Homicide187 VS Take Notez
 

ite 10 bar max
ill spit first...
plz explain votes...

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ite chekk chekk.......

I kno ur gay, i dont needa 'take notez', i saw u "droppin bars" purposely, it wasnt 'misplaced soap', so u better 'pray, hope' that i wouldnt slit a 'gays-throat'/1

u gettin verbally 'messed-up-in-this-verse', 'left-up-in-a-herse', 'left-back-in-the-dirt', like ya momz 'left-u-after-birth', so now u behind, tryin to 'catch-up-n-it-hurts', Avatar lookin like u spilt Ketchup-on-ur-shirt'/2

i got 'chronic-spits', theres no 'toppin-it', cuz its "cause n effect", when i 'drop-a-spit', i 'drop-a-kid', u couldnt beat me if u 'mocked-my-shyt'/3

ill leave u "hangin by strings", call me Japetto, Ur avatar got me wondein if u gothic or ghetto/4

ill rip 'apart-ur-face', leave it as ugly as ur clothes, u like " i got dressed in the 'dark, ok?'", liar, u juss shop at kmart-u-gay, but this is RB, kmarts 'far-away'/5

I spit personals, u juss 'spittin-writtens', takin time away from the 'dicks-u-lickin', u claim ur not gay, but u look up to 'Richard-Simmons'/6

i dont need illity to battle u, so im 'stoopin', u must be 'stupid', actin 'foo-lish' thinkin u can beat me, u cant even spell 'exclusive'/7
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(his aim s/n is Xklussive)

ite.. there it is.. ur up kid

nice drop nigga i'lll vote when ya'll finished
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lol whurr that kid at???????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????

i'll vote when u done, but vote on this link anyone its been open for days n we need votes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89707

Lol...IIght



Im 'Rant-in' ya WACK SHIT with 'Newtons' Of Madness-//-
Quite 'Rancid' wit spews that released to "Layce" Up this Mans Myth-//-
Ur Lacking Talents of "Opus Composures" so stay wit the LOW REP-//-
Ur "Guilty Concioused" with the SN "Homicide"..At Least Ur Admittin To Death!-//-
Im Concluding Early U'll Be Lackin THe "Bar" Wit Votes thatz MEASLY-//-
Im "Reaping" Wit Guns that'll Leave ya Dome "Proned" Where Ya FEET BE!-//-
Ur Attempts Is LIke Me Spittin My Capacity At A "50"% Version-//-
Ya Challenged "Rushed" ya Death Meet the funeral Homes and the "Dirged" Hymns-//-
U Get GUN CLAPS for Ur Tries not Noticin Ya "Chances" Oblique-//-
NIgga Stay WIt the "L's" U'll Have Betta "Luck" To CHALLENGE DEFEAT!!-//-


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ayo.. i got a vote before dis kid even posted... n that aint fair.. i dont want no d/r vote... so can sum1 (a mod) take away one vote from the poll.. thanx

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uppin.... come on folks......... dis is a hott batttle........... don sleep on it.........................

how do you get that pic on your sig and i'll vote?????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????

wtf dude just vote lmaoooo........................................... ...............
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i gotta give this to notes he just came out harder and seemed to want the win more

vocab-Notes
Wordplay-Notes
Struc-Notes
Punches-Homi

Overall-Notes

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^^^laughs at this clown explicit....doesnt know how to vote LOL

breakdown-

flow-deff homicide
punches-deff homicide
wordplay-how the fuck ex gonna say homicide didnt get this haha people man read the verses
creativity-homicide
fun to read-homicide

no hate on other cat though just the truth his verse was hott too

vote-homicide

nice battle but homicide takes this wit better flow punches and way better wordplay............it was a close battle but homicide takes it

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damn..homicide's bars were strtched out of perportion..and his punches wasnt that good...he just had alot of multies..I'll have to go with take notes..his verse was far better..yo notes,,take this battle to the i.r...i smell dickriders

lol 2-2..keep'em coming I feel u on that 1 but i aint gon trip.............................................. ...........................

flow/take
punch/take
sruc/take
wp/take
person/take
mata/take

vote take
holla back me vs 2MINDTEXT

3-2 ion know whatz the winnin vote count but keep'em coming^^^^^^...................................... .......................

well.. poll votes go to 5... first to 5 wins... newayz... still uppin in this shyt... holllllllaaa..................

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^^^^^^ for votes lets keep'em coming.........................
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DAMMMNNNNNNNNNNNNNN DIS BATTLE HOT>>> DONT SLEEPPPP ON IT.......... uppin........................ HOLLLA

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^.....................COME ON YALL.............................................. .............................................

yall if i could vote i would vote Homicide187 he had a betta drop betta flow

aiight hope this feedback heps Peace (v)

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Hmmmm.... MayNe... i DuNNo
iM GoiN WiT HoMiCiDe...CuZz iTs 1-8-7 oN uH uNDeR CoVeR CoP...

NaWw...But GyEaH...MayBe iF i uNDeRsToOD WTF NoTeZ wHuZ SayEN...LOL DuN BaG CuZz i kNoW YALL DuNNo WTF IM SayeN...Ha NE Way....

yeaH I GiVe iT tO HoMoCiDe tHo

Thatz a Bull Shit Vote....lmao u dont know what im sayin...nigga still 3-3................................................. ....................
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ite.. still uppin for votes................. poll votes would be nice................ HOLLLAAAAAAAAA.............

creativity~homi
setup~take
vocab~take
punches~homi
metas~homi
Overall~Homi he got this no doubt if you pass the vocab of notes you can see that he had no punches and homi did so he gets my vote

ite... thanx for not sleepin on dis yall............... but we still need more votes....... so keep em comin........ holla.....

flow-homcide
punchs-homcide
vocab-notez
metas-homcide
opener/closer-homcide
Overall-homcide, da other guy came hard but homcide got him every category...tite btle

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