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Toner Vs Monster - Vol. 2
10 linez min,
NO crew votez, NO BITING, All votez 2 b explained, No funny business. Who eva spits first, spits first Checkin IN........ |
im here..
you will die soon.. theres no way around it.. Origin Ill owns you bitches.. know this.. chump. |
Watch me snap - shit get crazy?//
The only thing scary is that eye of yours that lazy// THis aint no fairy - but you might be under my bed// Your the pheodophile in the paper that little boys dread// Yo Rap Battles today is a medium// Fo this Un-profound stand-up comedian// Not even in your own punches you believin in// Orgin Ill owns me? - Fo a bitch you showin disobedience. This battle today was a gift// You chokin so hard - you swallowed your own spliff// I'm jus gonna fuk you up - end up like a biff// Damn instead of da stairs you'll be taken the disabled lift. I was gonna battle ya hard - an thats the truth// I fact ma punches be knockin out each o' ya tooth// U can't touch me - ma style bulletproof// Is that ya momma callin yu cos i heard a Woof. MOnster -this aint even a test// I'd battle you longer - but no time left// your like a salad but missin the watercress// I'm jus damn lucky over da Internet I can't smell your breath. I'm Out. |
Where's the mutha fucka you pussy............................................. .................................................. ...............
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In my verse.....
'This aint no fairy tale........' Peace............................................. ................................................. |
Watch me win with half his bars..
and not even trying the slightest. I'm the champ & he's weak.. so fuck cuttin him some slack Cause Toners just a warm up.. like crunches & jumpin jacks Get smacked & left flat.. i feel bad cause, girls he'll never bone I mean.. bitches wouldnt dial-tone.. if they picked up the phone Just take ur ass home.. not even a house, its more like a shack And its sad but.. Tone's seen more huts, then fuckin quaterbacks So just give up hope, chump.. before i leave ur body on the floor And left dead in the Front Lines.. like the Revolutionary War I peeped ur closer and figured your a waste of my time And ur last words - "Your Out", alright .. ... Out of your fucking mind. blah garbage and an easy victory. :cool: |
I bet your really ugly??????........................................ .................................................. ...........
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i bet you looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooose.
bitch, upping for vet votes. |
iight here's a lil input since my aol server not lettin my poll vote go thru....toner had a nice verse he was in and out with decent
punches...good disses from him shined well...up ya wordplay some...flow was a lil off at points..ya opener was nice monster came short and sweet but honestly you stop kinda early...toner came with some nice heat...you had nice punches... disses hit good but you had a couple played lines which hit kinda predictable... good battle but i vote toner... |
^ Fuck outta here, toner dropped a bullshit ass verse, Monstar got this with the better wordplay / cocepts in his punches, it was a one sided battle in my opinion.
Vote: Monstar. Crew Vote Gone... -Axe |
toner got this wit better structure and nice punches
vote = toner yo hit up my battle wit an honest vote please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90127 payyycee!!! one liner gone. -feeble |
damn!!
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you sounded pissed cause of my vote.. either monsta your alias...or you wanna fuck him in the azz!!!:p |
Nope, your verse just genuinly wasnt that good, had a lot of played material and i didnt like it = /
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yea, even though me n Monster beefin right now...
see you obviously won this, these d/r votes like this is the exact reason you can't battle in Front Lines, try to hurry up n get to elite... battlin on rb is fallin tremendously unless you're in the league or in elite. And elite is gettin shaky. vote - Monster, obvious reasons |
blagh, this battle is...........ehhh
but monster obviously got this structure = monst punches = monst consistency = monst creativity = monst vote = monst |
YO IMA HALF 2 SAY TONER GOT THIS ONE
PUNCHES/TONER PERSONALS/DRAW META/TONER MULTI/DRAW OPENER/TONER CLOSER/NONE OVERALL/TONER MY VOTE/TONER _________________________________________ |
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