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e.coli 11-01-03 05:26 PM

iceman06 vs dominator (the real one)
 
10 lines

no crew vote
no hate vote
no d/r


both verses due 20 min. after your check in

Dominator 11-01-03 05:28 PM

check

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e.coli 11-01-03 05:30 PM

check

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.::Narcotics::. 11-01-03 05:34 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88606

CAn u al close that for me
ILL BE BACK TO VOTE WHEN U ALL DROP PC

Dominator 11-01-03 05:46 PM

::Begin @ 5:30::

Mr ice, tryna Skittle with the elite? Show me your best trick and ill give ya a treat /
Im'a leave you wet and runny like digested chinese food turned to excrete // *
Cuz as soon as I grab the mic I be leavin all the voters with snickers /
Your overplayed lyrics have been posted more than politicians campaign stickers //
Cuz iceman if I built you a stool, you still couldn't stand at my level /
And dawg im gonna burn your whole verse like im the god damn devil //
Dawg whats your crew man, cuz overthrowing a government well thats a revolution/
It must be because you are always overthrown because this is your execution //
The only time you will ever have a real spit is when your in your room jerking /
So you just better go update your dig because [i]youre[/] the latest merking // **



* HaHa.... Chinese food gives ya the shits
** He has his latest merking in there.... haha.... probably isnt updated much
~ HaHa, and I had skittle and snickers in my punches lol and trick/treat in the first line, tought itd fit because last night was Halloween.

::End at 5:46::

e.coli 11-01-03 05:47 PM

aight heres my verse

this dude gets “thanks” for “giving” head once a year..that shit is annual...
he beat off 8 times in 1 day...now he calls himself the king of manual...
dominator is like a retard wit no hands...hes incapable of throwin punches...
damn right he dominates...he fucks faggots in bunches......
dominator says he has all kinds of flow cuz he collects piss in mens urinals...
U HERB<--------look i just hit that bitch wit a personal....
u dyslexic faggot quit tryin to use big words that can barley come out ya mouth...
dominator is always on his knees suckin dick...now he thinks hes from the dirty south...
u claim to be an ill textee....thats hard to believe considering u can hardly read....
like a baby born allergic to water.........you never had a chance to succeed...

Dominator 11-01-03 05:48 PM

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oops my last line is supposed to say
[update your sig]

not dig....

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e.coli 11-01-03 06:12 PM

uppin(1)

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drop a honest vote please

Divine Remedy 11-01-03 06:14 PM

yo

close battle

but mr ice man won that

opening- mr ice man (by alittle)
flow- dominator
punches-mr ice man
ending(mr ice man by alittle)

Dominator 11-01-03 06:46 PM

haha funny shit.... dude.... noone judges opening and ending as the main criteria... ITS THE WHOLE VERSE..... what about wordplay and creativity? haha herb

Uppin for people who know how to judge a battle (1)

Do_Or_Die 11-01-03 06:49 PM

ight batttle i think mr iceman got this wit consistancy that otha nigga was off and on wit disses
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Nexxt 11-01-03 07:17 PM

Nice Battle
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wordplay-Dom
flow-iceman
creativity-dom
punchs-iceman
personal-iceman
icemans line U HERB<---look i just got u wit a personal (LOL)
close but ice edged this one out

HIT THIS LINK UP PLEASE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88962

Dominator 11-01-03 07:23 PM

dude.... how is that a good line......

You cant put a -------------> in the middle of a verse

that is shit...... that fucks w/ flow, it isnt proper style, and its just plain wack, if you cant come up with 10 lines worth of punches you deserve the loss.....

and that line wasnt even funny....

Explain your votes more...

Uppin

Nitemarre 11-01-03 07:32 PM

Flow-mr.iceman
Personals-mr.iceman
Metas-tie
Vocab-dominator
Structure-dominator
Finisher-iceman

Pretty good battle, icman came harder tho...Dom is good but needs a lil more of everything.

Dominator 11-01-03 07:34 PM

DUDE..... WHERE IS THERE ONE PERSONAL IN THAT VERSE? NOT HATIN I JUST DONT SEE ONE?

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Dominator 11-01-03 07:39 PM

Cuz as soon as I grab the mic I be leavin all the voters with snickers /
Your overplayed lyrics have been posted more than politicians campaign stickers //

How is this not the best line in the battle New_Rap???
Its the most true.... all he raps about is gays and givin head.... that isnt a punch.....

I just dont understand where you are comin from..... Will some MATURE people vote please, who dont giggle when someone says blowjob?

Justin Vented 11-01-03 08:10 PM

i cant vote but ill up for you guys

uppin for these cats

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Hitz 11-01-03 08:10 PM

dom anitor won no dought about it all i got to say kid u sukkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

dom you got good vocab you almost got voc liek me keep it up...

e.coli 11-01-03 08:17 PM

uppin(2)

stop tryin to sway votes dom that is herbish........just let people vote

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Dominator 11-01-03 08:33 PM

Im not trying to sway.... i was asking an honest question.... where is there a personal in your verse?

e.coli 11-01-03 08:35 PM

just let people vote

uppin(3)

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Dominator 11-01-03 08:37 PM

dude...... new_rap_order or whatever said you had personals..... and you cannot say that you bad me in those.... I should have had that which would have given me the advantage in his vote.... i have a reason to be pissed....

its all good tho well get some vets in here who will see whats up...

Dominator 11-01-03 10:59 PM

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pacaso mac 11-01-03 11:32 PM

yeah, well icema06 honestly took this shit i mean i was more into his shit dominator ya shit was kinda boring but keep postin dude good iceman

Yaz 11-01-03 11:47 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by RHYTHM 212
yo

close battle

but mr ice man won that

opening- mr ice man (by alittle)
flow- dominator
punches-mr ice man
ending(mr ice man by alittle)


I got to agree wit rythm on that shit.... was a pritty tight battle, could ben better, but it was tight

Dominator 11-01-03 11:50 PM

Pacaso explain your fucking vote.............

asshole...

that is shit.....

I shoulda said 500+ posts to vote....

Dimez 11-02-03 12:07 AM

dom

Mr ice, tryna Skittle with the elite? Show me your best trick and ill give ya a treat /
Im'a leave you wet and runny like digested chinese food turned to excrete // *
^ That Was Gay LOL

Cuz as soon as I grab the mic I be leavin all the voters with snickers /
Your overplayed lyrics have been posted more than politicians campaign stickers //
^ SICK!

Cuz iceman if I built you a stool, you still couldn't stand at my level /
And dawg im gonna burn your whole verse like im the god damn devil //
^ LMAOOOO humerous~

Dawg whats your crew man, cuz overthrowing a government well thats a revolution/
It must be because you are always overthrown because this is your execution //
^^^^ Good

The only time you will ever have a real spit is when your in your room jerking /
So you just better go update your dig because [i]youre[/] the latest merking // **
^ Bad coding

Advise: take out the choppy flow. //< - - and / <- -
and get rid of the stars, work on structure..

other then that your doing pretty good!

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ice
... my home boi!



this dude gets “thanks” for “giving” head once a year..that shit is annual...
he beat off 8 times in 1 day...now he calls himself the king of manual...
^ Mathematical.. shows your intellignece~

dominator is like a retard wit no hands...hes incapable of throwin punches...
damn right he dominates...he fucks faggots in bunches......
^ thats a bit played (think i saw that b4 but its koo)

dominator says he has all kinds of flow cuz he collects piss in mens urinals...
U HERB<--------look i just hit that bitch wit a personal....
^^^ OHHHHHH NOO LoL

u dyslexic faggot quit tryin to use big words that can barley come out ya mouth...
dominator is always on his knees suckin dick...now he thinks hes from the dirty south...
^^ Ill

u claim to be an ill textee....thats hard to believe considering u can hardly read....
like a baby born allergic to water.........you never had a chance to succeed...

^^ Good


Advise: juse more wordplay and multis.. u were good!


vote= ice

Yaz 11-02-03 02:33 AM

mr ice took this.. punchs and all took this one............................................... ....................................


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