Mista Raedar vs. *bLaNkz*
 

8-10lines
1hour deadline starting after your chekkin..

alright chekkin in playa...
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Holiday Inn..


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Before you post your verse i advise you to reherse...mista gon ingnore tha enter button n look for exit first//
bLaNkz might aswell be driving a hearst, cuz im tha 'driving perp.' of what it means to hurt//
Inflicting pain on your lower torso, im like*Gien...im trying to take the 'pussy' out this no show//
you fukkin hobbo, couldn't mek 'sense' outta your own name... raedar couldn't 'grow in' to tha game like 'artificial rogaine'//

*Gein prolly spelt wrong, but tha pig farmer who used to take out n eat tha reproductive organs in women...

verse DUE about NOW....
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u sed 1 hour fool/
thaz iight im bout to drown yo azz in my lyrical pool/
i aintt even gotta try in this round/
ill kill ya ass,n make sure yo body aint found/
u like an old man playin a video game,its game ova/
u ran to ur ma wen i stepped out da range rova/
my ryte hands a killa/
ill bust 3 shots like regge miller/
im ur worst nytemare o u can jus call me freddy/
i got my gunz n im heated heavy/

flow...........blankz
punches-.......both
beginning..........blankz
ending.......blankz

overall.............blankz

blankz took this battle

UPPIN like my hitlist........
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punches- neither
flow- blankz.
simplest- mista reader.

^ your verse was much to simple mista..thats the only reason im gonna have to go with blanks... other than that it was evenly matched.

vote here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89176

i giv this to blank cuz the other nigga came soft as hell...simple shit...so blankz got this


HIT THIS LINK AND VOTE DA BATTLE...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89202

respeck yo...PLZ DOn'T FORGET TO POLL VOTE...UPPPPPPPPPIN
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beginin...blankz
endin...blanks
flow...both
punches...both (more blankz)
overal...blankz
blankz took this battle....
no hate mista...


check out this battle when its finished
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89529

thanks... []Deace out

yeah like they all said...mista was wayyyy to elementary cat in the hat styles....played out lines like gangster rap songs on TRL and shit. definitley not feelin it. Blanks flow fell a little off but had some good punches in there like the opener...so BLANKZ TAKES THIS ONE>>

yo hit this up wit an honest vote...peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89496

flow.blankz
punches.both
beginning.blankz
ending.blankz
overall.blankz

he murderd u dawg.............................................. ..........................................

in all honesty, this was a really one sided battle. blankz had better flow, better punches...just everything was legitimatly better than the other dude.....

vote- blankz

get back at me: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...40&pagenumber=2

and

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89471

blanks got this wit more complexity better wordplay and harder hitting personals..............mista u had good flow but your punches didnt connect

my vote=blanks