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King Of The South Vs tek
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pep the narrative, wit me there's no comparatives/ I-will send shots right through you/ you'll be on Pacers like a Miller fan//
Tek felt froggy so he leaped/ the formal invite/ ask him how it feels to have his career end in one night// challenging me is like the blind watchin' tv/ pointless/ or like fag running into a gauntlet// this is like the Collumbine Massacre/ Ima bastard plus, you're not the present you're the past tense// but I do acknowledge the fact that you're six strong/ wit 2 L's/ lets be honest you're pink like Champele// and from hell/ I deliver balls of flame/ mental~superbulatious~got nerves that pinch brains/ yousa a true lame// my lines are on Viagra, they harder than yours/ flow deep like the Niagra, the smarter than yours// and I don't care if you on 'E' and your whole Units a 'G'/ I blow 50 everyday your flow ain't nothin' to me// Tek Executed by King, so your name fits/ suprised true king, and I'm not surprised if you can't spit// I'm ill-will, you're more like lil-skilled/ my lines don't punch Tek, muthafucka they kill............. |
Tek… the fire spitter, is shittin on this expired quitter…
Get ya head blown, and "leave topless" like a retired stripper…/ De-thrown the sequel, its official, this King is dead… Afta I drop, you'll be beggin for admins to close this thread…/ All soaked in red, bruised up from every punch I connect wit… Lips drippin, not from my fists, from succin whose dicc?!…/ (lmao) Followed scent to tha clique, couldn’t keep your mouf off ma dicc… Droundin ya scripts, fuccin pussy, prolly sit down when you piss…/ Its worthless to think, or try to direspect this vet… Cuz my punches are like nextels, every one is a 'direct connect'…/ im fulla gin.. you wont eva write a verse again if you try to pulla grin… You make me 'board', just anotha thread for me to put my 'bullet-in'…/ Intellectually… I'll 'break you down', like retarded kids pop loccin… Your cocc hoppin, bitch I'll burry you wit out a trace like pac's coughin…/ Your gambling wit the devil, still no 'chance in hell' that your raps will make it… Smash ya fake shit, droppin 'cartoon verses' cuz they're all animated and fabricated…/ |
good verse Tek, we'll meet again............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...
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No doubt dawg... nicee verse.
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Uppn this ish...
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lol teks verse wuz good yo...no doubt
Droundin ya scripts, fuccin pussy, prolly sit down when you piss…/ ^lol^ Get ya head blown, and "leave topless" like a retired stripper…/ ^hott^ souths verse wussent hitten hard enuff...tek got this. nice bttle |
tek took this punches structure and flow were much more supeirior and i felt he took this easy ...................
could you hit this up plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2790#post892790 |
damn
i gotta give it to king cuz tek i didnt understand what the fuck you were tring 2 spit it was all out of place the wordplay was bad on this one kings verse was better overall with better flow and wordplay vote/king hit it up me vs copyrighted me vs whitelightning |
Im not gonna vote cuz im lazy but i gotta point out this shit
challenging me is like the blind watchin' tv/ pointless/ or like fag running into a gauntlet// this is like the Collumbine Massacre/ Ima bastard plus, you're not the present you're the past tense// but I do acknowledge the fact that you're six strong/ U DIDNT RHYME 5 LINES IN A ROW GODDAMMIT WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU! "bitch I'll burry you wit out a trace like pac's coughin" did u mean Coffin? WOW!!! Maybe King's verse "pinched ur nerves" with "mental~superbulatious~" can u be more white? Normally im not a hater but this shit jus pushed me over the fuckin edge Yea and if u wanna battle its gonna have to be audio this text shit is gay |
^^^ I wasnt gonna say anyfing...
Yo... ECCO... u didnt poll dawg... an ur a real joke Ismael. Uppn... . ... ..... ....... ......... ....... ..... ... . |
Yo... vote on this plz... drop a link an i'll peep ur battle...
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91269
Hit that yall...........honest One sided...........Tek...............More metas better flow, harder punches................ king dint do too bad though..............just incoorporate some sliker shit in ya verse next time.............. |
flow*tek
puches*tek disses*tek vocab*= structure*tek Vote tek............. all i need is 1 mo honest vote on my battle pls return da favor honestly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91100 |
Good hard merk for Tek...
Killed King's stretched lines and pitty pat punches. Bad, bad rhyme scheme and format from King. Not a bad idea on the disses, just real bad delivery. Better format, punches, wordplay, and everything. For Tek Hit me back... Vote on this! Peace |
Werd nucca... feelin this shit...
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UPPN...
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one side
tek had this easily, better punches nice flo and a nice opener,nice verse http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91016 |
...uppn...
Can we finish this plz...? . ... ..... ... . ... ..... ... . ... ..... ... . |
Yo... lookin to end this so i can start a new battle...
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kings verse did rhyme, but he used a different structure rhymin on tha same line, not the next. Interestin but not strong enough.
tek's flow was tight, & his punches much harder, used metas sparingly but effectively. VOTE: Tek I took the time, now you hit this up wiv an honest vote cos it's bein slept on like a ho................................................ ............... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=domN8 |
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