007 .:vs:. Explict
 

aiight

10 lines max

8 lines min

regular rules, no crew votes etc


you spit first
i'll start keyin my verse when you hav checked in

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aiight check it



yo watch this, as i verbally tear this fresh victim apart,
i tear open the chest, expose the lungs and the heart,

i got a catalystic verse speeds up, pain before it start,
my lines are so sick, leave you lookin yellow, like bart,

and the dopest thing about me is rappers minds i stain,
u minute in this game of rap, size equivilent of a sand grain,

so many levels up even the keyboard cant cheat to reach,
the only way u escape my wrath, is twice 'ctrl+atl+delete',

now i ground the cat so much, crushed bones, look like cocaine,
u wack like lesbians, butch, no pieces no prticipitaion of the game,


aiight spit your shit quick, an no feedin

~1~your a faker don't get your cap peeled when i palm the steel
you claim you have talent but you lack it
actually it's drastic how you full of wackness automatic
fall back you don't want static I stay on top like the attic
~2~you pose no threat but this ass kicking you can have it faggot
cuz your style sucks take my advice and just leave the rhyme
game behind with rhymes like those you bound to meet the
chrome your lyrics like a toilet bowl full of s.hit
~3~you not legit only thing you beating is yo dick
shoot through you to lift your spirit
your rhyme is so so deaf nobody hears it
it's cloudy in the clearness me, i'm fearless
you bitched n sporty,you harder to comprehend than a
marilyn manson recording.


you too soft lemme battle your ghost writer

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who you sayin got a ghost writer....................
me, jus cus i merked your ass dosent mean i have a ghost writer

i got a catalystic verse speeds up, pain before it start,
my lines are so sick, leave you lookin yellow, like bart,

this was a wak bar double but ima still give it to ya
Breakdown]-
punches=007..he threw aight
sustainment=007..also threw in every line
flow=both..i felt x's aswel as 007
metas=007...the attic one by x was wak
mutis=ex
personals=noone
laff factor=007...jus for the bar at the top..was wak but funny
overall=007

both need to elevate a lot but you both got the right idea
Ex bit of advice....try not to let slip sum lines biggin yaself up

E.g fall back you don't want static I stay on top like the attic

nice little meta but....nah...that punch was way off the mark

pzz to both

i respect your vote Brixton......
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can wee get some more votes on this battle............................................ .................................................. ...................

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Votes neeeeeedddeeedd ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

clean ass batttle
i thought strate that explicit one it
even tho u boith came hard......

v-explcit better ppunches an metas.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90218
peep honestly

flow/ex
style/ex
punchline/ex
vocab/ex
multi/ex
meat/ex


vote/ex
check my battle out dogg
me vs 2mindtext

uppin for more votes honest ones...............
isamel you should be banned for being stupid...........

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this battle was close..

Flow: Tied
Punchs: 007 edged it
Metas: Tied
Structure: 007
Enjoyment: Tied

Vote: 007

as i said this a was a close battle...Ex just need sto sort out his structure n rhyme scheme...would have been alot easier to read...007 gets the battle tho...

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Wack Battle
Creativty~Ex
Setup~7
Metas~no1
Punches~7
Overall~7 he came nicer dunno both needed to elevate on this verse wack so hollaz

aiight lets get sum more votes............................. uppin............................................. ...

my 4th timne uppin still looking for votes............................................. ..................

My vote goes to double o seven for the lack of structure on the other dudes posts, Double o also had venom in every line, too much filler in the other rap

Vote on my shit now I voted on yours.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90018
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aight i hit this battle with a fair vote so can both ya'll hit the ones in ma sig...be much appreciated......................or i'll jus keep buggin ya..lol

Punches* 007
Flow*Tied
Metas*007
Enjoyment*Tied
Structure*007

Vote: 007
i cant vote 4 plz return tha honest favor
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...8007#post898007

gotta break it down to explain

flow-007
metas-explicit had more
punches-explicit
originality-ex
vocab-007

The verses need to elevate really......................check out mine...

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=90414

aiight y'all uppin for the last 1 or 3 votes............................................. ...............

punchs-explicit
metas-tied
flow-007
vocab-007
kinda soft bttle...but 007 took it

Return da favor...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2