Homicide187 Vs Intense
 

heres da rulez

10 bar max
5 votes win
no crew, hate or d/r votes

u can spit first

alrigh checkin in i aint gonna spit 10 bars cuz im busy but ima do the most i can and give me bout a day and a half 2 think of this shit. peace be ready

well then ill spit first... cuz im eager to battle.. so ima post up my verse soon... ite... and its a 10 bar max.. so u can do less, u juss cant do more then 10 bars

My rhymes are sweet, juicy, 'finger-lickin', kall urself a rapper, but u juss a 'singer-spittin'/
watchin u battle aint "intense" its like a 'dike-war', n i dont really 'like-whores', so ima strangle u wit da 'mic-chord'/
U cant beat me in dis battle, u gettin 'rattled-hard', this kids so fake he got online 'battle-scars'/
I kno he likes suckin dick, i seen him 'fall-to-knees', he claims hes gotta gurl, but his gurls 'callin-me'/
this faggot lieks to watch 'gay porn', matter fact, last time he seen pussy was da day he was born/
Now im 'scornin' in this battle n 'warnin' that ill cut off ur 'four-limbs' n leave u 'deformed-kid'/

ite.. its my first battle.. so i wen kinda easy

homicide lookin 4 a easy battle cuz he cant handle a tru man
he cant split shit even wit help from both hands//
a lost isnt the best way 2 start make ur way
acceptin my shit was where homicide made his first mistake//
u spitin first cuz u jus rapin prewritten shit
i dont kno y u so confident yo punches never hit//
i dont kno if u read my last verse but yo shit doesnt compare
this shit takin a turn for the worst im afraid u arent prepared//
Like trapeez artists ya life is on the line
ya half assed efforts will never putta hole in mine//
im tryin 2 end this shit wit a big hit tho it aint needed
if ur goal was 2 loose ur first battle u've succeeded//
a lost isnt the best way 2 start make ur way
acceptin my shit was where homicide made his first mistake//

ayy my bad cuz i copyed and pasted the last line and i forgot 2 delete it after so jus skip my last bar cuz its also my second and it aint meant to be there so jus pretend u didnt see it.

uppin for votes ................... __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____

HEY first I DIDNT KNOW WHO TO CHOOSE CUZ YALL BOTH WERE SO HARD CUMMIN ON BUT HOMICIDE VERSE WAS BETTER SO I VOTE-Homicide a.k.a. Xplicit

lol.... i apreciate da vote..... but where'd da aka xplicit come from??? but neway... its 1-0 me.. uppin

Straight...fer newbies

Flow-Homicide
Metas-Hom
Punches-Homi
Humor-none
Vocab-tie

Yall used some wack and played metas...Intense didn't hardly use any...Homicide shoulda kept his ryhmescheme up through his whole verse it woulda merked him....but Homicide Got it anyway....

Yo Hit this wit honest votes....\\

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Setup~Homo
Punches~Homo
Consistency~Homo
Metas~No1
Personals~no1
Overall~Homo got this other guy was trash ya both need to elevate but Homo You Got This Son~1

alrigh dats it i apprechiate da votes its 3-0 now dats a ko nice battle homicide thanx 4 voting. __________________________________________________ __

ite... den i guess dis can be closed... how do our battle records get updated???? Does sum1 do it for us?

ooo.. nvm,.. i guess da votes automatically stop at 5... ite, so kepp votin ppl.. n make sure u vote on the poll

yo homicide got this wit a much much better verse nice flow and mad hott punches..i was goin wit it.....

vote= homicide thug

payycee!!!

thanx... still uppin.... lets see dem votes........ dont sleep on dis....... holla back wit ya votezzzzz

VOTE PPL....... damn ders like 400 ppl on all da time, this is like da most active site i been to... y dese battlez gettin slept on?

UPPIN FOR VOTEZZZZZZZZZ..... we need users to vote on da polls...... id appreciate that... thanx........

well....Im pretty much on the fence withthis one....But i do tilt towards homocides side.....

there was nothing special on both verses...U 2 need to elevate a bit....But that aint a bad thing....

anyway.....Homo took it....peace

UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPIIINNNNNNNNNNNNn for sum votes ppl... come on.. i kno yall gotta be peepin dis shyt

how many more votes u want homicide da votes are 5-0 u wanna make it worst damn a man can only take so much.lol nice battle this shit should be already closed and u got da win and i'll take da loss like a man. peace

opener: Tie
closer: Tie
Flow: Homicide
structure: Intense
Punches: Homicide
wordplay: Tie


nice battle peeps, but homicide took this one

ite thanx for da vote... keep em comin..... we need more poll votezz up in herrrrrrrrreeeeeeee.............

uuuppppppppiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn for votez.... i kno dis aint da best battle.... but juss dont sleep on it n get it over wit

Homocide Took This Rather Easily
Not Really Much Of A Good Battle
But WHen It Comes To Punches
Homocide Takes The Category

I Hit Ures Up .. Do The Same
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