[week 4 championship match][Champion] Auspicious (3-0) vs Fgee (3-0)
 

Topic: mind is not brain

Due date: saturday
judging ends: monday


hmm..make this nice...

In.
Drop Early

Mind Is Not Brain..
Also Means "In Your Head"

His Mind Un-Right.. Thoughts In Depth..
His Time In Sight.. Brought Regrets..
Disregard The Dead.. Life He Sold..
Its In Your Head.. Like They Told..

..What Was Told, Forgotten..

Pain Met Anguish.. Torchered His Soul..
Traded For Places.. Escorted Yet Bold..
Proctored In Anger.. Self Vault That He Hid..
Doctors To Strangers.. Tell That Fault Wasn't His..
Split Persons.. Diagnosed With Cause..
The Hurt Worsened.. By The Most w/ Flaws..
Case Wasn't Extreme.. Facts Proved It..
Faced His Beliefs.. Faced What Truth Is..
Young, He Was Told This.. All She Said..
He Had Begun To Get Scolded.. All In His Head..

..Truth's Return..

He Grew.. Brought To His Youth..
He Threw.. Thoughts To The Truth..
Remained Calm.. Though Mind Astray..
Pain Palmed.. Throw Time Away..
Fumed In Hate.. Not Well Liked..
Assumed For Fate.. Shots Felt Light..
Turmoil Burned.. Twisted For Help..
Un-Foiled Turns.. Didn't Feel Like Himself..
Popped A Pill.. Didn't Know Why..
Stopped His Will.. Livin Slow By..
Eyes At The Tablet.. Head Of The Chamber..
Why Did He Have It.. Fed Him His Anger..
Questioned His Parents.. Blind Responses..
Defenses Apparent.. Rewind His Conscience..
"Nothing To Worry About.. Its All In Your Head..
Hurried With Doubt.. Before He Found Death..

..In His Head No Longer..

Shoved In Answers.. Strangers Banished Him..
Was It Cancer?.. Or Anger Management?..
Stopped His Effort.. Believed What They Said..
Knocked In Pressure.. It Was All In His Head..
Threw The Prescription.. A Cure On His Own..
Knew The Description.. Pure But Alone..
Let Them Make Fun.. Mind Over Matter..
Let The Fate Run.. Life Posed To Shatter..
Resentment Ventured Back.. Halter Scene Thrown..
Tormented Centured Facts.. Alter Ego..
Vented In Rage.. Took Knives With His Depth..
Presented His Hate.. Took Lives To Their Deaths..
Proceeded His Method.. Murder Fluent..
Conceeded w/ Epics.. Deliver Un-Prudent..
No Remorse.. Something Centured, Nothing Blamed..
Slow Divorse.. Nothing Ventured, Nothing Gained..
His Knife Point Withered.. Due Soon Ten Gone..
His Lifes' Point Hindered.. To Prove Them Wrong..

..The Verdict..

Trial He Sat.. Awaited His Sentence..
While He Had.. Waited Defenseless..
Wick Ran Low.. His Memory A Blur..
Wishes un-Known.. Temporarily Un-Sure..
Un-Certain Jury.. Read The Hand To Me..
Persons In Worry.. Plead Insanity..

As I Recall.. Took What I Had Said..
Pass To Them All.. "Looks Like Its Not All In My Head"..

hmmm that was a bit fast....whatever...lol

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Had 2 Periods In School To Do It

:)

i'll try to get it in 2moro

Good Deals

Sorry this is long...i just got into the topic
goodluck Auspic

Brian - anagram of Brain

The brain houses the mind but they're foreigners in life
Intelligence combined with emotions yet they're living a lie…

Any problems take them to Brain not out he's in sane
The logistic membrane stained by intellects reasonable reign
When mind tricks commence he complains about the noisy neighbour
Sick and tired of the capers continually under-mined by loves lost labour
Green sphered jealousy no stranger Brian had a rendezvous w/ Depp Reshun
She kept him second guessing outwitting him with her deep complexion
Anaesthetised by her injection Brian became mentally unstable
Her needle turned the tables and gravities floor bore the smashed fables
Logical thoughts given a facial all reason evolved to a clutch of doubts
Brain washed and dowsed left on tumble dry within skulls house
He holds no bones now, reality has parted and returned as miseries trickery
Multiple 3rd persons bickering Brian swelled up but felt like a pygmy
His tongue frozen from delivery nerves of steel molten and shivering
Goose bumps spread wings quickly and soar from aching bruises
Mind hears the rumours and knocks on Brians window of oppurtunists
The pane is hard to shatter by a purist but the portal is eventually opened
Emotions rub shoulders w/ Brians nobles vying for the peace prize voters
They leave Brian coated with strong feelings to break Depp Reshuns spell
Dep Ression < well u can tell its helped but its not totally expelled
Brians still in fragile health the Soothe sayers compelled to spread love with friendly knives
Theres no edge to their drive just blunt druids who try to alleviate life
Love always survives along with compassion and fighting spirit
Brian absorbs the lyrics a livid remorse erupts making sense of gibberish
Hostile intentions turn civic anger on the hob simmering at the back of his mind
Evaporated in healing hands of time Brians ears begin to listen to the outside
Cobwebs part as he spied her supply, audible comforts wrapped in cotton
Caring words softened with Minds help not to be forgotten
Brian owed such a lot n' promised to pay his mind more attention
Shaking hands with the 'other' dimension Brian unlocked cells tension
Released with loves drenchin Brian expanded his mentality
Positive reality so elusive before opened arms gladly
Embracing in a bare hug happily Brian and Mind stripped of barriers
But lets not forget their characters
Mind is not Brain..more the farrier who shod the hooves of emotions
brain is merely the carrier

When depression hits…listen to those closest
Clear your mind don’t trip …its never hopeless

Ya It AInt A Thing..
Mine Was Long Too

Lets Get Sum Vote Now
:)

i rEaly likled auspitios's verse an i thinjk he won

bye.

^agreed lol....

fgee's verse was dope...had good imagary n all wit ight flow...
good story....was a good 1...but not as good as Aus...

i liked aus's style... good flow imagry n a better story i feel...
i was jus more into aus's here...

vote=aus

fgee came nice, as a matta of fact he came nice
as hell BUT i dont think he came with quite enough
to overthrow Auspicious. I just think Auspicious's
verse was too beautiful, really a nice piece, and
the rhyme scheme and everything was really a-
mazing. However, both emcees came really well.
Congrats to both.

vote - auspicious

oh yea, we need votes on me Vs. Bribeone1

i have to go with aus ... that was a tight image in head ..

vote= aus

bah..

pathetic how theres been so few fucking votes on a championship piece
and half those votes are fucking retarded.makes u wonder if u even read the shit
another reason why RB's wack....

and ive voted on

sureal
calda merda
and taktiks plus a few others

Werd.. Time To Go Voting For Me..
I Think I Voted On The Three Way Match
Oh And Sureals.. But Who Tha Hell Is
illogicalbeats ? Ne Ways.. 3-0 Me

:) Good Battle Fgee

Dont know about this one.................mad close, i'm gonna have ta come back lata and read em again, stay real, peace, 1

Fgee...Your verse was long, it tended to become boring at times, but overall it came out nicely. You had some great lines, used good imagery.

Auspicious...You had a dope piece, not as long, but short and sweet, straight to the point, and your imagery and flow came out strongest.
Vote-Auspicious, because his verse came out as powerful yet it was simple. Fgee, you had a great verse, but just a few little things bring your quality down, and thats where Aus won..

I thought this was alot closer than what everyone else said, I was feeling fgee's verse but auspicious's lines kept me more interested & the flow slightly edged fgee. .

Chow!. . Vote-Aus

I guess im a sheep...

Aus...
I must say your flow made it a very easy read...the imagry was well used and the word choice definetly made this a great piece

Fgee...
I thought your piece was good too...nothing bad...all aspect were good...just not better than Aus's verse...Its like being in the NBA during jordans heyday...you may be great but he is just better...

vote - Auspicious

*FOR LEAGUE OFFICALS*
My battle was closed so I could not edit my votes there so I am going to put them here

Hi my Name...vs Baron vs deacon

Sureal vs White Lightining

Championship Match

Aus-very well written piece good take on topic
smooth flow thruout that helped make it a very
enjoyable read. cant really say anything wrong about this one.

Fgee- sick imagery. metaphors where very dope, The only knock
i might have on your verse is the flow to it it was longer at the top and at the bottom you seemed to rush it to finish. it all ofa sudden it slowed down and the lines werent as long throwing the only bad thing of your piece. other than that it was very damn good piece


-vote-AUS on a very cose one..

Aus for real! He had a better story, i liked the ABAB, nobody does that anymore... and he just came iller like he fucked a girl and he had aids... i mean this dude needs an iv..

what the fuck is with the herbs voting in here...
fuck off u faggot^

lol.. Wow

lmao
how fucking gay
auspic is a cheating fucker.....
he shud be dq'd from this championship..if he hasnt already been
and then there will be no holder of the title and i can battle next week in it with whoever

wow...um dont know what to say..hmmm guess we just move on...

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No, Auspicius retains the title for this match, but is stripped of it from now on. The #1 Contender match decides who was the champion.