EyE QuE Vs Thorn
 

Iight check in before we do this, its gonna be a blind spit. So as soon as you checkin start keyin it up, tha last person to post there verse has 15 minutes to do it after tha first drop. 10 lines. And goodluck. :D
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Oh and make sure i'm online before you start keyin it up, cuz then i'll look like an ass if you drop and i'm not even on, oh kaaaay. Iight lets gettin poppin.
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Dont recall this Battle, Here I'll switch back to my old style

I'll break ur Lines Forest Squirels with Those that Carry Sap
This kid is Almost Nuthing, He's Hawai On a World Map
This battles a wrap like Jesus Birth, and Weed Busted then Rolled
Ya Shit Just Doesnt fly, Your a Paper Air Plane with out its Folds
Like Mold I'll Erode Your surface, Im Impotentsy that U cant Beat
Wouldnt be able 2 Flow better wit Skubba shaped Hands n' Feat
Lets see U spit sum Shit, But Remember to Gargle with Crap
2 burn Me U'd Have 2 Light Candles then Carelessly Take a Nap
Where are these Kids Manners? A Battle? Did He Even Ask?
I Just Cant Picture You Winning...Like Bumbs without a Flask

In the First LIne, Its Break your lines "LIKE" forest squirels


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Lol, straight verse...iight i'm a key it up soon, give me like 10 minutes and then i'll start. Didn't really understand your verse....maybe i'm juss dumb :)
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be back to vote on this shit
can yall hit this shit up right quick
preciate it peeps
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89962

yall hit this up and post ya link so i can remember to come back here and hit it up...just trin to get some voting goin on, so hard to do these days with mothafuckas not givin a fuck about other ppls battles cuz they cant even vote yet.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7403#post887403

Ayo...

I'm a tell tha world tha truth, you could rip me, i dont have a chance to win/
Oh my bad forgive me, I must have been speaking in antonym/
Quit kidding yourself, even your 'step-father' wouldn't give you 'tha belt'/
Your rhymes are made for 'fire victims' so there's no chance of them 'being felt'/
Be honest,your not as hot as you think you are,you need more then help/
You hang out in crew forums, so people dont relize tha truth...your crew's yourself/
Mane, I got punches to blast you, i can honestly say i 'molded' your face like 'statues'/
I'll cover my mouth when i 'sneeze' and direct punchlines 'at chu'/
I just snatched this win, so go back to invested reports to bitch, they know your name by now/
That'll save me tha time of writing explanations...just ask them, they'll tell you how/

All personals are true, such as tha invested reporst line and tha hangin out in crew forums one as well. Dont believe me????Check your self, he's in warlords, hiv, and the regime. :)
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Im NOt In any Crew


Whats wrong with you?


Votes


Nice Line about the "A Chu"


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I dont Hang out In crews lmao


I was talkin to Aisle 5, Deciding weather to get a Crew Spot

same with Regime, and I was in H.I.V so that explains itself


Just wanted to clear that us, Make sure You know what your talking about First

flow=thorn
structure=tie
wordplay=eye......that at'chu line was nice
personals=eye
punches=tie

my vote=eye...............close battle but eye got this one..........

LMAO, what grade are you in, i seriously think you have a reading problem with tha dumb ass pm's you sent me and now this. Read tha post over again cuz i dont feel like answering your question. Uppin.
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punches-thorn
personals-tie
wordplay-eye
creativity-thorn
originality-none
overal-thorn

Yo herb...he didn't have any personals & do you know what originality means??????? I guess not, damn y'all most be smokin more then me or your illiterate, cuz i dont think you relize what your typin lol.
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^^^herbal why did u quote me


sorry for the freepost

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Eh Buddy

Go look at my fuckin battle with Token

Every1 Game him Personals and me and Token wre talkin, and he knew My entire verse was A personal lmao


Know how you feel bro

clean battle but all in all
i thought eye did take this foreal..his shit was better complexed
prolly his best Rb verse yet
I killed him in da battle 5-0
but i think he took this one
sent sum heat
if u spit like that aginst me i doubti d have a chance...

V-eye

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89604

^^ hit it up Honestly nugga

not bad...

thorn i dont but for some reason it seem like you rushed your verse...it was still consisten but....had a few nice punches
didn't reall y hit, but flow wason point and wordplay was there too

eye structure is still newbish...line were too long
shorten them a bit..and work on your wordplay
had a few punches as well, but most were played
seen that "at chu" line on another site...not saying bit just saying
its not original, flipped it nice though

vote=thorn...he had better flow and a few nice metas
over this was ok...that it would have been better
good luck to both and no hate fellaz

out...

Huh????? Did you call me newbish??????? Lol, stfu. Becuz i have under two hundred post's i'm a newb? Wow, i got as many years on tha net battlin then you have losses, and i'm not lying lol. Dammit pak, quit rubbin that shit in my face, it's like your tempting me to do a pinkslip rematch. Tha truth is all herbs voted for you and didn't even know what they were talking about. Oh and yea, thanx for tha poll votes :) uppin.
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Uppin :) ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

LMAO

flow=tie
punches=thorn
structure=thorn
creativity=tie
wordplay=eye
overall=thorn i think got this he came with betta punches even though eye got sum personals in the lines weren't hard and thorn's flow was more consistent.

peep my battle with technician yo
vote

HEY!!!!!!!!! Who said you could vote? Why are you roaming around this late?? Get back in your cage...climb back under your rock. Why you gotta make me do this?? Didn't you learn anything. Illiterate people cant vote how many times do i gotta tell you this. And i know your lil brother hates getting up in tha middle of tha night to type sumthin you wanna post. So just give up hope.
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what the fuck are u talkin bout??? why am i votin? i didn't see any rule that i can't vote beeyatch--------so i voted and i dun't kno wut ya talkin bout illiterate ya crazy illiterate anyways also dun't be talkin bout my brother eitha-----accept the vote and be patient ya battles not over yet.

ya'll need to stop vote swaying.....for real....

structure = thorn
flow = thorn
punches = eye
personals = eye
creativity = thorn
metas = thorn

vote = thorn

hit this battle up with an HONEST vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89765

this was a nice battle...thorn punches landed betta...good wordplay...disses were betta...his opener was nice

eye que came nice also...his punches were good but did'nt really cause an impact...nice personals...he had a played line that he shoulda freak it a lil betta ..disses were kinda lackluster....

overall thorn came a lil nicer......vote thorn

this stupid azz aol shit i got not lettin my poll vote go thru...!!!
sorry fellas.....................................
...........................maybe a mod can add the vote for yall

yo thorn got this on, he took it in punches and origionality, but you gotta work on your flow, my vote, thorn, even though it was a close battle..........................
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all points for a bar are out of 10, final score out of 50

Thorn-
I'll break ur Lines like Forest Squirels with Those that Carry Sap
This kid is Almost Nuthing, He's Hawai On a World Map

^^a bit played...still decent...7

This battles a wrap like Jesus Birth, and Weed Busted then Rolled
Ya Shit Just Doesnt fly, Your a Paper Air Plane with out its Folds

^^aight...7

Like Mold I'll Erode Your surface, Im Impotentsy that U cant Beat
Wouldnt be able 2 Flow better wit Skubba shaped Hands n' Feat

^^pretty nice....8

Lets see U spit sum Shit, But Remember to Gargle with Crap
2 burn Me U'd Have 2 Light Candles then Carelessly Take a Nap

^^decent...7

Where are these Kids Manners? A Battle? Did He Even Ask?
I Just Cant Picture You Winning...Like Bumbs without a Flask

^^decent...7

pretty decent verse...nothing stood out...nothing wack...just aight..total=36

Eye-
I'm a tell tha world tha truth, you could rip me, i dont have a chance to win/
Oh my bad forgive me, I must have been speaking in antonym/

^^decent opener, also a bit played...7

Quit kidding yourself, even your 'step-father' wouldn't give you 'tha belt'/
Your rhymes are made for 'fire victims' so there's no chance of them 'being felt'/

^^weak...6

Be honest,your not as hot as you think you are,you need more then help/
You hang out in crew forums, so people dont relize tha truth...your crew's yourself/


^^poor wording.....6
Mane, I got punches to blast you, i can honestly say i 'molded' your face like 'statues'/
I'll cover my mouth when i 'sneeze' and direct punchlines 'at chu'/

^^nice...9

I just snatched this win, so go back to invested reports to bitch, they know your name by now/
That'll save me tha time of writing explanations...just ask them, they'll tell you how/

^^aight...7

Total=35

thorn wins by one

vote=thorn