Do_OR_Die VS PAK N. HEAT
 

10 lines
no crew
no hate
no d/r
u drop first

naw i dont drop first its a blind spit
we both got 35 minutes from now
u agree if so start spittin who ever gets done wit ten lines first posts its like dat

yo i'm down wit my verse but i aint droppin it till u drop yo's so hurry up so we can get some votes ya heard!!!

naw dawg..^6 u must be on crack u drop now or fuk it..im almost done i wont even go on till u drop..i got a feelin u prewrite ya shit

I wrote when he was 6-1 and was wit the crew lyrical soldiers thats how old it is cause he act like he aint wanna show up but here it is and there is no feedin

U must be depressed cause it obvious u don’t got a life averaging 23 posts a day, we all no u aint getting pussy on tha net so u turning out gay//1

After I run over ur gonna need insurance so u better call gecko,Dogg Ur rhymes wouldn’t be complex if u was spittin wit marc ecko//2

How u make it into a crew when ur not no type of soldier,cause when it comes to rappin u get replaced quick like kurt warner and mark bulger//3

Ur whack son… 6 and 1 bout to have another loss,cause ur gonna be 6 and 2 and have the same record as the Vikings and randy moss//4

Ur name is pak n heat but the only thing hot is u breath,u can call me a cop cause I got ur ass remain silent like ur under arrest//5

Ur played ur stolen rhymes are getting old,cause by the looks of things u should change ya name to pak n cold//6

U think u really u can beat me ima bust ya lids,cause battlin me will leave u wit more disabilities than retarded kids//7

Ur better off no showin than spittin yo whack lyrics,cause im gonna leave u wit a bigger reaction then erics//8

If this is a blind spit u can call me stevie wonder cause I’m a natural at dis, u punches are not connecting I’m like a ghost cause they missed//9

This is my last line of my sick spit so I no ur piss,read my shit don’t say it cause it will leave u toothless//10


Explanations:

8-eric sermon his song react

10-I'm sayin my rhymes are too sweet

Drop pussy where u hinding at and u betta noyt be bittin
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alot of weird gay ass punches...

but we will let da voters decide








..yo




Ya punches are all played.Takin dayz to spit cuz your strate wak//
plus i lay out fags,Chances of u takin the W is like ja rule tryna rap//
Go fucking practice, this is what you should be heading for//
Try and spit a punchline that I haven’t said before//
MY rhymes are more siccer then ya moms strech marks//
Im takin this kid to school even before the test starts//
Ya attempt of fittin abuzed punches in failed in ya streched bars//
ya journey’s over- once this carnage hits, I’m carving ribs//
and feeding the rb voters as ya parting gift//
it hardly fits, claim I’m gay- yet mention dick like a hood rat//
leave rap and be a fag… at least thatwut your good at//
I’ll kick it into high gear, kid; I’ll pump the throttle//
I’ll have your flow contained like alcohol that comes in bottles//
you can’t touch this… so ya better give a fuck quick//
when I bust this… I’m goin all out like ya luck is//
u had 4 dayz to drop, but I know ya worried about this//
cause I’m exposing this “boob” like Lil Kim’s outfits//
I outwit… even the sharpest cat, plenty harm in that//
when I’m testing ya cardiac- I’m expecting a heart attack//

since i an't poll vote then i aint really gunna get into detail but do or dies punches were really lame
and to me Paks sfirst line killed ya whole verse

vote PAK

but i aint hatin just my 2 fuckin sense

eXactly uppinnnnnnnnnnnnn.............................
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Do Or Die.. Nice shit but it was too kiddish for ur record. But, It'z alright, I juss think Heat kilt yo stuff.

Vocab: Pak N. Heat
Flow: Pak N. Heat
Wordplay: Both

Overall: Pak N. Heat

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3rd uppin
 

word....Pak took this pretty easy man....Do or Die had a good flow and some nice personals....but Pak had some better punches....u both had pretty equal personals and wordplay....nice battle to read.....but i gotta go with Pak on this...no hate...just a vote....

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peace
4:20

thanks uppin for 3 m more votesssssssssssssss
if possible
honest votes..only
dont bring that dik rydin near meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

flow/do
style/do
struc/do
wp/do
create/do
injoyability/do
meta/do
punch/do

vote do or die
check out ismael sanchez vs 2mindtext with an honest vote homie
>;o)

^^dIK RYDIN U NO I WON THIS BATTLE
dman kid ride his dik........no one
notices.
fagggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg gggg

Finishers

Pac

I outwit… even the sharpest cat, plenty harm in that//
when I’m testing ya cardiac- I’m expecting a heart attack//

Dod

This is my last line of my sick spit so I no ur piss,read my shit don’t say it cause it will leave u toothless//10

Wasnt really feeling this.....

Punches: Pak
Multies: Pak
Wordplay: Pak
Mettas: Tie
flow: Pak
Structure: Tie....Who cares


We can see who won

Vote Pak

uppin
on this shit thanks for da feed back
uppin number 44444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444 444444444444444444444

yo pak won this one and thats all that needs to be said but we will break it down if needbe

wordplay-pak
punches-pak
flow-pak
personals-pak

he took this one easily but no hate

hit this up w/ an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90745

This was alright..
Punches: Pak
Flow: Do
Personals: Pak
Structure: Pak
wordplay: Pak
Overall it was a good battle but Pak took this one, Vote= Pak