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executive vs. Nitemarre
10 lines / 5 bars
Check in and we'll spit after 20 mintues No crew , hate, d/r Explain all votes \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\//////////////////////// ////////////////////////////\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\ Lez Go! |
This is going to be good.
I'll be back to check on your drops, I'm interested to see who will come out on top. (Aragorn bows respectfully) |
yo nitemarre c'mon lets get this started i'll check in after you check in................................................ .................................................. .
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...................den Im checkin da fuck in........................................~
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aight checking in we drop in 20 min tops.............................................. .................
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I Think You Know About 'Heat' But I Bring It Wit Lyrical Punches||
Hunch Is: The Enchelada Go Make It Feel Like Hundreds~o~Crunches|| So Pack Ya Lunches, Take A Field Trip To The Heart Of Hades|| I Spark M-80's, Blatantly Shove Em Down Yo Hanes~Fa~Ladies|| I Gotta 'Lottery Of Bullets' Cuz They'll 'Hit At Random'|| Slap Ya Eyes Out "Oh Say Cant U See" Like The 'Anthem'|| I'll Cut U Up Into Pieces, Of Feces The Size Of Recees|| Get 'Sprayed Like Wild Sneezes' 'Catch' Hollow Like 'Deseases'|| My Controll Sorta Like Jesus, To Tell The Truth Is My Duty|| Like Judge Judy I'll Attack and Snap At You Rudly||..........lol Any metas u dont get............................................... then dont vote I Shoulda used spanish in this one like my last one, aginst .1........ Hit this too http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90920 |
nitemarre its a shame ur mom didnt consider abortion/
cuz a portion of u is out of proportion/ you couldn’t give a ~nightmare~ to ~kid’s using make up and screaming profanity/ this pussy is only thinking nightmares cuz awake he’s ~lost~in~sanity~/ im burning nitemarre like the recent fires in L.A with some ~match~sticks~/ nitemarre cant handle my ~bars~ like paraplegics attempting ~gymnastics~/ watch as ~executive Kruger~ brakes ~ ur sleep and you wake up witha torn~knee~/ bitch nitemarre spits ~sugar flakes~ cuz his rhymes always sounding ~corny~/ now to finish you nitemarre” im shoving this verse all up ~in you~/ then presume to cut ur body to pieces and put you on ~Dr. Hannibal’s~ menu/ |
GOod battle BUT EXECUTIVE WON THIS BATTle
cleaner punches unplayed an better multies punches..an personal took it tho V_ EXECUTIVE ^yo bro i got 2 battles up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90959 ^^thats the ILLER ONe EVEN THo MY OPPENET PREWRITE HIS SHIT AN BROKE TIME LIMIT...POLLYA VOTE>PC |
nah.....nitemarre won this one.......
better punches and more creativity.. multis also go to nitemarre.... executive...i did like that corny line cuz it appeals to shit i see on this board all day...corny ass punches but one line aint enuff....vote nitemarre no hate....... honest vote on battle in my sig |
NOPE....i DUN KARE.... EXECUTIVE GOT IT...
ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT...... |
upping .........................yo his verse for some odd reason never mentioned me at all could be it was intended for someone else...like packinheat maybe?.who knows but it looks to me it was pre written
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Good battle...
Nice rhymes. But Executive took this with punches and wordplay... Nice shit. I'd give Nitemarre the multi's for sure... Perhaps the flow. But he got outdone in the other catagories by Exec. Especially the closer...compain yaself to a chick didn't help. Vote: Executive Peace Hit back... Born vs. Cut |
good verses from u both...Nite u had some tight lines...and good punches...but ur wordplay wasn't really noticable except for the rip ur eyes Anthemn line...that was tight....but exec had harder punches and wordplay...this is the line that done it....
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that was dope...lol...nice battle from u both...and pretty evened out...but executive had better wordplay...which is the only thing that i think took this battle....everything else was practically equivalent....good read....no hate...just a vote... peace 4:20 |
decent battle but exec gets this..
heres why wordplay=exec flow=nite....execs flow was a little shakey in some areas multi=nite personals=exec...nite needed a few to help his verse punches=exec creativity=tie complexity=close...tie as well fav line=exec's watch as ~executive Kruger~ brakes ~ ur sleep and you wake up witha torn~knee~/ bitch nitemarre spits ~sugar flakes~ cuz his rhymes always sounding ~corny~/ ^nice punch here....liked the wordplay executive lose the "~" and the" /"..its kinda newbish...free advice here... poll vote=executive had better punches and and hit nice wit personals nite needed more personals...would have been close rot judge hit this up guys thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91144 |
upping this...................................c'mon people lets get this done
make sure you guys poll and leave some feed back.. check out ~~> http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1501#post901501 |
Vote: Executive
Better wordplay and punches, nice shit dawg Gymnastics won it Peace............................................. .......... |
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