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When I Grow Up - Song of E.P.
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"Song off e.p. .... quality better be real good...."
ok quality is good...this beat is mad popish....chorus goes along with the beat. there is no difference in the chorus and verse..as far as Reverb/stereo seperation...which is not a good thing...it sounds like one big chorus Lyrics...heartfelt.. Flow...good...some spots where it seemed choppy...but overall nothing to complain about delivery...Kinda Simple..old school...got that 90's feel...very popish again... overall decent....but get that chorus / verse problem fixed 1 |
The Chrous/Verse thing.. That is the style of the song. The beat is a kinda party type beat. It'z kinda weird, but itz a different type of style.
Thanx for the opinnions tho. |
Still think you are a dick, but enjoyed the track. Not bad.
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NO....there is a difference between a CHORUS, and STEREO seperation....
i think you wanted stereo seperation on the main track...and a chorus on the chorus...but got a chorus the whole time ive NEVER heard a track like this....its annoying on the ears and brain to not know where the verse and chorus change simply by sound 1 |
ummm alright.. Thanx fo the tips Dre?...
Upp'nnn..... |
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years old u got sum skill i guess u sounded good for a 8th grader u got lots of elevation t odo but u got alot of time to do it pc stay up |
Pretty Good Shemy...
I Like The Flow And The Lyrics Were Good... The Chorus Was Good Too... |
Quote:
that was actually funny.... |
ok dog, i dont care how old you are
you post something saying its going on an EP then its gonna get critiqued not only for its content but its quality i wouldnt pay $5 or more for an EP with Shitty Quality and bad mixing thats all im saying JUST TRYING TO HELP dick 1 |
No you can't have my dick.
And I appreciate your comments, I was juss playin bout the Dre thing. No hate homie. But, my quality of my E.P. is not bad. Soundclick distorts the music to bad. No beef |
I Have To Say I Really Enjoyed This Track.. Had Me Bobbin My Head And Shit.. Nice Shit. Your Text Is Awful (No Offense) But Your Audio's Are Dope.. Keep Droppin...
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this is coo right here. quality is less then desirable.. but djx ask yourself.... does it matteer on a 13 years old ep??? lol what he gonna do playin for his family at christmas.... good shit dog.. you got lots of elevatin......... practice makes perfect
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the song was ku then i went and listened to the rest of ure soundclick
the song wit pac and eminem DONT DO THAT EVER AGAIN u almost ruined pac for me luckily i clicked it off the rest was shit and ure voice gets really annoying |
Thanx bitch..
Next... |
LMMFAO at the dre comment.
I enjoyed this alot actualy.. You really 13 and in 8th grade? Just curious, cuz if you are man, you do have ALOT of time to elevate, and your already well above average. |
^^ Thanx alot man. I appreciate it.
I was hopeing I didn't sound that bad. Upp'nnn |
yo......decent shit playa.....keep it up, continue to elevate
return the feed http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92323 |
this track was aight....nothing to complain about but i think im gonna agree with alcatrakz on the chorus thing but other than that its cool
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I think it is dope myself. But ya noe..It is my track.
Ya'll can check out some of my other songs too. I suggest... In Da Club Remix (Nice Topic) Everybody Round Da World When I grow up Them 3 are my nicest... Thug SupaStar is ok.. But ya noe. Keep throwing some opinions at me. Don't Forget Bout "When I Grow Up Tho" |
nice beat... you kick in to tha beat nice.. hook is pretty good.. not really catchy.. but good... verse.. i'm likin' this, sick content, an' flow is perfect... i'm likin' this, i'd kick it on my player.. u got some nice songs still, holla on AIM bluntthemc if u down 4 a collab for my boys mixtape..
hit up my track http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92245 |
This song was dope...
Good Beat Nice Delivery Nice way of putting words together. 10/10 Good luck with your Atlantic Records shit. 1 |
i wudnt say 10/10 nothins perfect..but
this shit was pretty dope...nice beat flow blah blah feelin it |
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Yeah, I meant flow and shit 10/10. IT IS NICE SHIT!! |
Uppp'nnn this shit for respones....
(This is ShEmY by the way) |
i reckon this was a dope track never peeped ur peices before but i was surpised at how good it was..
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If you do radio shit like this your production need to be way better.Sounds are verry "cheap".The beat that is played over the first intro drumsounds sound like a loop.The guitar line is solid.Dont use that swingtiming on the beat again cuz it reminds me of the Fresh prince.use different kick and snare-replace the string sound with something that sounds more$$
your voice is better than the production..I LIKE THE HOOK. peace,and check out my shit with the COCOA BRAVAZ & AFURA http://www.soundclick.com/chewfuphat |
but i did download it hehehe
peace |
I'm typing while I'm listening to the song..
the boot is smooth..jazzy..I like it:)..not feeling the hook too much..the flow is good..lmao@ the math line..you sound a lil like Bow Wow..it's cool tho..you should have used a different topic for this beat..only line I didnt like was when you claimed you was a thug..you may be a thug..but I really dont care about..the sling cocaine but addicted to crack was golden..overall..I liked it..fuck the hatas.. |
flow was fluid as fuck... beat was dope.. this shit is the shit i be bumpin man... this was str8 fire... really like this shit man...
return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105456 |
aight ya'll...i aint been here in a while. There is alot more songs on there besides this one now. Like My Life, an Liquid Dreams, an alot of dope ones. So peep them all. But, don't forget bout When I Grow Up.
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Track Was Aight ....
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