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Nitemarre .VS PAK N. HEat
10-lines max
5 bars 2 lines a bar blah blah blah// blah blah blah// 2 lines=1 bar checkin before spittin we both get an start after u checkin 30 minutes no dring votes an so on Pc |
checkin in dawg....
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You could be in a graveyard at night and wouldn't be scarry/
You a flyweight that dont fly straight to me fag, you a fairy// Im a "King" kinda like Larry, get nailed up so you hang/ DVG in yo sig, oh not the dickless virgin gang!// My flames gonna get flung from this gun, you should run/ Oh so you "Pak N. Heat" then Im Pak N The Fuckin Sun// I could say "vote for him" and yo chance of winnin decreases/ Life signs all ceases, I couldn't "help" if I was "Jesus!"// When you rhyme, its like you stood in line you should take a seat/ Yo put some fusion in pocket, and still wont Pak E-Nuff Heat/// |
^^Hmm coo shit...
FAKe persONALs Bunch of played punches....but nun the less good shit for being 1-3 Yo...... Aite.... Ya entered the battle thinkin you'd dispose of-me but chose to-be ripped-fast// supposedly ya got-skill,I'm not-thrilled,I drop-ill and give ya whip-lash// decapitate ya bitch-ass,once I dispatch my Concepts and leave ya lid-wisted// this kid in-sisted to get verbally-fisted,ya shoulda just bit the shit that Chrit-did// ya had one shot but missed-it,now ya listed as another victim of my viscious-blows// I'm so-fuckin-cold my-lines'll paralyze ya-mind and leave this bitches-wishes-froze// with descriptive-flows,its my mission,to cause a collision and seperate ya neck-and-head// super imposin-this-foe,show em I'm the best,and disconnect his intellect-instead// collect-ya-dreads,once I peel ya cap-back so far that it reveals ya-spine// leavin a trail of weak emcees,when I proceed to-rhyme it's like I'm sqeezin a 9// Uppin for sum honest votes......nice |
aight yo
flow=pakn punches=nite structure=nite creativity=pakn wordplay=pakn overall=pakn close battle but i think pakn took this he came with sum good multi's and disses, while nite had sum simple shit but one good line and he played off his name too much. |
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thanks for the feedback lookin for sumone else to hit it up wit a honest vote for me pcccccccccccccccccccccccccc |
pakn all da way yall.............................................. .................................................. .........
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thanks alot man upiin for honest vote.s......................................
Honest votersssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sssssssssssssssssssss |
<<< getting banned for freeposting, this vote was a hate vote and doesnt count............................................. .........................................
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Biddy? are u fuckin blind? first off ya dun't vote by dissin who just battled first it's too obvious that u pullin u'r vote outa ya ass----soooo in all honesty ya need to talk to jack and the beanstaulk and stop hatin cuz u a liein hoe just gotta elevate a little dawg---keep it real--peace
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UPPIN I NEED A MODS HELP
LOOK AT BIDDYS POST TAKE AWAY HIS VOTE HES BATTLYN ME NOw HES HATIN THANKS AN FEEBS ALSO PEEP YA PMS MAN I HVE A PROBLEm |
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meh - much as you slipped in swaying hints about his verse you still won , you had multies, he did not. you didnt have punches either tho... or personals.. your multies won this.. vote- pak n heat. oh yea, and sway again and you lose. no swaying is allowed. |
Begining: pak
Ending: nite Flow: nite Volcab: pak Ryme Scheem: nite overal: nitemarre If u guys wanna reapay me sumhow for votein... hit this poll up iight; vote honestly iight Yaz vs shay-d {5-8 lines} |
yo PEEP BIDDY VOTE PLEASE ITS A HATE VOTE MAN DAMN
read my post my bad for swaying PEEP YA PMS............................................... ...... |
YO THIS GOES STRAIGHT TA THAT NIGGA PAC N HEAT
THAT WHITE MOFUCKA NEEDS TA GO BACK TA MALIBU CUZ I KNOW HE COULDNT READ THOSE STRONG WORDS OR DIDN UNDERSTAND THEM FUCK YOU WHITE WIGGA BIDDY A HATA ~ONE~ |
i cant vote......but Pak N Heat ryhmes made more sense to me......his flow sounded more on beat...well in my head
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yea pakn.. u sway votes like a mufucka.. but anyways,,
pakn got this .. way better overall verse.. better wordplay n harder hitting punches.. i was feelin ya flow.. other kats was good too.. keep elevating.. vote=pakn hit this up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89135 |
flow........pakn
punches.....pakn structure.........both creativity.............pakn wordplay.......pakn overall........................pakn he took this battle repay the favor .....go to my battle below |
uppin 4 poll voters this shit shud be 4-1 if feeble polled his shit but he didnt,.,,
uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn |
Aight yo I aint white dawg but good try...
Uppin for honest and explained votes...... .................................................. ............. |
who said u was,.
u still suk .................................................. ....uppin to get closed................... llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll llllllllllll........//////////// |
FEEBLe [poll ya shit man
damnlol uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn for 2 votes to close this bitch |
breakin down
flow = PAK punches = BOTH structure = PAK creativity = PAK wordplay = PAK although newbie overal = PAK N HEAT yeh...my 3rd one feeb |
uppin 4 last voteeeeeeeee
shud be closed if FEBBLE POLLED HIS SHIT fagggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg gggggggggLOL Jk |
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opener-pakn closer-nite punches-pakn personals-pakn wordplay-tie creativity-tie overal-pakn really good battle...seriously i thought nite was gonna be weak but he did well just too played though na mean?? goodbattle none the less |
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