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cutastraphe Vs Pak n. HEat
10-lines max
u spit first since i set it up we drop in 35 minutes from chckin in 1 checkin so i can start writing my shit |
i'm in but make it 45 min's i got sum shit to do real quick-----
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^^^why aint my name on ya losses list????????????????? ahkfhakhfakfkdafjakjfakljfkdajoeukafhdkfohfkweljao ewihekakflaioe
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ha knew i missed sumone i never look-------nigga my bad-----lmaoooooooooooooooooo i'll update it now
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IM rotate-N this kids head leaven him rest assure lashin back-out at -me//
Im methodical i got more-patience then doctors,spittin rhymes cauzin Mad-Cutastraphree// IM takin this kid to school wit bless scripts before the test-starts// YA rhymes needa Aim hi u lost to game tite,My lines more siccer then ya moms strech-marks// U shud spit streched-bars cuz Im leavin u in red ink like the artist from dare devel// This kid is the only hit MC at his school wut a rebel.But i got a feelin he aint on my level// Wuts the world come to white kids tryna act ghetto spittin rap// chances of u beatin me is like micheal jackson actin black// you "SPIT" so much shit that ya lips "SWELL UP"/ you look like jayz sippen "NOVACAINE" outta cup/ the rhymes put you into critical condition/ so delousional ill have ya tounge ina state of repitition/ players on "EFEDREN"/ we all know your secret, those pills are to encrease your "ESTROGEN"/ your rhymes come "UP" like a "SHORT" stem, i stand "TALL" like "OAK TREES"/ damn ma rhymes make you so delerious you forget ya ABC's/ ma words are "HEAVY" the "WEIGHT" of "BOLDERS"/ ma lyrics be like "SHAMPOO", rain down on you like "HEAD AND SHOULDERS"/ yo ima "BENCH PRESS" ya cofin just to "LIFT YA SPIRTS"/ you so wack "DEAF KIDS" aint even "WANNA HEAR IT"/ |
u got 14 minutes left OR ITS A AUTO MATIC DQ
we drop in 35 minutes from chckin ^^^^^that was the rule u cant change it even if u had to save the world |
Oh my fuckin gawd, ya bouta get-trampled/
and culdn't store-'heat' pakin all 'winter'-apparel/ ya betta phone the police, cuz i'm bouta break-ya-nose/ see my '*bar' risin? it's a 'fact' that i'll *TAKE-THE-THROWN/ cut's a character, pak ya just provide my comedy/ holdin sales like 'private planes' and still never 'fly' in 'economy'/ actually ya 'obviously'-low, after i 'bury' ya in the dirt/ battles like ya 'avatar' but ya still tryin to throw a '*punch' at me first/ ya nuthin-but-'worse', so just leave with rhymes-'sloppy'/ it's not my 'goal' to embariss ya but *blackhawk isn't that 'ice-hockey'/ *bar "after ya poll ya see the bar go up" *TAKE THE THRONE he set up "who takes the throne" as the topic) *punch "got two kid fighters evenly punchin" *blackhawk he's from: blackhawk(chicago blackhawks) |
YO YA seriously went over the line-limitttttttttttt?????????????????????????????????? ??????????
uhhhhhh |
votesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss even though he spit more then me---------------------------
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uppin o nthis shit dont count my last 5 or sum shit
wuteva fool i jsut spit til i cudnt spit no more peace... sumtimes i come short or long pc uppinnnnnnnnnnnnn |
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you are a stupid douche bag................. no.......what the fuck is chicago blackhawks.......why do you make shit up fag........ your just dumb.....dont rap about blackhawk again |
opener pak...dont stretch ure lines it looks ugly lol
closer pak...cut? lmao at the blackhawk hahaha silly fool punches pak personals tie wordplay pak overal pak |
I live in cali kid...LOl
uppin for a honest vote THE wang drop ya 2 sents Fool im lookin for Sum feed bak 1 uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn |
oh yeah pack dont be bitching about votes!
specially ones that are well explained that shit is gay and annoying yo no beef peace |
uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnn
thanks for da backkkkkkkkkkk,,,,,,,,kk peep my other shit if u got time |
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yo fuck is a blackhawk? i never heard of where ever blackhawk in cali is or not so it's perfectly legit line fuck all ya'll bitches who think it's dumb. and yes chicago blackhawks are an NHL ice hockey team so fuck u the wang for not knowin. Oh i see he changed it before ya even culd see it wack bitch ya are paknheat--------------- anyway uppin this let's get sum more votes |
yo Pak had this, better and more original punches, structure was weak, but overall better verse. liked this one:
"players on "EFEDREN"/ we all know your secret, those pills are to encrease your "ESTROGEN"/" vote = pak HIT THIS UP: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88886 |
Punches: Both
Flow: Cut (by far) Wordplay: Both Vocab: Tied at very little. Good battle and the punches were about the same from both for effectiveness. It was close, but the shit has to flow, and I think Cut's shit flowed way better. Everything else was evenly matched up. Good drop from both, and Pak, you had some good shit. That Jay Z/Novicane line was tight. Cut, that bar risin line was tight. Really close, and it was hard to vote, but it goes to cut. No beef, no hate... |
Vocab~Pak
Metas~Pak Punches~Pak Creativity~no1 Personals~no1 Overall~Pak he took this no doubt mad lines were nice and hot hollaz peeps~1 |
idk, i beg to differ, both verses were iight to me
and i wasnt really feelin pak's verse, not to mention his shit's all stretched out flow = cut structure = cut punches = cut(barely) wordplay = cut vote = cut i saw this differently but honestly,i give this battle a 6/10.......wasnt all that |
Man...
This battle, I don't know, man... It's gotta be looked at in two parts... IM rotate-N this kids head leaven him rest assure lashin back-out at -me// Im methodical i got more-patience then doctors,spittin rhymes cauzin Mad-Cutastraphree// IM takin this kid to school wit bless scripts before the test-starts// YA rhymes needa Aim hi u lost to game tite,My lines more siccer then ya moms strech-marks// U shud spit streched-bars cuz Im leavin u in red ink like the artist from dare devel// This kid is the only hit MC at his school wut a rebel.But i got a feelin he aint on my level// Wuts the world come to white kids tryna act ghetto spittin rap// chances of u beatin me is like micheal jackson actin black// you "SPIT" so much shit that ya lips "SWELL UP"/ you look like jayz sippen "NOVACAINE" outta cup/ And then this... the rhymes put you into critical condition/ so delousional ill have ya tounge ina state of repitition/ players on "EFEDREN"/ we all know your secret, those pills are to encrease your "ESTROGEN"/ your rhymes come "UP" like a "SHORT" stem, i stand "TALL" like "OAK TREES"/ damn ma rhymes make you so delerious you forget ya ABC's/ ma words are "HEAVY" the "WEIGHT" of "BOLDERS"/ ma lyrics be like "SHAMPOO", rain down on you like "HEAD AND SHOULDERS"/ yo ima "BENCH PRESS" ya cofin just to "LIFT YA SPIRTS"/ you so wack "DEAF KIDS" aint even "WANNA HEAR IT"/ Cuz the rules laid out BY PAK HIMSELF... Say 10 FUCKIN LINES! So why on earth would you spit 20? Cut took the first part of his verse easily. Pak's "Jay-Z" line and the "M. Jackson" line are pretty played. The lines are stretched with the punches don't come hard at all. However, the second part of the verse tore Cut the fuck up... The "estrogen" line and the "deaf kids" line just killed you. Those hit real hard, the rest was pretty good too. So... What to do? What's fair. Following the rules is fair. I'm going with the first ten lines vs. the first ten lines. It's not my fault Pak didn't heat up until the battle was supposed to be done. Winner: Cutastraphe (but never drop a whack closer like that again, man) Peace Peace |
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^^^nucca said it... |
Flow-Cutty
Vocab-PakN Metas-PakN better ones Personals-no Ryhmescheme-Cutty Punchlines-PakN Well it was susposed to be only 10 lines like Cutty I thaught. A bar is a pair of lines, right? Well Pak N had more and tighter everything. Cutty didn't do too bad though. |
this was a pretty good battle..
Punches: Pak Flow: cut wordplay: Pak Metas: Pak Structure: cut Overall this was a good battle but i think Pak took this one, props to both though. vote goes to pak |
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