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dom-N8 v.s. Forshadower
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due at 6 pm eastern, if you miss deadline by a couple of minutes its cool, but don't post too late.... no bullshit votes |
how longs that from now forshadower, I'm in a different time zone.............................................. .........................................?
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in half an hour from no roughly...
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if you do not get something, do not vote
You beating the unbeatable is a hyperbole...da kind to 'spit' elevated action 'high verb_ally'/ I'll take you to rhyme in Harlem just so you can spit at me 'Apollo_getically'!/ U winning? highly unlikely...you're wack....even your lyrics told me/ Face it, you couldn't even be a graphic rappa if you wrote ya shit in Adobe!/ I'ma put this joke under more heat than Nyphomaniac_Dog_Breeders.. Then steal ya life like Kleptomaniac_Palm_Readers! . . . 6 lines doubt that I'll need any more...good luck |
Yo look,
My verbal ammo will ‘e clips’ ya cos I’m wiping out this ‘shadow’ like I’m the sunset, Like a dyslexic you confussed & beatin by my first words & I ain’t even warmed up yet/ You’re like a kamikaze pilot you go to battle & end up dead wiv my verbal shrapnel in ya head, Ya need a ‘lyric-proof-vest’ to stop you from lying in a liquid that’s red soaking the sheets of ya death bed/ I’m just sparring, this ‘shadow boxing’ is too easy cos I punch hard but the ‘forshadower’ never hits back, Feel the cold as ya record goes below zero, you tried, you froze comments on ya rhyme will mainly read ‘wack’/ Ya verses are so rough & incomprehensible - shit I thought I was reading Braille, Blind men voting is ya only hope of winning this, I’m hittin ya like a wife beater hits a female/ I took this forshadower ‘bitch n slapped’ her on the the ‘front lines’ for the whole world wide web to see, When ya peeps ask ya about this battle you tell them - ‘'I got ‘dom-N8’d’ & merked embarrassingly’’/ |
uppin for votes peeps............................................. ...
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hmm....I underestimated you a bit........but w/e vote honestly folks.......
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yo i think dom won that battle
cant vote just free postin this shit check out my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=rhythm 1 |
this battle was pretty even in my opinon..............but domin8s wordplay put him on top of this battle......................my vote=domn8.............no hate foreshadower u had a good verse too but it just wasnt enough
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Hmmmm
Punches.........rappad Flow...............rappd Structure........Niether Personal.........Dom Similes............rappad Comparisons....Rappad Vocabulary........rappad creativity...........rappad vote................rappad D's verse seemedc played and basic, no hate juststatin the truth |
Thorn why you talkin bout 'rappad' he aint even in this battle????
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mods this poll is fucked up, i got 2 votes for me & 1 against me for someone who aint even in this battle. My score's been altered from 2-0 to 1-1????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????/
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no votes count. none were explained, cept thorns..and that one seems suspicious... how diod you know forshadow was rappad thorn? that means he must be your friend and told you his alias = dickriding. vote dont count, do it again and i'll investigate it more closely. which could end up bad for you. poll: 0-0. continue,
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Now that DR shit is sorted out lets get some true votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....
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aight been long enough....uppin
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votes folks....geez........
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uppin for the 4th time.....wow no one ever votes here cuz we can't hit your battle up huh
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uppin..............
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damn foreshadower, you shouldn't be so cocky, you might of had it if you wrote more lines.... you started off hot, shit was complex and well-written with good metas, but you gave up halfway through and made it too short - either ran out of punches or thought that was all you needed - either way, that was a mistake. Also, you got to remember that not all peeps are going to understand that complex shit, and that shouldn't keep them from voting - stupid people deserve to voice their opinion - which means you need to think about appealing to all peeps, not just super-intelligent ones who are going to understand your complex wordplay and metas... the best emcees can appeal to both crowds, and that's how you get those wins....
Dom-n8 came in with some hard punches, universally understandable wordplay and took this battle.. the opener killed it: "My verbal ammo will ‘e clips’ ya cos I’m wiping out this ‘shadow’ like I’m the sunset, Like a dyslexic you confussed & beatin by my first words & I ain’t even warmed up yet/" vote = dom yall hit this up w/ an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90294 |
both ya'll needa work on structure----
flow=for punches=for structure=noone creativity=dom wordplay=dom overall=i'ma give this to forshadower since i felt his punches a little more. the Adobe line was lame as hell though. |
keep votin peeps............................................. .............................
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uppin,
when you done put an honset vote on this thread: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=domN8 |
uppin......................................
when ya done vote on this: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=domN8 |
This is gettin well slept on peeps. Get votin peeps. Just a few more votes & we can close this thread.
When ya done hit this link up with an honest vote: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=domN8 |
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vote on this when ya done: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=domN8 |
vote on this peeps, it's been slept on for way to long.
when ya done hit this up wiv an honest 1: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=domN8 |
Flow - Forshadower
Punches - Dom Personals - Both Multis - Neither Meta4s - Dom Structure - Forshadower Originality - Dom... edged it Vote = Dom N8 . ... ..... ... . ... ..... ... . |
opener:dom
closer:dom wordplay:forshadow structure:tie punches:dom overall:dom som took this with harder hitting punches, and for shadow, you need to use some different vocab, u seem like u just throw the odd word in here and there. i took the time to hit this up, plz return the favor and vote on the battle in my sig. aiight peace |
OPener: Dom
closer: dom flow: For punches: dom personals: eh tie. Too close to call Hit this up with a vote please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93014 |
domn8 takes this junk easy...bars a little stretched out...but i can deal with that....other kids just didn't bring it....domn8's wordplay was better...i'll drop a poll when i get a few more posts....vote-domn8
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this battl was striahg t both guys came nice forshadow your verse was aite but didn't really have good punches nor dom-n8 and dom makes your sentences shorter but you got my vote better flow overall~1
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