Dominator -vs- Sustain
 

Spit whatever length you want
ill match

{ Just a waste of Time, A lost Watch and cheap like Timex }
{ U actually prevailing is like Extacy with no Side Affects }
{ Deflect ur spits, you couldnt Perfect using Spell Check }
{ I'll rob you blind like previously Rehearsed Card Decks }
{ You carry childesh structure like Australian Kangaroos }
{ Your battlin MC Transparent, D's Insults pass Through }
{ Stand Inbetween Thin and Fat to say your Middle Weight }
{ 300 posts in weeks is more than Alabamas Incest Rates }
{ Ur Dumb, u'd turn up the AC if ur Boy yelled Hide the Heat }
{ Doms sadder than messages written to Army Mail Retreats }
{ Forget freestyling, just bite, become Mosqitoes on Night Hikes}
{ Cuz ur attempt is more useless than Falopian tubes in 2 Dykes }
{ Spit utters, U Couldnt Concentrate while using Golf Putters }
{ Ur lines are not fat, So every1 cant believe their not Butter }

i didnt know you spit.... ill spit when I wake up..... its midnight so im goin to bed.... ill be up at noon

After one line im'a make your body collapse like weak cancerous lungs
Ill poke a hole in your career - leave ya lookin like a fag piercin his tongue
Your not even at 10 posts dawg, and yet you act like you know me
With your fake personals and played punches, ya just a game to me like Sony
Your just a fourteen year old kid tryna beat me with shit that's bizarre
But really, how the hell are you gonna catch me when you have no car
Your just a pre pubescent faggot, probably still got no hair on your cock
How are you gonna kill me with a glock when you go to bed at nine o'clock?
How you gonna learn to sustain when your still hangin with girls with no tits
The only time youve eva 'popped' something was when you were pickin your zits

UPPIN X 1
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YO PUT AN HONEST VOTE ON DIS N DEN ILL VOTE http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ghlight=olidogg ..........................................PZ

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flow:sustain
disses:sustain
punches:Dom
personasl:=
Vocab:=

Vote:Sustain...............nice battle dogg u pretty tight fo a newbie

my vote for this battle is thorn

Flow:thorn
Diss:thorn
Flow:tie
vote:thorn

good battle you both came really close he's right your good for a newbie

this is thorns lil bro

read the signature...........


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Uppin for votes.....

People please break down these battles....

No herbs that dont recognise personals.... All I had on him was his age and I did hella good for just knowing that....

~Flow: Dom
~Multies: Dom
~Opener: Sustain
~Finisher: Sustain
~Stucture: Sustain
~Personals: Dom
~Punchlines: Sustain

Vote: Sustain



return the favour, plz..and poll vote!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90638

vote - dom

he had better punches n personals in my view

vote on this now

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89707

word........

finally someone with sense........

note how its the people with below even records that have voted against me.... lol...

STRUC/D
WP/D
SIMPLESSATY/D
META/D
PUNCH/D
PERSON/D
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VOTE/D
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uppin x 4
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structure = sustain
flow = sustain
punches = D
creativity = sustain
wordplay = sustain
originality = D
metas = sustain

vote = sustain

sus had some played punches in his verse tho, like the ac/hide the heat shit is played, ive heard the middle weight punchline b4 and the waste of time line b4

but the rest of his verses wasnt bad....nice creativty spent into it

hit this up w/ an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90294

Youve got to be kidding, I hate when I see good newbies get fucked over

Vote: Sustain

Way better verses in every categorie, Specially punchlines

"Fallopian Tubes in two Dykes" killed it

Flow: Tie
Punchs: S
Structure: Tie
Metas: S
Enjoyment. Tie

Vote: S

pretty nice battle..dom came played n kinda weak..thorns lil bro is pretty tight fo a newb

return the favour..hit up my sig