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Edicius 11-05-03 08:36 PM

[ - Chameleon - ]
 
Chameleon

Ignorin.. the clear and powerfull signs.. of warn,
blendin in situations so they can do me no harm.
Exposin myself the way everyone had expected,
can i be me?.. or is the risk to big.. to be rejected.
Adjustin myself to the inviorement, im i save?,
no!the fragile remains,&u get back what u gave.

Many times thought it over,a place to disappear,
so i can be me, free the way i jus am without fear.
Feelin like a wreck,my mind's playin games with me,
is this my final destination? is this really ment to be ?
Is resisting an option?they say u must never give up,
goes for everything?even if u this deep down& stuck.
The chameleon is adjustin him self when hes in danger,
hes protected,. for now cuz the abillity to be a changer.
But is he really save?. maybe inside his fear is just risin,
Realisin that this hidin is just a weak point,and despisin.
Strange simalaritys who are there,to the chameleon& me,
i'm often blend in to painfull, situations cuz i cant be free.
Or tell a lie cuz i cant confront other people with the truth,
maybe its wrong, somthimes i must agree but what is truth?
Cuz honestly last longer, but somtimes it isnt always best,
and its easier to not go in to a struggle and jus give it a rest.
Or just dont want to hurt that other ones feelings is that good?
arent u just hurting it by not bein honest,to satisfy their mood!.
What do do and what not, keeps haunting thru my mind,
and there are so muchs different.. views on it of any kind.
Confusing me so i take the easy road, and maybe thats a sin,
but i think i just keep actin like a Chameleon and just blend in.


I guess the solution to most question's will be answered un-remained.














Fgee - Sunk!
Bribe1one - SS verse
Lm - Im sorry

WORD~PERFECT 11-05-03 10:08 PM

tight concept delivery and over all verse one pop you never sees to impress me

Edicius 11-05-03 10:14 PM

I never impress u?...

lol^^..

Thnx? Man from now on...i call u Riddle-Man

Edicius 11-06-03 08:04 AM

Hoe's = )

1 Reply da fuck?

Token 11-06-03 08:43 AM

Deep Piece... Made Me Think... I Can Relate To It A Lot... I Find Myself Blending In With My Surrounding In Fear Of Rejection In Places I'm Not Use To Going... But Nice Piece... Good Emotion

Edicius 11-06-03 08:45 AM

Werd

Thnx

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Token 11-06-03 08:45 AM

Oh Yeah... And Drop Feedback On The Links In My Sig... ( Open Mic )

Edicius 11-07-03 07:20 AM

Up^^

Funn DementaLL 11-07-03 09:17 AM

Impressive material, enjoyed the read...
sometimes when rappers use the same word twice eg cam'ron wit his dam PIZZA rhyme on diplomats... it don't work but your a cat who can pull it out the hat... uppin dis!!!

Edicius 11-10-03 02:57 PM

Up^^

Cmon damn ....lol^

Edicius 11-11-03 08:39 AM

Omg..

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west 11-11-03 09:05 AM

Good concept,good use of imagery an visionary,meant amot as it had me thinkin bout the issues you talked about,descent vocab,flowed well,overall a nice read dawg.

Peace

Edicius 11-17-03 03:12 PM

Thnx..Up^

A.T. 11-17-03 11:45 PM

I liked your hook... it brought your verse into perspective and
gave me an idea on what your topic was... most cats forget to
do that... props...
your flow and structure was good, although I was getting the
vibe like it was more of a poem... just by the way you worded some lines.
overall though, this is one of the best peices i've seen...
uppin this for ya.
~AshY~

MBP 11-18-03 12:36 AM

i liked it all good topic good flow good vocab keep it up

Edicius 11-18-03 08:30 AM

Thnx ..

And Mbp try to give some more constructive feedback

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Edicius 11-19-03 08:13 AM

Up^

fgee 11-19-03 09:10 AM

pretty nice drop
seemed to have more of a poetic vibe to it...
the longer sentences and lack of multies or internals detracted from the flow
content was good..personal stuff i guess and u expressed ur feelings pretty well in this piece
comparison to a chameleon was good too
nice drop

Edicius 11-19-03 11:47 AM

Thnx = )

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skitten 11-19-03 04:32 PM

I think you are really talented at this. A lot of the drops I have been seeing have the same theme. Good job for being creative.

Edicius 11-20-03 01:53 PM

Thnx = )

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.Iknoevel. 11-20-03 01:55 PM

nice piece...very deep...

Edicius 11-21-03 11:55 AM

Yea Westside nuca = )

Up^ for some decent feedback ..


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