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Thorn VS Deva
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k man, ima checkin in,.................
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Slower Than Snails, You couldnt Do this Blind Feeling Brail
Your Dilvery's So Slow It's Practically Post Office Mail Hail To This Crown, I'll Drown Ya Mind Like Surround Sound Profound Spits Will Pound This Clit, Ya lost Like Homeward Bound About to Encounter a Loss Like Teen Abortion Occurance This Deva makes me Sicker than No Health Insurance Blockin ya Spits like Shower Curtains And Dams Made by Beavers I got this battle Hands Down Like School class Under Achievers Sniff Coke cuz you Blow, Gettin Rid of u Faster than Tickets Front Row Like Pimps Arguein wit Prostitutes Im gettin Tired of Battlin this Hoe I wont Win this in a Rude Manner, Ya lines aint Fat so I wont Stare Witnessing you lose is Expected Kid, Like Dykes with Short Hair Block Ya Shots Like Bullet Proof Lead, Ur dead like Undecover Feds Its Said, You Suck like Teeth Scraping and Given some Bad Head U'll Fail, Like Sluts Taking Sexualy Transmitted Disease Tests Me and Deva wouldnt Read the Same if this was a Case of Incest With In this Fake Deva Bitch Is more Shit than Popped Zits Ya Lines are Fertalizer, thats Why Your Interests are Good Shit (Profile) Your 23 On RB, Ya More Pathetic than Guys Using Sex Toys Girl U cant win this Game, Its like Musical Chairs With Hemroids Spit |
The First thing a bring is I used to work for british mail,//
I got the fastest delivery for beating thorn the fucking snail// Secondly I suggest you learn to read brail, I already did// To read in between the lines “gonna break this wooden kid"//(thorns r made of wood) Why you poppin at my interests smile at my profile// According to yours you’re a no one which goes well with your style// Don’t bring coke into it, been smokin it before you were born// Compared to it your like the come down crashed out on the lorn// I heard of burdens, but you’re the thorn in my side// Luckily I got the antiseptic, numb what you try to imply// Fuck the thorn ima gonna take the whole branch// Leave this kid pricked bleeding rhymes through his own lance (lance a spelk)// Dunno bout reapers but I’ll harvest ya rhymes// From lowest ranking to ace of spades, I’ll bust all ya lines// Thinkin he be a vet stacking and racking up double my posts// Better make the most, ima leave him transparent like a ghost// Closing the battle and to yall thinkin ima gonna fall// Remember that a thorn’s a spike used by fags, lets kill them all//……… |
was feedin allowed in this?
anyways i find that to be a negative breakdown= punches=thorn flow=both sustainment=thorn metas=thorn laugh factor=thorn vocab=both overall=thorn i dont like feedin at all.......thats it MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT UP THE BATTLE IN MA SIG...VS 2 TYMA |
punches-thorn
flow-tie vocab-tie metas-thorn VOTE:THorn....ayo drop some honest votes on tha battles in my sig plz thanx |
yeah the feeding was bad in here on the deva's part i would like to know anyway deva just askin outta curisosity guy or girl/ which are u no jokes bein made just wanna know but over all thorn to this
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im a fucking guy, the name was N.D.eva. but i got banned so lost the N...so now ima just Deva, NOT Deeva, aight....
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punches - thorn
flow- both metas- thorn vocab - tie overall- thorn my vote - thorn and yea deva.... are u a guy or a girl , no joke |
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Thorn had FAR better punches, creativity, and metas..... the flow was kinda even but the shit that Deva was spittin didnt even compete with Thorns lyrics....
Vote: Thorn Mods I cant poll so please add |
yo thorn took that battle wit eas. he had much harder punches, his flow good, he had tons of metas[almost in every line], he had better structure, and mad me laugh. thorn defenitly took this battle. Deva... ur rap was good... i just thought thorns was better and had more of those things i just said.
nice battle by both of u....... but my overall vote is thorn |
mods- everytime i go to poll it says i didnt post an explanation for my vote. when i did post an explaination....twice. when i asked someone for help they said to make your explaination longer... and i did that and it still didnt work. my explanation for my vote was longer than Brixton's and he still could poll. so if u can add my vote for thorn... and help me out
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Decent Battle Here.. But Thorn Takes It With Much Better Verse.. Bath Came Kinda Iffy... But Thorn Had The Better Verse.
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Sup,I can't vote yet but I was definately feelin thorn's verse, goo use of vo-cab, there should always be more vo-cab,vo-cab is good.
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vote on my battle Legin Vs Jai Blaize @ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89429
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That was a good battle and you both ripped it with flow. Other than that, Thorn ripped it with content. He came from every angle with punches and came up with some pretty original and good shit. Deva, it seems like you were just feeding off of his battle and reversing the shit to him. There were still good punches and style on your part, but Thorn ripped this one with a better verse overall. No hate....
Hit this shit up if you get the chance... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88479 |
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Thorn
Slower Than Snails, You couldnt Do this Blind Feeling Brail Your Dilvery's So Slow It's Practically Post Office Mail ^^^^ Kinda Gay But Okay Hail To This Crown, I'll Drown Ya Mind Like Surround Sound Profound Spits Will Pound This Clit, Ya lost Like Homeward Bound ^^^^ Decent About to Encounter a Loss Like Teen Abortion Occurance This Deva makes me Sicker than No Health Insurance ^^^^ Good (the abortion part) Blockin ya Spits like Shower Curtains And Dams Made by Beavers I got this battle Hands Down Like School class Under Achievers ^^^ That Doesent Even Rhyme Sniff Coke cuz you Blow, Gettin Rid of u Faster than Tickets Front Row Like Pimps Arguein wit Prostitutes Im gettin Tired of Battlin this Hoe ^^^^^^^^^ 2nd Line Is A Killer!~ I wont Win this in a Rude Manner, Ya lines aint Fat so I wont Stare Witnessing you lose is Expected Kid, Like Dykes with Short Hair ^^^^^LMAO I Like It When PPL Diss Dikes Block Ya Shots Like Bullet Proof Lead, Ur dead like Undecover Feds Its Said, You Suck like Teeth Scraping and Given some Bad Head ^^ Good Multis U'll Fail, Like Sluts Taking Sexualy Transmitted Disease Tests Me and Deva wouldnt Read the Same if this was a Case of Incest ^^^ How Much Times U Gonna Rhyme About Sluts And Sex? With In this Fake Deva Bitch Is more Shit than Popped Zits Ya Lines are Fertalizer, thats Why Your Interests are Good Shit (Profile) ^^^^^ You Did Your Re-Search! Your 23 On RB, Ya More Pathetic than Guys Using Sex Toys Girl U cant win this Game, Its like Musical Chairs With Hemroids ^^^^^ NICE FINISHER __________________________________________________ __ Deva The First thing a bring is I used to work for british mail,// I got the fastest delivery for beating thorn the fucking snail// ^^ That Dont Make Sense Secondly I suggest you learn to read brail, I already did// To read in between the lines “gonna break this wooden kid"// (thorns r made of wood) ^^^^ BLAH I DONT WANNA READ ANYMORE __________________________________________________ __ punches - thorn flow- both metas- thorn vocab - tie overall- thorn my vote - thorn |
punch/thor
/wordplay thor struc/thorn voc/tie injoyment/thor multi/both creative/thorn vote/thor man thor had some nice shit it flows well to his mind as for deva seemed 2 copy yer stlye and messed the flow up deva you have some nice voc but be original holla at this honest votes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87338 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89509 holla |
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