1liner Vs. Tonya~Montana (ROund 2)
 

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yo the last battle i admit didn't even spit/ -but-for a chick wit tits---
you got the biggest dick i've ever seen on a bitch
So fuck you and your respect/ i wanna leave you like your pussy--
sufferin from serious neglect/ reject ya hopes of ever been dope
your only chance is to sniff coke threw ya busted nose
Fuckin with me like my threats are fuckin joke/
i want you to here me when i'm cummin / BITCH
i hope you fuckin choke/ on this dick
i wanna make you die/ and leave ya all ya fuckin bones broke
and leave this site suprised like you commited suicide with no note
fuck (texts)(cuz they aint blastin at you)
i got nines for that/
grab a mic
so id die--- laughin at you-------- tryin to rap
I wanna leave you dead with to stand on
and leave ya mouth red-- when i stuff it with a used tampon

with nothin to stand on^^^^^^^^^^^^^ mistake
why come you can't edit shit here.............................................. ...............................................

this bitch is DQED fuck this shit
i always spit first
so DQ this hoe .................................................. .................................................. .................................................

dqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdqdq dqdqd
i said 15 min. hoe its been 20
you so goos u should be able to desroy me in 5
it took me 9 minutes to post this wuz the mystery

yo yo yo!!
 

you only have 1 LINER of Pak'N'Heat~
like small DICKS VEGETARIANS between ya Legs
you Lack MEAT~

I'll SHOWER you with Razor Blades like Preparin ya
BLOOD BATH~
I grab the Mic and leave you SIDE STEPPIN like a
MUD PATH~

you gettin SCHOOL in our 2nd battle and to prove you
SOPHMORE{Soft more}~
i'ma leave you ASS-Out like Homeless WHORE'S-Out-Doors~

my rhymes like Steriods that'll deeply ruin ya Physical~
fuck wack you Miserable, you BLOW in more Spots than
Missles do~

Scribble CORNEA on ya SHOES dats right WATCH-ya-STEP~
REPRESENT, nah you feel RESENT cause last battle Cost-ya-REP~:eek:

put an X on your '1LINERS' cause thats the BOMBSITE~
now you FUCKED cause you just got DROP like Panties
on PROM NITE~


.......I'M OUT IF YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND SHIT DON'T VOTE!!!!

wtf??
 

I'M so goos <<{fuck is that} shoud be able to desroy<<{fuck is that}:confused: :p

Tonya fukkin killed this kid in this battle punches, flow, everythin man this wasnt even a contest 1liner u might not wanna do another rematch kid u got merked
-KeMy$t

put an X on your '1LINERS' cause thats the BOMBSITE~
now you FUCKED cause you just got DROP like Panties
on PROM NITE~
^^^^ PLAYED!!!!

the opener was good though
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u need more multis Tonya~Montana!

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1liner


So fuck you and your respect/ i wanna leave you like your pussy--
sufferin from serious neglect/ ^ OWCHHHHHH

/<--------- get ride of those and work on your flow and structure..


vote- tonya

yea it was played but i'm sleepy as hell....had to throw sumtin in there!!...........................

thx for showin luv and votin yall!!!

hah hah good stuff tonya...........................


people drop an honest vote >>>>>>.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...light=executive

this shit was DQED so dont even fuckin vote cuz ya vote aint wanted
what the fuck is the point of postin guidlines if they aint ever fuckin met

dq'ed for what...c'mon quit bitchin@1liner...whats da diff...
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..........................you just coulda jacked off with in those 5 min..

its the fact of a supposed VET takin 25 min on a 15 min time limit
and me spittin in the correct time limit shit if i took 25 minutes
i sure hope i could beat someone who took 9

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90745

yo i vote earlier hit this up w/ an honest vote thanx

at first you said 20..now 25.. make up ya mind !!
ha ha thats why i don't like rematches!!!

anywayz........uppin for votes!!

yo tonya u forgot to poll vote on my battle here is the link again
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90745

uppin for more votes....show some luv and check
our battle out..................
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...........................vote hon...

Very elementary rhyme by 1liner and very good, funny verse by Tonya for the win. She didn't bring alot of punches, more of what's gonna happen. But the punches she did throw connected well. I liked the missles line and the closer was very tight as well. Tonya for the punches, wordplay, and flow. Please return the favor, thanks. Vote here!

iight yall uppin for last few votes ......
show a lil luv yall...............
show some honest votes.......................

lol tonya murked you son with the punches she came hot and nice metas had me lmao nice tonya other dude needs to elevate seriosuly~1

dun't think i'm allowed to vote but tonya got this obviously even though 1 liner kinda made me laugh a little tonya had the harder punches and spit.

weak battle....but easy win for tonya....the sophmore line was pretty nice, only line in this battle that I liked.....

punches-tonya
flow-tonya
wordplay-.....blah.....
structure-1liner
multis, metas, etc-blah....blah....blah...
Vote=tonya