Open Mic... Feedback?
 

Fucka Open Mic Foum Getting Slept On! Condemn Them All To Hell!


Please Read This.. Not A True Story By Any Means But A Lot Of Emotions Came Out Last Night.. Anybody Good With Open Mics Please Reply With Feed And Pointers.

This Tells A Very Vivid Story.. Pay Attention To Each Line.

Random Thoughts

Same Shit Different Day... I Hope I Can Sustain The Rain
Tempers Flarin... And Bloods Pumpin Through My Veins
Another Comment Made.. More Names Added To My Hit List
Just More Jokes Gettin Me On The Verge Of My Wrists Slit
Thoughts Swirlin In My Mind... Anger Devours My Mind
Write Back Your Death Wish... And Leave It Signed

Yours Truly

But Whats Worse Truly... Is Nobody Understands Us
You Revealed My Secrets... For You I've Lost All Trust
As I Approached The Bus.. I Found Out I Was Left In The Dust
You Betrayed Me.. My Signs Of Life Are Fading
Never Call.. And I'm Drawn To The Conclusion You Hate Me
Always There For You.. Remember The First Time You Got Laid B?
It Was Shady.. Left Me For That Supposed Lucky Lady...
That Hates Me.. And I Bet You Can't Even Remember Her Name
Im Goin Insane, Addin Up the Reasons To Leave You In Pain
Number One... Hell I Can't Even Begin To Explain
Number Two... Your Were The Only Person That Kept Me Sane
And Kept Me Sayin.. Today Is Worth Living
Instead I Got Worse Living..
And You Brought Out The Pain That Lurks In Me
Workin Fifty.. Hours A Week.. Just Goes To Show Ya
My Life Has Peaked.. And It Was Nice To Know Ya
Or Is It? Considering Never Do You Even Visit...
Back In The Days We Was Bros... I Guess You Don't Miss It
I Was On The Edge..
Then You Pushed Me Off And Left Me Emotionally Dead
Wishin Ya Read This..
You Coulda Saved Me Now You Can't Do Shit
I'm Hoping He's Dead.. I Don't Wanna Be The One To Do It

I'm Sorry

Almost Midnight.. I Knew You'd Be Hangin Out With Friends
This Friendships Over... Because Its Too Dirty To Cleanse
Shoulda Been There.. But Tonite's The Night That...

Your Life Ends

Its 1:13.. The Darkness Swallows Me As I Slam The Door
Covered In The Shadows.. Not Knowing Whats In Store
The Moon Watches Me.. With Suspicion Quickly Arising
I Still Can't Find Out Why... I'm The Subject Of Despising
I Felt Eyes Upon Me.. So I Walked Over And Got Low
I Creeped Across The Grass.. And Opened Up My 73' Bronco
I Slowly Began To Drove, Studying My Surrounding; Eyes Peeled
Worryin So Much About Him.. I Lost Focus Behind The Wheel
Then I Began To Swerve Across The Road..
As I Attemped To Tag The Brake With My Heel
Let Out A Faint Squeal, And Flew Through The Windsheild

In Critical Condition

Landed In The Hospital... Too Many Injuries To Count
I May Be Dying.. But Still Nobody Comes Around
Thoughts Are Out Of Wack.. Mind's Too Fucked Up To Repair
As For My Friend.. He Died In The Accident... But Do I Care?

Why would you do this?

off topic but still on

im getting lazy with my feedback
now i reply to les but my comments are more in depth
i hate when i respond, drop a link and never hear from the person...

Booo... Go Kill Yourself!

I'm not the one that posts Open Mics in R.R.

thats an open mic...oops
it was another long post i didnt want to read so i just did a vague answer

like this

^^ Ha ha thats true

0ooo0000oooooo...nice comeback

FreePost

Come Back...

Dats An Even Better One For You To Use^...

Holla...

Your Welcome...

-Azaz

Bruk... Your Name Is Gay In Itself.. I'm Not Even Sure Why I Am Talkin To You. You Be On My Nuts Like My Fuckin Dickhead. Man Your Almost Worse Than Brixton. Stop Responding Back Here Please.. I Don't Care For Your Posts.

LOL GOOD COMEBACK AND IF HE IS SO PHUCKIN WITTY THEN WHY WOULD HE DO THIS LOL

GOOD ONE DICKHEAD^

this shit was actually tight...flow was off the hook...I thought you was wack Aisle but I was wrong....

I Was Never Wack.. But Thanx For The Feedback.

nice shit man............from the point "your life ends" it was really good....very deep...creative too....nice...

but you should have posted this in emcee iteraction instead of RR maybe

Jus more peeps that think aisle is a twat

lol...open mics in R.R

SUPER CHUMP

Still Never Kissed A Girl Brixton? Well Its Pretty Damn Obvious.

lol...he got pre pubecent disses aswell.
i prob get more in a wk than a chump like you will
in a year...peeps who play their status ghost r sad
E.g=Brooklyn
Another E.g.=Aisle

hahaha..loser

plz give me feedbk,,ya such a loser
he dint post it in open mic coz he knew it'd jus get dissed
oh sign up to sacred scriptures this wk and ask for me
i'll show ya an open mic....^^^^^scum

^Cool Comeback^

Why Do You Call People Losers When Your Postin Like 45 Times A Day. Give It A Rest.

And Yes I'll Ask For You Brix..

If Your Battles Have Indicate Anything About Your Open Mics You Are Garbage. Seriously. I Already Signed Up For SS.. I'll Ask For You And You'll Lose... Fag.

LOL..IF ITS ANYTHIN TO GO BY WITH THIS OPEN MIC THEN YOU'VE ALREADY BEEN BEAT..
I SAW YA THREE WAY MATCH AND EVEN HI MY NAME IS BEAT YOU....I THOUGHT YA WERE PRETTY GOOD AT FIRST BUT YOU'RE PRETTY WAK...SWEAR TO GOD YOUR PUNCHES AND WORDPLAY WERE JUS ..EEEWWWW...WOOODY BLAH!!!!


I'LL DEF BEAT YA IN SS THO............
COZ YA SHIT AT ACTUALLY WRITIN REAL SHIT

I Just Glanced At Your SS Verse.. What A Piece Of Shit. I Never Wanna Hear You Talk Trash About Your Open Mics AGAIN. Man I Almost Regret Readin That Horrible Piece Of Shit. No Flow At All, Off Topic, I Had To Force Myself To Finish Reading It.

You Just Made My Day.. LoL.

LOL...THAT IS Y A LOTTA PEEPS BE TELLIN ME ITS ILL AND THAT I'VE GOT THE RIGHT FLOW,RHYME SCHEME ETC...
JUS SHOWS YOU DONT KNOW SHIT
BYE BYE PUBECENT

y did u post it in here...

I Lost To Hi My Name Is? He Faced Lethargic Moron. It Was Me Vs Koncept Vs Feeble You Ignorant Dickface. And I May Have Lost.. But Everybody Knows That Match Was Close As Shit Between Me And Feeble. Although I Only Got One Vote.. It Was Evolves Vote For Me. And Everybody Knows I Have Elevarted Immensely And Am Now One Of The Better Heads On The Site. You Just Got A Fuckin Entry Match.. Lost AND Was Kicked Out Of LLL Because Nobody Though You Were Good Enough. Face It Dude Your Wack. Keep Talkin.. And That Slips Match Is Still On The Table..

Ask Anybody About My Verse In LLL... It Was Dope, So Was Feebles.. Recognize What Your Even Saying. You Couldn't Even Get A Vote For The Wackest Head In LLL. I'm 2-2 In LLL.. Which Isn't Bad At All Facing The Best Heads On The Site. While You Begged And Begged Evolve With 708705873 Links To Get In.. Outta Frustration He Let You In For An Entry Match. And You Were Booed Out In One Week. Now You Got Kicked Out By Spitacular Who I've Beaten Before.. (No Offense To You Spit) And Now Your Reppin An Even Gayer Crew With An Even Gayer Name And An Even Weaker Roster. Just Shut Up.. And Learn How To Write.

Buhooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Take Off Caps Dickface. And Who Told You That You Were Ill. This Was Like My First Real Open Mic Ever. I Tried Out For Claustraphobics, And Auspicious Said If I Won One Match In SS I Was In. I'd Like To See You Try Out There.. Face It You Have No Talent.. And Your Jokes Are Gay. And Your Just Plain Wack. Now Get A Life And Hop Off My Nuts.

Seriously Brixton, You're Shit. The People Who Told You That You Were ''iLL'' Wanna Get in ya Panties

OOOOHHHH SOFT SPOT BABY...NO OFFENCE TU CENTS BUT NO ...YOUR NOT KNOWN AS A GOOD HEAD HERE...FACE IT YOUR NOT...NEITHER AM I BUT I DONT CLAIM TO
YES I ASKED AND ASKED BUT THEN I REALISED...WHY?...THAT LEAGUE IS SLEEPIN...I DINT GET IN COZ I BITCHED LIKE A BITCH.....NO YOU DIDNT NEARLY WIN,YOU GOT MERKED BY FEEBS AND KONCEPT

AND YOU DEF BIT THAT LINE...BOLLOX IT WAS A COINCIDENSE THAT IT WAS BIT
YOU TALK CRAP.......YOU SCOURED FOR LINES THAT YOU THOUGHT PEEPS WUNT SEE...BUT LIKE BARON CAM SAID YOU JUS RE-ARRANGED IT...EVOLVE PROB ONLY LIKED THAT LINE YOU BIT

YOUR NOT GOOD.....THAT IS ALL.......origanally posted by Chrit
THATS HIS MOTTO AND YOU ARE...SO STOP BEIN GAY THINKIN YOUR GREAT AND A WORTHY ASSET TO THIS SITE

hero you like little boys...good bye

That's Why I Came For You

lol.............................................
another alias?
oh well your gay..
more dots.................................
.................................................
methane u dont chat,you bitch..
you dont battle...i can understand that
but i dont see no topicals off you either
wot do u actually do on this site?

I Freepost


I've Done All the Battling n Topicals n Shit. That's All Behind Me

Lmao Sick Comeback... Your My Hero! ;)


Yea Brixton... I Really Got My Ass Whooped. I Easily Beat Out Koncept.. And Probably The Best Head On The Site Voted For Me. The HW And LW Champs Said I Have Elevated Immensely. And Yea Brix, You Caught Me Redhanded Biting.. Considering That Battle Took Place A Week Before I Even Registered. And Was Closed Before I Even Had A Username. Meaning That It Was Impossible For Me To Have Seen It, Since All Closed Frontline Battles Are Only Mod Viewable.. Good Attempt Smart One. I Wasn't Calling Myself An Asset To The Site.. I'm Just Saying All The Peeps In LLL Are A Step Above the Rest.. Two Steps In Your Case. I'm Still Offering Slips Right Now.. But Keep Ducking. The League Is Sleeping? What The Hell Are You Talking About? That Battle Took Like One Day To Close. I'm Fine With Losing.. But Everybody Knows That Battle Was Close As Hell.. Koncept Got Blown Out Of The Water By Me And Feebs. I Came In A Close Second. You Have The Gayest Comebacks Ever.. Honestly. You Sound Like Your 10. Keep Talkin In Caps You Homo. And I Love The Fake Chrit Quote.. I Really Bet Chrit Talks In Caps And That The Board Can't Spell Originally Correct.

You Soft Minded Individual.. Your IQ Is Like What.. 75? Damn Your An Idiot.

Freepost, Like Me

Anyways... Uppin For Some Comments On The Original Purpose Of This Thread... My Open Mic.

lol to skiddz..thats ok then..no skiddz does topical

R you ok mc299935435365/tu cents/aisle 5 ?
I Was Playin sayin that chrit says that is all....dumb ass...there aint a hidden met there.
Damn wots wrong with you
no i decline...once again becoz on the chance i get beat i would be off the site,and i'd not have the RB humour with me.
I Like to have fun...unlike you who make this shit serious life changing shit
"c'mon guys help me....Whats wrong with me?"
damn...chill the fuk out
have fun aisle and stop takin ma comments to heart...

^ Likes the Cock

yes i do like male chicken/turkey...dont know which one
^^^but methane has a pic of himself in his sig

Brix... Stop Referencing To "Real" Life. I Realize This Isn't Real Life. But I Love To Write.. And I Love To Get Better. You Coming In Here And Talking Shit Is Moronic. If Your Gonna Keep Talking Then At Least Back It Up With Some Skill And Stop Bein Such A Herb. Its Getting Very Annoying With You Coming Into Each Thread Of Mine And Expressing How Much You Are On My Nuts. Yeah I Do Enjoy Writing Alot.. And Opinions Mean A Lot To Me On Here. It Has No Barring On Your Social Life. I'm Gonna Write An Open Mic Soon On The Loss Of My Brother A Year Ago. Watch Out For It...

You Still Like the Penis

Right..From now on aisle ima stop bitchin..i like your writin
jus that with you dissin me am not jus gonna sit here and go ok
on my side the net beef is squashed...i officially apologize
Yes the LLL battle was close i admit it
i jus hate peeps who bite n i thought you did...
but du to your explanation you obviously didnt
so sorry for the false accusation....yes it does sound like i want to grab your dick and ride it but in all honesty...there is no point me jus bitchin...period
up to you if ya accept

Aight Were Straight Then I Guess.