LM vs 1liner
 

RULES:
10-15 lines
NO d/r or crew votes...etc
Don't care who spits first
No show after check in results in d/q
All votes or comments must be explained

I'm impatient so heres my verse:

With just your age on your profile your just a peice of my imagination/
You answerin my callout thinkin if you beat me you'll attract rb's attention/
That aint gon' happen dawg coz your wack...you don't exist your name shouldnt even be mentioned/
Compared to me you just an old man collectin his pension....you dont know shit bout rap/
You should just sell crack coz you'll make more money from that than you'll ever do from rap/
You dont belong in this game, you'll never get 1liner's put on the map....dawg your plain crap/
I called out for a challenge...whatever happened to that...instead I got a herb/
A herb who couldn't grow in a garden if it was 100% cow turd/
Basically what I'm sayin is you'll never speak a dope word/
Your ryhmes are just as wack as the one's that come from N.E.R.D/
Shit my 11th line already...I cant remember my 3rd, this has gone so quick/
Just like me when you visited my house offerin to suck my dick/
You fuckin gay...I dont let males have a lick on my stick/
Dawg join a boyband then you can take your pick/
That's where you belong...in pop...but realise this...If I ever see you I'm gon' give you a vicious kick/


EXPLAINATION
turd = a British word for shit - Horse shit makes crops grow better

yo look at this CAt bitin off Eminems Diss to benzino

Compared to me you just an old man collectin his pension....you
DOES THIS SOUND FAMILLIAR??????????
dont know shit bout rap/
You should just sell crack coz you'll make more money from that than you'll ever do from rap/

checkin in

only a faggot would post a rhyme thats already been spittin--
than write it on lines like its never been written
ya biter---- a fake ---so blow me / like em said """best beleive you gunna know me ''''
when i'm this close to see you exposed as phony""""
why would you do such a stupid action/
no shit fagot'''''
anybody could make more sellin crack then rappin
expecially since you dream of rappin------
is something that'll happen/
cuz after i push ya stomach out/ i'll rip ya (back in)
just to shut ya mouth/ and leave it cracked again
Finisher-----
this cat plays leap frog while hurdle backs/
and he could never outshine me ----even if her was a diamond polished in turtle wax/



never happen

something that;ll never happen (mistake )-----------------------^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

up up up and away-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

up stop sleepin 11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111 11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111 .................................................. ...........

I aint heard a song with that in so stop tryin to sway votes for fuckin herb

Ok i heard that song to with em dissin w/e the fuck his name is, but shit if he did use that to win..... 1 YOU WERE FUCKIN BITEING OF OF LM'S VERSE YOU FUCKING DUMBFUCK.... I Can't stand biters thats y my vote is goin to LM, and member on er next battles Line... K33p it real cuz.

Peace(\1/)

eh yo hit these up aswell

Yaz vs Nitemarre
Yaz vs junio sixnine

I'm guessin the song which your goin on about is nail in the coffin...just coz you said it's bout benzino. But I aint heard the song yet...I will have by the end of tonite and if I here a line similar to mine I will apologise

LM won this battle handz down............words punches and flow on point by LM...........whereas the other guys wasn't as good

LM's: 8/10
1liner: 5/10

hit this up...................need some serious votes........stop sleepin on this battle

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=90264

Thanx

Yah LM had more in his punches than 1liner...... more agressive and more flow.... and much better structure... my vote is LM

hit this up: Crew Battle me -vs- Token of H.I.V.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90794

Poll your vote please............................................ ...............................

Peace!!!

vote-LM..

it's pretty obvious why.. i read this battle last night.. & again today, so i still come to the same conclusion that, LM won..

Thanks for the comment but a bit more explaintion needed next time.............................................. ......................

WHAT THA FUCK IS GOING ON HERE!!!!!.. this is A Prime Biting Case... Dont Try and say you aint heard that song!!!... jesus it is word for word... and you Maw Fuckaz Is Just gona Let it Slide... Hell Naa... Im Taking this To IR....

How many times do I gotta say I aint heard the song yet. And has anybody noticed the 'best believe you gon' know me' line by 1liner....thats in 'Go to sleep'

Yes but he Quoted!!! and gave eminem tha credit
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Look....You've took it up in I.R and I've gave my side of the story so we just gotta see what happens. I'll accept the warnin so lets drop it now

LM wins for better verse and punches. 1 liner staretd off real tight with that personal about biting. Came strong. Then totally collapsed about 3-4 lines into his verse, started with played hits and bad rhyme scheme. LM's wasn't all that great. Lacking wordplay and humor, but it came steady with the shots and that's what wins this. Please return the favor, thanks. Vote here!

Ok I've finally heard nail in the coffin and my line is similar so I'll Pm a mod and ask for this battle to be closed so I dont get the win and 1liner dont get a loss. It's only fair coz my line was almost exact. I just wanna make it clear that I had no idea bout the line tho...it's a co-incidence which will be mistaken as bitin

I've PM'd chrit askin for this battle to be closed out of fairness. So hopefully it will be done soon. No more votes on this battle please.

Yo Chrit whats goin on dawg.....why aint you closed this yet............................................... ...


Peace!!!

You Know I'm A Mod Also... CLOSED... LOL @ All The Eminem Biters.
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