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Thog Reborn 11-08-03 02:01 PM

Nitemarre vs Thog Reborn
 
10 lines max
no dick rides
no hate votes
no crew votes
blind spit
check in
u have 30 mins from check in to spit...
good luck

Nitemarre 11-08-03 02:04 PM

Checkin in Main..............................................
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Nitemarre 11-08-03 02:27 PM

Ima Merk him.......yo.......yo............Check


I got 'Nines' Like The Price of The Nintedo Gamecube||
You Lame Fool, 'Infra Red Dots' Dont Meam I'll 'AIM' You||*
One Win For ALL THOSE POSTS Dawg, Im Not Surprised||
This IS A 'THOG' Reborn Guys, Only Found N 'South Sides'|| florida
And Now Im 'Knockin Out Eyes'...Wit Lyrical 'Voodoo Magic'||
My Lines 'Sharp As Butcher Knives' So Ill Take A 'Stab-At-It'||
Punchlines Like 'Strategic Placed Barrels Of Dynamite'||
I Make You 'Nervous' Like 'Nicotine When U Cant Find A Light'||
I Know You Post A Lot-Dont Battle-Stick 2 'THOG Litertature'||
Unless You WANNA BE A 'RIP' In Ya Friends Signature||

*It took AIM to get here....

Thog Reborn 11-08-03 02:28 PM

He'll Pear In The Ballot Box,As I Get A Head In The Votes
I 'Stand Up' To Spit,This Aint Comedy,So Dont Take It As A Joke
Like A Needle In a Haystack..Peep My Verse..n Get Lost In Amazement
Im Discusted By The Looks Of The Battle,From Mirror Images Ill Face It
Theres No Way Im Losein,So Death Is The Only Nitemare Im Havin
No Voters R Fealin Ur Shit,Even Fisting Fetish Queers,Arnt Fealin This Faggot
Drop A Key On This Lock,N Open The Door To Ur Weakness
Devour Ur Brain,Leavin Ur Skull,So For Ur Loss In This Battle,U Cant Think Of A Reason
No One Likes Ur Style,Like Ur Sig,Ur The Only One Quotin Ya Own Lines
Fault Ur Awareness,So Ur Half As Sharpe,Like I Cut Ya Neck,With a Broken Knife

Thog Reborn 11-08-03 02:36 PM

k both verses are up..vote this up...holla
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Do_Or_Die 11-08-03 02:51 PM

flow:Nite
disses:Nite
punches:=
vocab:Nite
complexity:Nite
Personals:=

Vote:nite

both ya'll hit dis up honestly and i'll poll vote when i hit 100 posts

MyNd. FuLL 11-08-03 03:28 PM

okay breakdown forth coming...

flow=nite, born your flow was a little off
structure=nite
wordplay=both
personals=both
vocab=thog
punches=reborn

vote=reborn, decent battle seen beter form ThOG from back in the day..but this line took it for me

Theres No Way Im Losein,So Death Is The Only Nitemare Im Havin
No Voters R Fealin Ur Shit,Even Fisting Fetish Queers,Arnt Fealin This Faggot

decent punch...my favorite in the whole battle
no hate nite, had good flow and nice punches but thog out punched you...

just wanted to say to Reborn, that i am sorry for the loss of his
friend/family members... in my prayers dawg
much luv...
out

SmokaJoka. 11-08-03 03:35 PM

pretty good battle....Thog had a nice flow and vocabulary....but i think nitemarre got this with punches, personals, and wordplay....here's a breakdown...

BREAKDOWN
Multis - Thog
Vocab - Thog
Punches - Nite
Personals - Nite
Wordplay - Nite
Violence - Tie
Flow - Thog
Creativity - Nite
Complexity - Nite
RhymeScheme - Nite
Overall - Nitemarre got this....good battle...but his wordplay and puches were tight.....gamecube line was coo....

peace
4:20

Thog Reborn 11-08-03 03:39 PM

no wonder they call u smoker.
cuz my punches n werdplay killed him..his lil 9 line with game cube was weak has hell in werdplay

well o well...keep upin...vote this up...holla

up 2

Dimez 11-08-03 10:41 PM

flow~nite
Structure~nite
Worth Reading~nite
Vocabulary~Thiog Reborn
Multis~Tie
Metaz~nite

vote-nite

poetictendenceez 11-08-03 10:47 PM

i can't vote, but if I could my vote would go to Nitemare. Wordplay was better, so were punches.....good effor on both parts....but nitemaree got this junk.....

hit this up with an honest vote.....thanks ya'll

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88767

Young P 11-08-03 10:55 PM

Its Like A Lil Kim Song...

How Many Dicks Can He Fit Up His Ass Till The Center Of Da Uhh...

Uhh...

Nitemarre=Mad Dickrider...

Im Definitly Goin Wit THOG For Obvious Reasons...

Punches, Werdplay...

Everything...

I Give Best Dickrider-Nitemarre...

Vote... THOG Reborn...

-Azaz

-ElocuShun- 11-14-03 04:53 PM

Breakdown=
laughter factor=thog
punches=thog...altho ballet is played
persoanls=tie
wordplay=thog...nice
flow=both
structure=both
opener=nite
closer=thog
overall=thog
pz

TAG 11-14-03 04:56 PM

flow=nite
structure=nite
wordplay= tie
personals= ie
vocab=nite
punches=reborn
My vote gos to Nite

V.A. $lim 11-14-03 05:10 PM

unless these peops are readin a diff verse than I am then I have to agree wit young p thog took this shit easy punches wordplay won the battle for him so my vote is for thog

other than that
nite if your closer was meant to be a personal that's real fucked up if not its coo but you dont fucking do shit like that thats lower than JA-rule bringin haley into the beef between him and EM

Thrust 11-14-03 05:12 PM

i gotta go wit thog...
he was just comin stronger...tho his lines were stretched...
it still flowed n just had harder punches...
the wordplay n all was pretty much even..
other kid.. needs to lose all those fuckin ' fo realy...
that's just whack
vote=thog


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