betta....
and ryme il try to put up er vote fo him to................................................ ...................................... |
uppin 4 votes
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Flow-Tek
Punches-Do Personals-Both Structure-Tek Vocab-Do Originality-Do Overal-Do This was not a bad battle at all, both cats came pretty hard. Good job, and props to both. Do, shorten your lines and you will be even better. |
uppin 4 votes
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yo i gotta give this to dod cause he was consistant wit his punches and he had tight personals on tha other hand tek was ight but his punches didnt hit hard and he had no personals.
Vote:dod |
tek for a battler u came a lil weak kid ya flow was right on point but that alone wont clinch the win sorry/ but do or die her came better his flow coulda been better but to your verse that was a least of his concearn his punches hit harder wasnt to cleache so yeah my vote=do or die
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